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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#741

its awesome guyz...

perfect update...i too wish d3 mein bhi kuch aisa ho...i dun want that chaos...it bugs me...😡

bt thank god u guyz came up with something so natural n kool...

its one of my fav kriyansh ff...coz its too realistic.😃

i can any time die out of laugheter after reading ur update..😆..😆

its so funny...earlier people ignoring rey n den uske hi ghar ko fish market bana dia...🤣

d3 gang se aur expect b kya kar sakte hai...

loved vicky n nil portion dy r none other dan tom n jerry😆😆😆

n nil se khud to koi ladki pat ti nahi sabki love story me kabab mein haddi ban jaata hai🤣🤣🤣🤣

simmi ko raaz bhi khol dia nil ne by catchg her red handed...

kriyaansh scene was awesome blossom...

hayeee dono kitne cute hai...☺️☺️

superb update guyz.👏...keep up the gud work👍🏼

n m telling u apne updates sat n sunday k liye reserve kar lo so dat we can get d3 on weekends too😃😃

HAPPY BIRTHDAY PIYU 🥳🥳

Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#742

awsummm part rly enjoy it...nilesh was super duper cute...his funny harkate was sooo cute dat i cnt stop lauging 🤣...here also bechara rey wid all dat stuff of KRIYAM KRIYAM n KRIYAM...kisi din sach mai ye nilesh rey ke hatho marega... hahahaha 🤣

n swaron scene is sooo cute sweet...sharon swayam ke baho mai...haye!!! 😳

n our KRIYAANSH...awww dey r super duper cute...n rey shirtless wowww 😳...n dere rey's rum scene was shooo sweet 😊

hope aisa hi hoga D3 mai grp study tym...no more troubles we want n hope rey kriya ko mana le...

n last dis part was sooo funny n romantic tooo...thnx MICKn FARAH for such cute update n pm too...n jst waiting 4 nxt...post it soon 😊

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nebu

@nebu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Awesome part Mick...I loved it😊.

🥳 HApPy BiRtHDaY PiYu

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anamika143..

@anamika143..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#744

ohooo...
FABULOUS...MiFaBi...
i cant stop aww...ing...
kriyaansh kitchen scene...me lost!!!!!😳
viha + nilesh scene...me ROFLing🤣
sandwiches fr babu...🤣
n pillow fites...i luv pillow fights!!!!!!!
swaron moment ws also cute...

in short u ppl covered everything!!!!!!

HAPPY B'DAY PIYU!!!!!

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katty1

@katty1

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

HAPPY BITHDAY PIYU...GOD BLESS U.....

OMG awsum update just luv it...thanx 4 the pm...

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binx-D3

@binx-D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: anamika143
ohooo...
FABULOUS...MiFaBi...
i cant stop aww...ing...
kriyaansh kitchen scene...me lost!!!!!😳
viha + nilesh scene...me ROFLing🤣
sandwiches fr babu...🤣
n pillow fites...i luv pillow fights!!!!!!!
swaron moment ws also cute...

in short u ppl covered everything!!!!!!

HAPPY B'DAY PIYU!!!!!

MiFaBi 🤣 🤣

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

wow... gr8 job heartbeat...

loved dat pillow fight.. swaron hawaa hawaa nd especially kitchen wla part (bini.. 😛 😆)..

hahaha...lolz... mast update tha yar... i wish.. real m ye sb b aaye bt... pta ni ye sb real m kab hoga... 😒

chlo.. koi ni... real mei na sahi to yai pe sai... 😆

nd piyu... wishin u many many happy returns of d day dear... may god give u all the happiness of the world... tkcre... hav a blastt... njoy... 😊

i knw these r wedding cakes bt.. ye itne tasty lag re the ki mjhse resist he ni hue... 😆 😉 🤣 🤣

Happy Birthday Sweety... Love u... ❤️

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#748

p.s p.s... 1 more ques 4 bini...

when r u gonna update ur part madm...???? v r waitin 4 dat 2...

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binx-D3

@binx-D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: akku16
p.s p.s... 1 more ques 4 bini...

when r u gonna update ur part madm...???? v r waitin 4 dat 2...

how did you now i wrote the kitchen scene akanksha?? 😲 ...ill try and update as soon as i can...i havent been keeping well for the last few days and i have exams coming up soon...im really sorry to disappoint you

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farah sharmin

@sweetshine

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#750

HEY GUYS THNKU SOOO MUCH FOR THE AWESUMMM COMMENTS😳🤗...SOOO GLAD U GUYS LYKD IT 😳😃

AND YESS SPECIAL THANKS TO BINI FOR WRITING WITH US SHE IS JUS AH-MAZING WRITER😳👏...*HUGS* BINI THNKU SOO MUCH FOR HELPING US🤗...AND YESS HAD LODS OF FUN WRITING DESE UPDATES WID MICK AND BINI😃😆

SORRY GUYS WAS SOO BUSY CUDNT REPLY TO ALL OF UR PAST POSTS😛😆BUT THNKU SOO MUCH GUYS FOR MY BDAY WISHES IT REALLY MEANT A LOT 🤗🤗AND THNKU FOR THE AWSUM COMMENTS IT REALLY ENCOURAGES US TO WRITE BETTER😳😃

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome part 👏it was really very funny 🤣
loved every thing about this part❤️
every on ignored rey and entered his house and rey shuts door on krias face🤣
simmi reading mazine🤣(what else you can expect from her)
nilesh back with his kriyam talks in front of rey🤣🤣🤣bechara rey😆
vicky giving ggyan to swayam and neha got angry with him 🤣🤣
kriyansh kitchen scene was damm HOT😳 rey removed his shirt hayeee😍😍 ("lost in reys hotness")😳😳
and the pillow fight it was awesome and the most funniest part🤣
nilesh and vicky are tooo funny🤣
and the kriyansh cofee scene hayeee😍 its tooo cute
loved it very much❤️
cvs should definitely read this part they should learn from this👍🏼
three of you are awesome writers👏
enjoyed allot reading your ff😃
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part😍

