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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: 100littledevils
omg u updated !!! Sorry terko toh pata hain na main vacation pe thi!!! Awesome part part as usual guys!! awww teri exams hain.. dec18 tak baap re.. !!! weel we can surely wait yaar!!! tu aaram se padh!!! faad de !! lol.. All th best mick!!
Can't wait for next part !!! pm me when u update!!! 😊

Haila, u gt nothing to say abt the dance party??

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farah sharmin

@sweetshine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

HELLO PPL ok VERY SORRY for NOT REPLYING TO ALL of UR COMMENTS EARLIER 😛but here i'm FINALLY REPLYING TO ALL D LOVELY COMMENTS😳😆...u guys r truly AMAZING...LUV u all for such LOVELY COMMENTS🤗

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi
res ! :D

😳aww thnx for res but waiting still😆😆

Originally posted by: 100littledevils
OMg u r giving us diwali gift yaya!!!

*Res*
plzz mick post fast... have to sleep 😳

😆😆Piyuuu res karke kaha chali gyaii😆waiting😆

Originally posted by: sweetapple2995
AHHH OMG THAT WAS SOOO SEXY I CAN'T EVEN BREAK DOWN HOW MUCH I ENJOYEDDD THAT TOOO GOOD LOVED IT YAAR I WAS AT THE END AND IT STOPPED...I CAN'T WAIT TIL THE NXT UPDATE AND YAAR AGAR AISA UPDATE KAROGE THO AAP 2 MONTHS LAGA SAKTA HO!!! 😃

SHRUTIII thnk u sooo much😳😃yes dec for sure we will cum bak wid d update😃

Originally posted by: deepa101
I luvved it!!! Please update asap 😃

THNX glad u LUVD it...will update soon😃😳

Originally posted by: nams_love_d3
OMG OMG OMG OMG i have no words!!!! rey and kria DANCED ???? i wish issi tarah d3 mein b hojaye ek dance!! BAILAMOS IS MY FAVVV SOOONG I LOVE IT!!! ty for selecting it!! and ofcourzz DDLJ ki 'zara sa joom loon mein" ahwww that was sweetest!!!!! rey and kria conver on pool side! mindblowing!!! thier fight for juice thn falling on nil se face heheheheehee it alwzz happns wid nil BALI KA BAKRA!!! 😆
and Shots wala tho awsum tha!! 😉
and ya i was really imagining kriyaansh pool side scene!!!😍 it mite happn in d3 as its nt let less than fiction wat we can watch in tv serials!!! awsum writters u r!! i wish i could write like u both😔
ASWUM AWSUM LOVEEED IT!!!! 🤗
want th nxt update asap!! 😛

awww nams thnk u soo much for d lovely comment 🤗soo happy u luvd it.😃...lolz yes all thnx to KUMJOO(Preety) for d Bailamos song😳...nd yes dun say dat u r such an AWSUM writer really😃😳

nd yes will update it in dec😃

Originally posted by: kajen
Haila its bahut bada lol

exam k bad last pe comment n isko pdhungi
kapeesh
but ya last part me kajen ko rakh k dil jeet liya tum logo ne mera

😆😆i knw likhte likhte pata nahi chala itna lamba hogaya😆nd yes xam ke baad de dena comment😃😆

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3
res!!
ITNAAA LAMBA UPD8 READ KARNE KE BAAD, I NEED A BREAK!
so, milte hain break ke baad!
*edit*
OMG OMG OMG!!!!
FARAH N MICK! tum log ITNA BADA upd8 KAISE LIKH LETE HO YAAR?
Meri aur appu ki toh thodha-sa hi likhne main hi jaan chali jati hain!😆
nywys, cmg 2 ur upd8!
L-O-V-E-D ur PARTY part!
kriya drunk n kriyaansg hug!!!
awww! sooo cute!!!
pl upd8 MORE!!!!!
n pm me the nxt part!

