HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ] - Page 77

Originally posted by: medha16

hey...i read ur FF at nite only...it was so addictive that i didnt realize i was awake till 3.30 at nite reading it...u guys r doing a better job at it than the creatives,trust me...they shud learn from u...it was as if I was reading a fictional novel...mick n farah u guys r doing an amazing job at it...u write so well...u shud definitely take up creative writing if ur not into it already...i specially loved the kajen track...it was quite a surprise n pleasing to at least read ffs on them as our hopes of a dmg3 has completely dashed after star ones revamp...i miss them a lot n all the fire escape scenes n druk jenny reminded of the gud old times of my all time favourite show dmg...kriyaansh track is going superb...i so loved the date n d kitchen scenes n also the lil kiss on the fire escape which she gave rey at the beginning...the drunk girls part was hilarious!actually hilariously romantic!!!!n nil vickys madness had me in splits...i cud visualise every single action of theirs...n also the cute babu kagu romance getting on the louisans nerves...that was so funny...i also loved swarons track as here we get to see sharon finally slipping out of that self control n we get to see a lovesruck sharon without any facade staring away at his night in shining armour...i dont know how i missed ur FF for so long,its truly one of the best i have read till date...n continue the great work ahead!!!i sincerely hope that palki reads this n takes a cue from here as their story is now going nowhere...they surely need some better ideas...waiting eagerly 4 ur next update...pls add me to ur pm list as i really wud like to read more from u both!

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey dear i wanted to ask u if u pm every1 regarding the update? 😕 Actually i don't come to know when u update it, i.
Anyways coming to recent update
read both the parts of awesome and sweet update 👏
KriYansh scene was so sweet, hot and lovely 😳 These guys are just hillarious i mean Nil and Vicky both r too naughty uper se when Nil hit Neha Vicky got more irritated 😆 Every1 their was romancing SwaRon too 😉
Love the concept of shirtless Rey and the way Kria made Rey normal 😍
Update soon 😊

Originally posted by: medha16

hey...i read ur FF at nite only...it was so addictive that i didnt realize i was awake till 3.30 at nite reading it...u guys r doing a better job at it than the creatives,trust me...they shud learn from u...it was as if I was reading a fictional novel...mick n farah u guys r doing an amazing job at it...u write so well...u shud definitely take up creative writing if ur not into it already...i specially loved the kajen track...it was quite a surprise n pleasing to at least read ffs on them as our hopes of a dmg3 has completely dashed after star ones revamp...i miss them a lot n all the fire escape scenes n druk jenny reminded of the gud old times of my all time favourite show dmg...kriyaansh track is going superb...i so loved the date n d kitchen scenes n also the lil kiss on the fire escape which she gave rey at the beginning...the drunk girls part was hilarious!actually hilariously romantic!!!!n nil vickys madness had me in splits...i cud visualise every single action of theirs...n also the cute babu kagu romance getting on the louisans nerves...that was so funny...i also loved swarons track as here we get to see sharon finally slipping out of that self control n we get to see a lovesruck sharon without any facade staring away at his night in shining armour...i dont know how i missed ur FF for so long,its truly one of the best i have read till date...n continue the great work ahead!!!i sincerely hope that palki reads this n takes a cue from here as their story is now going nowhere...they surely need some better ideas...waiting eagerly 4 ur next update...pls add me to ur pm list as i really wud like to read more from u both!

Originally posted by: akku16

HEARTBEAT..

its my humble request 2 u all.. dat plzz... dnt close Heartbeat... plz...

i knw evry1's quite upset wid Shakti's decision...bt... common guys...dats xactly wat lyf is... twists nd turns to chlte rahenge yar... 😊

D3 mei ab kya hone wala hai... ye to only god knows... bt D3 aane se pehle b to humari lives chlti thi na... lyf ruk to nai gyi thi... 😒

pta nai D3 mei ab kya hoga aagey... bt yha... yha se to shakti not goin na... yha par to v can giv a happy endin 2 ur story couldnt we...??? 😊 😉

kya pata.. kriya apni trainin puri karke vapas aa jaaye... nd Kriyaansh will rock again...!!! 😃

wat say Heartbeat...????

well... m to yahi kahungi ki dnt give up... plzzz...

Mick.. Farah.. Bini...i request u guys yar... plzzz...