HAPPY BIRTHDAY PIYU🥳

AWWW THNK U SOOO MUCH CHERRY 😳SOO GLAD U ENJOYED AND LOVED IT SOO MUCH😃

YES THE PILLOW FIGHT WAS JUS THE BES PART🤣...LUV D WAY BINI WROTE IT😳

HEHEHE HOPE THE CV'S DO GIVE US SUMTHING LIKE THIS FULL TYM MASTI SHASTI 😃😆😆

Originally posted by: 21Neha21
amazing update..i died laughng..
d pillow fight was so fuunyyy...n kriyansh scene..omg..!!!
it was so cute n romantic..loved it...
waitng for d next update..

n wishing piyu a very very hapy b'day..she is d best vm maker...i just love her work..god bles her..

HEHE AWWW THNK U SOO MUCH SOO GLAD U LYKD IT😳😃...YESS WILL UPDATE SOON THE NEXT PART😃

Originally posted by: namylovkriyansh
i was just laughing like anything during dt pillow fight and feathers all over..what an imagination guys...and kriyansh kitchen part was also superb...i hope we get sumthing just lyk this on monday...it was awesome...👏

AWWW THNKU SOOO MUCH NAMY SOO GLAD U ENJOYED😳😃

Originally posted by: KriaReyansh
absolutely loved this part !!!!
it was sooo cute!!
loved loved loved the kriyansh parts.
they are just so damn sweett!!!
continue soon :)

THNKS SOO GLAD U LUVD IT😳😃

Originally posted by: crazysky
it was awesome n lovely
i thought i watching d3...

THNKU SOO MUCH😳😃

Originally posted by: lovely7010
its the best part till now...awesome...i was laughing🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣like hell during the pillow fight...n the kriyaansh part was sooo amazing...luved this part...

HEHEHE THNKU SOOO MUCH SOOO GLAD U ENJOYED IT A LOT😳😃

Originally posted by: magical_mania
its awesome guyz...
perfect update...i too wish d3 mein bhi kuch aisa ho...i dun want that chaos...it bugs me...😡
bt thank god u guyz came up with something so natural n kool...
its one of my fav kriyansh ff...coz its too realistic.😃
i can any time die out of laugheter after reading ur update..😆..😆
its so funny...earlier people ignoring rey n den uske hi ghar ko fish market bana dia...🤣
d3 gang se aur expect b kya kar sakte hai...
loved vicky n nil portion dy r none other dan tom n jerry😆😆😆
n nil se khud to koi ladki pat ti nahi sabki love story me kabab mein haddi ban jaata hai🤣🤣🤣🤣
simmi ko raaz bhi khol dia nil ne by catchg her red handed...
kriyaansh scene was awesome blossom...
hayeee dono kitne cute hai...☺️☺️
superb update guyz.👏...keep up the gud work👍🏼
n m telling u apne updates sat n sunday k liye reserve kar lo so dat we can get d3 on weekends too😃😃

MANIA 🤗AWWW THNKU SOOO MUCH FOR THE AH-MAZING LAMBA COMMENT😳😆 HEHEHE...AWWW THAT IS SUCH AN AWSUM COMMENT SERIUSLY MOTIVATES US TO WRITE BETTER 😳😃AND YESS WILL TRY TO KEEP THE UPDATES DURING WEEKENDS HEHEHEHE😆😆...SOO GLAD U LUVD IT😃

Originally posted by: smshaffy-mehta
awsummm part rly enjoy it...nilesh was super duper cute...his funny harkate was sooo cute dat i cnt stop lauging 🤣...here also bechara rey wid all dat stuff of KRIYAM KRIYAM n KRIYAM...kisi din sach mai ye nilesh rey ke hatho marega... hahahaha 🤣

n swaron scene is sooo cute sweet...sharon swayam ke baho mai...haye!!! 😳

n our KRIYAANSH...awww dey r super duper cute...n rey shirtless wowww 😳...n dere rey's rum scene was shooo sweet 😊

hope aisa hi hoga D3 mai grp study tym...no more troubles we want n hope rey kriya ko mana le...

n last dis part was sooo funny n romantic tooo...thnx MICKn FARAH for such cute update n pm too...n jst waiting 4 nxt...post it soon 😊

HAHAHA YESS NIL TOU REY AUR VICKY KE HATTHO ZARUR MAREGA🤣🤣

YEAH HOPE WE GET SUMTHING BETTER THEN THIS ON THE SHOW AND YEAH HOPE KRIA MAAN JAAYE😳😆

THNKU SOOO MUCH FOR THE AWESUM COMMENT SOO GLAD U ENJOYED IT WILL UPDATE SOON😳😃

Originally posted by: anamika143
ohooo...
FABULOUS...MiFaBi...
i cant stop aww...ing...
kriyaansh kitchen scene...me lost!!!!!😳
viha + nilesh scene...me ROFLing🤣
sandwiches fr babu...🤣
n pillow fites...i luv pillow fights!!!!!!!
swaron moment ws also cute...

in short u ppl covered everything!!!!!!

HAHAHAHA MiFaBi HAHAHAHA I LYK DAT😳🤣🤣SOUNDS LYK A MAFIA GANG🤣🤣

AWWW THNKU SOOO MUCH FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT SOOO GLAD U LYKD IT HEHEHE😳😆

AND LASTLY HAPPIIIEEE BURRDAAAY TO PIYU AGAIN HEHEHE😳😆