😆😆tania kitne id's bana kar rakhe hai pehle ye batao itne saare id's sambhal thi kaise ho😆😆awww thnku sooo much soo glad u LUVD it🤗...nd yaar tum aur appu bhi kitna acha likhte ho u guys ROCK😃😳

Originally posted by: kriyansh117
HAYYEEE , MAR DALA Yaar 😃, iTNA kRiYanshlicious Upd8t dooge toh hum toh marr hi jayenge naa😍 !!!! BTW AWESOME YAAR 👏, Mein toh kho hi gayi thi😍 , esp. KriYansh ka dance aur pool wala scene❤️ , aUR WOH HUG , AWWW , n NiCky ws DARN funny as uususal(during d colour theme announcemnt , jab NiCky wer close 2 each other , i ws like🤣)) , Just FABULOUS !!!! 👍🏼

awww MAHII thnk u soo much🤗...soo happy u luvd it😳 nd it killed u😆😆😛

Edited by sweetshine - 13 years ago

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farah sharmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: crazysky
love this ff n ur hardwork is reflected through ff. it was awesome really love it . every scenes r well carved ...
its just freakking. awesome... love it

AWWW chetna THNK U sooo much😳😃...luv ur comments😳...nd d SMILEY is shooo CUTE😳😃

Originally posted by: kriyanshfan
OMG MIKAH !!!!! M SPEECHLESS
AB SAMAJHA TUM DONO KAUNSI KHICHDI PAKA RAHE THE FB PE 😆

MAINE TOH KUCH AUR HI SAMAJHA THA !!!!

COMMENTS BAAD MEIN DETI HUN !!!!

HAHAHAHA KAISE NAHI SAMJHEGI KUCH AUR...DOUBLE MEANING QUEEN jo hai🤣🤣

awww sooo HAPPY u lykd it😳...waise bhi u and aarti have already raised me on channe ke jhad😆😆😳

Originally posted by: Isshh
Mick not fair dude
end at dis point
dis is really unfair dats so mean
i want too read d next part...😔

awww shoo shorry for ending at such a critical pt😛...but seriusly next update for sure will make u happy hopefully😳😃...will update soon in dec😃

Originally posted by: Isshh
aisi jagah pe end kyu kia...?????????

post d recent 1 as soon as u can...

akanksha (ishh's sis)

akanksha yes will post it soon sorry but have been busy nd plus Mick has exams but will update soon in dec😃

Originally posted by: misslaugheasily
ye hui na baat! 😃
issi tarha lammmbi lammmbi updates dia karo...
the party was amazing! bechari ladkiyon ka prank unpar hi bhaari pad gaya..😆
kriya + shots??? 😲😲🤢
and baaki sab ke expressions...they were sooo real!
" {smart guy}" ???? 🤣🤣
fabulous update!! 👏
but ending mere style ki thi...
badla?
ab suspense se maar daalo ge kya?
jaldi next update chahye!!

amber awww thnk u sooo much sooo glad u lykd it😃😳...hahahah yes ending lyk urs😆😆no no no badla bas dimaag ki batti gul hogayi thi writing such a lamba update😛😆will update soon in dec😃

Originally posted by: HPmaniac
Yay! Update,finally!!! It was definitely worth the wait guys!
Ok first, I loved the description of the clothes that each of the girls were wearing, it was exactly what the D3 girls wud wear for a party
(On the other side Swayam looked at Rey who was smiling as if he won a prize)😆😆😆
So cute, Nilesh asked Simmi directly which color she was going to wear!! And Loved the little BharKa part!
N: Neha tou luving the place..

V: mujhe kab luv karogi
🤣

The game part is fun,esp ViHa+Nil 😆and this part:

S: Rey music jab band ho jaye tou mujhe pakar lena...

R: kyun tujhe kyun pakru mai??🤣

S: wo suna nahi tune'.two people will win dis game'.two special people...

R: abbey oye tu kaunsa special hai..🤣

S: acha toh Kria hai???

And the salsa performance!!!! Hayeee.I wish this wud really happen on the show!!! I'm dying to see something like this! And the song.I love it and it's absolutely perfect for KriYaansh!
eh any gay couples here(Nil and Vicky were standing beside each other who moved miles apart as Nik mentioned about gay couple)
🤣
Typical NiCky!!!!!
And Neha!!! Lol, it wud've been fun if she had actually tried to ask RDX for a dance!!
Poor Simmi, finally she had to ask Nilesh for a dance,but it's ok, at least they finally reached the dance floor!!
A: Rinni (he said putting out his hand)

(Rinni did not wait for him to ask and took his hand)

Awww, that's soo sweet!😊😊😊
Rinni: Jenny maam ke saath in ladko ko bhi drinks deni chahiye.sabak sikhane ke liye...

Si: Rinni (all were staring at Rinni)tune pehli baar kuch samajhdari ki baat ki (every1 agreed with Simmi)

Oh God! In logon ke mind blowing ideas! And they always fall into their own trap!!
ViHa are super cute and Kriyaansh fight over the drink! Poor Nil.
Aww, so cute Kriya, drinking tequila shots
But seriosuly, how stupid can the girls get? Khud unhone hi drinks bheja tha ladkon ke liye and they drank it???🤣 But ok,iska result bohut accha hai!!
Poor Jenny though.now I'm curious, kya hua tha unke beech???? (has this happened in DMG too?)
Kria and Sharon hugging?????? I wish yeh sach mein hota guys!!!! 1^st toh I wud be in a shock! Then I wud just keep laughing on and on!!! This part is so amazingly cute!!! Awww'.
Haha,Reyam have no idea! "Bichre hue behen".🤣😆😆
And the KriYaansh part after that...wow... mean, where do I even start??? I loved this whole Kriyaansh part!!!!! It was cute and romantic and just really, really good! But I can't believe u stopped it there!!! Torture!!!
Waise, if u don't already know by the lenght of this post, let me just say it here...I absolutely LOVE the update!!!!

When r u'll going to update next??????? Jaldi se PLEEEASE!!!!
coz diwali holidays r over, kal se cllg..and no D3 for 3 days...so I really need to look forward for something!!! so please update soon!

HAILA 😲😆Sarah lamba update ke liye lamba comment 😆awww luv ur comment yaar its awsum😳😃sooo glad u luvd everything😃😳...yes hope we get to c a salsa performance of Kriyansh wud luv nd diee to watch it😳😆

lolz girls r sumtyms dumb nd dey tend to fall into deir own traps especially D3 girls😆😆but d result is always gud so we dun mind😳😆

nd abt Jenny ahem ahem well no its nthing frm DMG but yes dere is an interesting past😉

nd Bichre Hue Behen ke HUG tou zaroor milega nd sab ka reaction same hi hoga🤣

awww sorry for d torture to wait...but reallly it was jus becuming too long😆but dun worry next part for sure will cum soon in dec...hope u will be free to read den😃😳

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farah sharmin

@sweetshine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: KriyanshSwaron9
Amazing loved it!! Plzz update soon

thnk u NISHNA😳...sooo glad u LUVD it😃...will update sooon😳

Originally posted by: monaya24
the latest update was so good. it was magical imagining kriyansh like this.😍
lamba tha toh padhne mein time to laga beech mein thoda irritating laga ki khatm hi nhi ho rha tha(sorry 4 that)😆 but in the end it paid off.
kriyansh scene was so beatifully presented. just LOVED IT❤️
COMMENDABLE👍🏼
HATS OFF👏
it totally rocked⭐️

waiting for more impatiently

awww thnku soo much sooo happy u luvd it😳😃hahahah i knw bohot lamba hogaya u knw me nd Mick always decide b4 writing lets make it short but pata nahi kya dushmani hai humse humari fingers ki it dus not stop typing🤣...but seriusly thnku soo much for having d patience to read such a long update means a lot😳😃

Originally posted by: kumjoo
HELLO HELLO !!!

I READ IT ...FINALLY !! and COMMENT Karti hun ..abhi ruk jao ...Sabar karo Sabar karo ./...

AND AND AND

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING THIS PART TO ME ...😳
I am Already Awwwing ...And tumko toh maloom hi hai ...Jab mera Awww...suru hota hai to Band hone ka naam nahi leta...😆

Now, before I start awwwinnnggg more ...THE UPDATE IS SUPER DUPER HIT BLOCKBUSTER ...

I will be Back after the intermission ... Thoda POPCORN and DIET COKE khake aa jaun 😉

awww Preety i knw our awww sessions never stop😆😆nd now i cnt stop awwwing at ur awww😆😳...nd yes will comment more on ur lamba comment😃😆

Originally posted by: aashima.jindal
it was so gud why did u stop it i was feeling lost in this story completely.
pls update the next part soon.how can anyone wrte so wonderfully for two wonderful persons . kriyaansh was superb .swaron was also gud but my fav jodi is kriyaansh so write more for them .keep writing such wonderful parts in future

awww thnk u sooo much soo happy u lykd it😃😳...nd yes will update soon wid a lot of kriyansh😳

Originally posted by: ShagufElina
U guys r truely lovable the way u write its awsome nd catchy
i liked ur ff
to b honest i read frm part 8
i loved it yaar
mujhe itna acchha laga i toh waiting fr next part
even part 10 was superbly described

thnku sooo much and sooo happy u luvd it😃😳will update soon in dec😃

Originally posted by: Angel56
micky and farah guys ur awesum u really write it like we r watching it on tv...really i cud imagine all the things in my mind thank u for such a lovely update

awww thnk u sooo much Angel 😳sooo happy to knw u lykd it and cud imagine it all😃😳

Originally posted by: lov_in_d_air
so so cute and sweet...
esply d endin part..."kaun main.."..."nahi ramaira"😊❤️

thnk u soo much😃😳

Originally posted by: ashree45
okay, this is freaking amazing!!!!! it's sooo goood! and so funny!(: i could picture the WHOLE party scene in my head!!!!! i loved it sooo much(: nice job(: !!!!!!!!!!!

awww ahree thnk u soo much😃😳..sooo glad u luvd it😳

Originally posted by: kriyansh18
Aww love dis.. next part kb milega..? cnt wait

thnku sooo much soo happy u luvd it😳...will update soon in dec😃😳

Originally posted by: poojadworld
hayeee😳suprb lyk update👏👍🏼amazing partyyy🥳maza aa gya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n plz plz plz jaldi update karo na plzzz

thnku sooo much pooja😃...sooo glad u lykd it😳...nd yes will update soon by dec😃

Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311
awesome...read all ur posts again today...and i really got the goosebumps... :)
update soon... :Dwill be waiting fr it... :)
Thanks mick and farah!! :)

Rishita thnk u sooo much😃😳...sooo glad u lykd it😳...will update soon😃

Originally posted by: dildostiidancee
COMMENTS...?? COMMENTS...??? SPEECHLESS KARKE BOLTE HO COMMENTS DO...!!!!

hayeee...!!!! maar dala...alah...maar dala...!!!!!!!

all the couples...everyone...sab bohot bohot bohot acha tha...!!!! i cant tell u sooo much i enjoyed reading it...!!!!!! it was alll osssooommm..!!!!!!!

u rock guys...!!!!!!

-Saumya

aww Saumya thnk u sooo much😳...sooo glad u enjoyed it😃😳

Originally posted by: shonabhardwaj
awesome kriyaansh scene lovely mick...😍

Originally posted by: harshitagangwan
Wow! Fabulous wat a party mick n farah grt job do update it soon..:-):-):-):-)

Originally posted by: Sweetheart17
IT WAS SIMPLY AWESOME GUYS...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GR8 JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PM ME NEXT TIME YOU UPDATE PLZ...

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
~~ Mick N Farah ~~ you guys r awesome writers
um a new reader enjoyed reading .loads of love to u guys

Lekha

THNK U SOOO MUCH guys🤗...soo glad u all loved it😳...nd yes will update sooon😃

Edited by sweetshine - 13 years ago

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farah sharmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: Dancedevil
Wowww!!!!!!!! Dis may b d most difficult part 2 rite, bt dis was d most wonderful part 2 read!!!! Luvd it!!! Idk how many tyms I cn read dis!!!!! Awesum work!!!! It feels so Gud imagining dis!!!!!!!! Thnks a lot fr mkin dis part!!!!! It's actually luvable!!!! Fab!!!!!

thnk u sooo much sooo happy u enjoyed reading it😃😳

Originally posted by: kumjoo
First of All...THAN KYOU ONCE AGAIN !!!

NOW ABOUT THE UPDATE !!!

You guys have no Idea how much I enjoy to read HEARTBEAT !! I agree that I am lazy in commenting, but I read it as soon as it is posted , dudes can''t wait long...

I have so much to say after such a long break, I might fall short of words here. But! I am gonna try my best to say everything I want to say and Express.
awww Preety dis is d BEST comment and few words also mean soo much🤗...sooo HAPPY u enjoyed it😃 😳

Well ! Well ! Everybody knows HEARTBEAT is an essential to every human being. I know this HEARTBEAT is very important to both of you guys and so it is for me as well. I love the way you guys explain each and every situation and each and every dialog.
i knw HB is very important for me its d first tym i'm attempting to write an FF and with all of ur responses and wid readers lyk u guys i'm jus enjoying writing as much😃😳nd THNX to Mick also for making me part of dis ff😳

Starting from Girls dresses to Party location Decoration to music to dance to games to Boy's feeling ...Everything has been described so precisely.
😃😃😃

HEARTBEAT is one of the great works I have read online. There are many reasons why I love HEARTBEAT.

1. Story Line is PERFECT

2. Beautifully Written

3. Appropriate dialog according to the characters

4. Excellent flow of the stroy

5. Lot of glitz and Glam

and LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST ...Heavily because this is KRIYAANSH FF.
😳😳thnku Preety😃

Farah and MICK !! You guys are the Best ...To be very honest , this is one of those FFs that has become such a huge Hit in D3 Forum and I am sure Lot of people literally Wait for this FF to be updates. I am sure People are curious to know what happens Next. You guys have managed to HOLD your reader's interest that makes them come back and ask you to update ASAP. and I am one of those Readers. According to me , grabbing Reader's attention and makign them curious and excited abotu ur FF is a huge Achievement. CONGRATS to both of you.
awww Preety thnk u sooo much dis means a looottt🤗😳...nd seriusly LUV u guys for dis😳😃...and thnx to u guys for having d patience to read such looong updates 😳😆

Initially I knew FARAH is a great writer, thats the reason we used to make her write Kriyaansh Marriage and Kriyaansh Date, and She WRITES GREAT. Now with MICK coming up with HEARTBEAT with Farah , let me tell you this COMBO is AWESOME. You guys bring out the Best writers in you on the table. Thats SUPERB !!!
THNKU😳i knw i miss dose days lyk anything every nite i used to update for d Kriyansh wedding gosh we used to dream sooo much😍😆...nd ofcourse luv u nd aarti for persuading me nd supporting me to write😳

Well ! about the Update , I loved every bit of it ...Game was Fantastic. What could be a better way to bring Kriyaansh together. Introducing DJ Nikhil in FF is superb idea (Nikhil Hit ho gaya rey. Please bring Sunny Deol also in ur FF plz plz..LOL 😆 )
😆😆haan sunny ji ko bhi HIT kardenge😆
Everybody's story is moving ahead side by side . be it Swaron , VIHA , Rinni, simmi, bharat, amar, Professor KM and Miss. Jenny. All of their stories are substantial in this FF. That is very impressive.
😃😳

All in all ...I LOVED IT !!! Big Hand to both of you for the JOB WELL DONE ...Thanks for this Lovely Update...I am now waiting for the next Update. There is no Pressure, take your time and ROAK it !!😊
sorry u guys have to wait for soo long but yes will update sooon in dec😃😳

GOOD GOING GUYS!!! Chintoo, Chinki, Babloo...Saab Kushal Mangal hai na?? 😉
ufff ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi😆😆

in purple😃

Originally posted by: julz
loved it..!! thanks for the pm's..:)

sooo glad u luvd it😳😃

Originally posted by: swaron24
hey its an awesome ff!!!! superb creation!!! n d best suitable dialouges!!!👏
can u plzzz pm me wen u write d next part!!!😃

thnku sooo much😃😳...yes will pm u for sure😳

Originally posted by: cherrysood
hey its an awesome ff!!!! superb creation!!! n d best suitable dialouges!!!
loved it... waiting for the next update

thnk u...soo glad u luvd it😳😃

Originally posted by: --aimy--
I always loved your FF,but didn't get that courage to post anything here.
Mick bhaiyya and Farah dii,you both make a great team and its always a pleasure to read your stuffs.
Its way too special and better than the real story.
I'm waiting for the next update and Please do PM me when you update it.

awww aimy soo glad u came out of ur silence now😳😆ur comments means a lot😳...nd thnk u sooo much soo happy u enjoyed nd luvd it😳...nd yes will update soon in dec nd will pm u 😃😳

Originally posted by: 100littledevils
omg u updated !!! Sorry terko toh pata hain na main vacation pe thi!!! Awesome part part as usual guys!! awww teri exams hain.. dec18 tak baap re.. !!! weel we can surely wait yaar!!! tu aaram se padh!!! faad de !! lol.. All th best mick!!
Can't wait for next part !!! pm me when u update!!! 😊

thnk u Piyu😳😆😆yes yes we understnd now u r very busy women😆but yeah will update soon in dec😃

Edited by sweetshine - 13 years ago

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

its awesome ff great idea, its fantastic👍🏼

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~~ MICK ~~

@~~ MICK ~~

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#517

WOW... Thks SHINE for updating the comments part..

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Bakhtawar

@Bakho.RK

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#518

OKAYYY!!!

FINALLY IM GOING TO READ!!! SORRY ITNA LATE HO GAYA!!!

AINDA SA IF I SAY KAI ILL READ BAAD MAIN NEVER EVER LISTEN TO ME ZABARDASTI PARHA DIA KARO... WARNA MAIRA BAAD KABHI NAI ATA!!!!
🤣🤣🤣

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#519

wow guyz
u ppl hv done amazing job
i startd it readn 2day n bs pdhti gai
cudnt resist 4 further story
farah mjhe ni pta tha tm writer b ho
dono ne awsm wrk kia h
lv u guyz 4 gvn us ff
zyada ho gya na chalo koi ni
jaldi se xams khatam karo n update fast
n dun 4 get 2 pm me

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Bakhtawar

@Bakho.RK

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: ~~ MICK ~~

Part 9:
IN GREENN!!😃

ALRIGHTYYY!!!! 😃 oh wait wrong smiley!! ummm yeah dis one... 🤣 khe khe khe khe!!! 😳

Finally he spotted him near the Fire Exit.. she called out to him but he did not respond…he was blindly walking towards someone and when she spotted that someone, she got really furious….Rey ignored her n did not even hear her calling him.
Kria JEALOUS JEALOUS JEAALOUSS...*singing* lol..i just LOUUVV JEALOUS KRIA!! ❤️🤣🤣
plus... hawww CVs nai yahan sai uthaya ..jealous kria part...HAAWW 🤣🤣... farah kitni cheezain uthai CVs nai ginti rehna...kisi din set ka chakkar lagey ga tou hisaab barabar karke aen gai!! 🤣🤣🤣

K: aap itni cheap harkat kar sakte ho ye kabhi nahin socha tha..
HAHAHA ab rey CHEAP!! hahahaha... 🤣🤣🤣

K: kyun aayega samajh….chori pakdi gayi…bahana bana rahe ho..
HAHAHA...🤣 chori pakri gai... kya dialogue likhtey ho tum loug KRIA kai... FULTO KRIA kai character main GHUSS kar!!! hahaha 🤣🤣🤣

(said Kria nd walked off but Rey jus caught her nd pulled her in d fire exit)
ye hui na baat... i love FIRE EXIT!!!🤣 bari ho kar apne ghar main bedroom ho na ho... washroom ho na ho... FIRE EXIT zaroor banwaon gee...hahaha 🤣🤣🤣

K: galat insaano ko galat nahi samjhu toh kya samjhu?
KYA BAAT!!🤣🤣🤣 kya dialogue mara hai... sachi main likhtey huey kria ki rooh aa gai thi tum dono main!! haha 🤣🤣🤣

(screamed Rey in frustration nd moved closer to her pinning her to d wall)
HAILAA..pinneddd!!! 😍

(Rey was about to leave wen Kria caught his hand and moved up towards him)
OMG... KRIA Caught REYS hand... hayeee... agey agey!!! 😍

(he said depressingly n was about to leave wen Kria caught his hand again and this tym not leaving it…Rey was lost in to her holding him)
HAILA... KRIA ki SHAKTI... itna tight grip!!! 😳

K: Romaira is really sorry…mai kya karun who mujhse

R: galti se galti ho jati hai
AWWW... adoraaableee...!!! ❤️why r deeyyy sooo cuteee...😍

K: kya?? (said Kria softly as she felt weak wid him soo close but y she thought)
...butterflieesss!!! 😍😍

(She den realised that she was holding Rey's hand and was shocked…her cheeks going pink…she quickly ran off….Rey was left smiling)
awww...cuuteee😍😍

Sh: fyn lets plan sumthing...
...hahaha in larkoin ko kaam kharab karney ki planning kai ilawa aur koi kaam nai hai... lol... ye bhi uthaya CVs nai yahan sai..hahaha🤣🤣🤣

Kria was lost….she wasn't responding…she was smiling and lost thinking about something.
kiskai khayalo main kria khoing...hmm hmm batao batao!! 🤣🤣🤣

N: xactly hume toh ms.Jenny ko tata babye karna padega….how boys staring lyk owls at Ms. Jenny
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(Karan observed from outside…his mind got struck with an idea sumthing that will keep these girls together and something that he will enjoy to watch)
naughty evil karan frm dmg...i use to looovveee his character!! 🤣🤣

Karan: maine tum logo ki help karne ke liye yaha bulaya hai
HAILAAA...ye bhi chori kia... yahan girls ki help ki wahan boys ki!!! lol.. CVs bhi na!!! 🤣🤣🤣YAASSS... hahaha yeh ki na karan nai baattt!! hahaha SWEET ND SMILE!!

(All d girls looked at him as if he was alien and talking alienish)🤣🤣🤣

Karan: hmm boys ke saath gusse se nahi pyaar se baat karo..

Every1: KYA??PYAAR SE?

Karan: yes…gussa mat dikhao wo tumse aur dur chale jaayenge (he said walking around d girls slowly while all of them were thinking deep into Karan's words)
socho agar tum boys ke saath rahoge toh wo Jenny se dur rahenge aur wo kya karte hain, ya woh kya karenge, iss ke baare mein bhi tumhe khabbar hogi….act sweet nd smile...!!!
YAASSS... hahaha yeh ki na karan nai baattt!! hahaha SWEET ND SMILE!! 🤣🤣🤣
kria chipkofy to rey!!! hahaha YAAYYY!! 🤣🤣🤣

Karan(to himself): ladkiyan phass gayi…plan A successful….ab inke beech ke diff ko khatam karna hai.. lekin usse pehle BUHAHAHA(his funny dmg evil laugh)….sum pranks on JJ…kitna maza aayega..

(he said xcitedly lyk a kid)
awww... i useee too HEARTT his evil little genious character.😊.lol.🤣.it was da best in dmg!!! thanks for adding dis!! 😳

Rey: matlab aaj ki party ka theme hai colour.. agar tujhe neha ke saath dance karna hai, toh u both shud be in the same colour outfits..
NICE IDEAA!!! waise bhi same same colour pehna hota hai dono nai... woh bhi is party kai idea sai uthaya ho ga!!!🤣🤣🤣

Sw: haan toh theek hai.. Vicky ko neha pasand hai.. tabhi he wants to know ki neha kaunsa colour ka outfit pehne wali hai..but Rey tujhe Kriya ka colour kyu jaana hai??
vick: mein bhi yahi soch rha tha..
Rey: wooo woo mein mein toh aise hi.. ab socho, agar waha koi dance battle hua, toh mujhe kriya ko face karna padega na..
vick: ohh acha.. swayam kriya ka bhi pta kar dena..😆
HAHAHAHAHA hHAHAH HAHAH HAHAH HAHA 🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣 I LOVEE BOYS KI COMEDYYY!! 🤣🤣

ALRIGHTY!!! sooo... uhm uhm.. now for da writerss... AAKKKHHH THOOO...🤣🤣🤣
...kya gala saaf kartey hain na bolne sai pehley!!! hahahahah🤣🤣🤣
BRILLIANT story banatey hai tum loug!! 🤣🤣🤣
IM LOVING IT!!! 👏da best part is kai jis bhi character ki lines likhtey ho aisa lagta hai original drama sai uthaya hua hai... matlab bilkul character main ghuss kar uske style maiinn... i love dat part of HEARTBEAT!!! ⭐️nd aise aise dialogues latey ho kai shak hota hai kahin CVs yahan sai COPY PASTE tou nahi karteyy!!! 😆
AWEESUMMM... MINDBLOWINGGG!! I LUB ITT!!! 🤗
next part par cmnt kuch tym baad...HEHEHE!! 🤣🤣🤣
BTW.. DID I SAY I LOVE MIKAH ND MIKAH ROAKSS!! YAASS!!! 🤣🤣🤣