HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ] - Page 53

Originally posted by: magical_mania

wow guyz
u ppl hv done amazing job
i startd it readn 2day n bs pdhti gai
cudnt resist 4 further story
farah mjhe ni pta tha tm writer b ho
dono ne awsm wrk kia h
lv u guyz 4 gvn us ff
zyada ho gya na chalo koi ni
jaldi se xams khatam karo n update fast
n dun 4 get 2 pm me

Originally posted by: bakho

ALRIGHTYYY!!!! 😃 oh wait wrong smiley!! ummm yeah dis one... 🤣 khe khe khe khe!!! 😳

Finally he spotted him near the Fire Exit.. she called out to him but he did not respond'he was blindly walking towards someone and when she spotted that someone, she got really furious'.Rey ignored her n did not even hear her calling him.
Kria JEALOUS JEALOUS JEAALOUSS...*singing* lol..i just LOUUVV JEALOUS KRIA!! ❤️🤣🤣
plus... hawww CVs nai yahan sai uthaya ..jealous kria part...HAAWW 🤣🤣... farah kitni cheezain uthai CVs nai ginti rehna...kisi din set ka chakkar lagey ga tou hisaab barabar karke aen gai!! 🤣🤣🤣

K: aap itni cheap harkat kar sakte ho ye kabhi nahin socha tha..
HAHAHA ab rey CHEAP!! hahahaha... 🤣🤣🤣

K: kyun aayega samajh'.chori pakdi gayi'bahana bana rahe ho..
HAHAHA...🤣 chori pakri gai... kya dialogue likhtey ho tum loug KRIA kai... FULTO KRIA kai character main GHUSS kar!!! hahaha 🤣🤣🤣

(said Kria nd walked off but Rey jus caught her nd pulled her in d fire exit)
ye hui na baat... i love FIRE EXIT!!!🤣 bari ho kar apne ghar main bedroom ho na ho... washroom ho na ho... FIRE EXIT zaroor banwaon gee...hahaha 🤣🤣🤣

K: galat insaano ko galat nahi samjhu toh kya samjhu?
KYA BAAT!!🤣🤣🤣 kya dialogue mara hai... sachi main likhtey huey kria ki rooh aa gai thi tum dono main!! haha 🤣🤣🤣

(screamed Rey in frustration nd moved closer to her pinning her to d wall)
HAILAA..pinneddd!!! 😍

(Rey was about to leave wen Kria caught his hand and moved up towards him)
OMG... KRIA Caught REYS hand... hayeee... agey agey!!! 😍

(he said depressingly n was about to leave wen Kria caught his hand again and this tym not leaving it'Rey was lost in to her holding him)
HAILA... KRIA ki SHAKTI... itna tight grip!!! 😳

K: Romaira is really sorry'mai kya karun who mujhse

R: galti se galti ho jati hai
AWWW... adoraaableee...!!! ❤️why r deeyyy sooo cuteee...😍

K: kya?? (said Kria softly as she felt weak wid him soo close but y she thought)
...butterflieesss!!! 😍😍

(She den realised that she was holding Rey's hand and was shocked'her cheeks going pink'she quickly ran off'.Rey was left smiling)
awww...cuuteee😍😍

Sh: fyn lets plan sumthing...
...hahaha in larkoin ko kaam kharab karney ki planning kai ilawa aur koi kaam nai hai... lol... ye bhi uthaya CVs nai yahan sai..hahaha🤣🤣🤣

Kria was lost'.she wasn't responding'she was smiling and lost thinking about something.
kiskai khayalo main kria khoing...hmm hmm batao batao!! 🤣🤣🤣

N: xactly hume toh ms.Jenny ko tata babye karna padega'.how boys staring lyk owls at Ms. Jenny
🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣

(Karan observed from outside'his mind got struck with an idea sumthing that will keep these girls together and something that he will enjoy to watch)
naughty evil karan frm dmg...i use to looovveee his character!! 🤣🤣

Karan: maine tum logo ki help karne ke liye yaha bulaya hai
HAILAAA...ye bhi chori kia... yahan girls ki help ki wahan boys ki!!! lol.. CVs bhi na!!! 🤣🤣🤣YAASSS... hahaha yeh ki na karan nai baattt!! hahaha SWEET ND SMILE!!

(All d girls looked at him as if he was alien and talking alienish)🤣🤣🤣

Karan: hmm boys ke saath gusse se nahi pyaar se baat karo..

Every1: KYA??PYAAR SE?

Karan: yes'gussa mat dikhao wo tumse aur dur chale jaayenge (he said walking around d girls slowly while all of them were thinking deep into Karan's words)
socho agar tum boys ke saath rahoge toh wo Jenny se dur rahenge aur wo kya karte hain, ya woh kya karenge, iss ke baare mein bhi tumhe khabbar hogi'.act sweet nd smile...!!!
YAASSS... hahaha yeh ki na karan nai baattt!! hahaha SWEET ND SMILE!! 🤣🤣🤣
kria chipkofy to rey!!! hahaha YAAYYY!! 🤣🤣🤣

Karan(to himself): ladkiyan phass gayi'plan A successful'.ab inke beech ke diff ko khatam karna hai.. lekin usse pehle BUHAHAHA(his funny dmg evil laugh)'.sum pranks on JJ'kitna maza aayega..

(he said xcitedly lyk a kid)
awww... i useee too HEARTT his evil little genious character.😊.lol.🤣.it was da best in dmg!!! thanks for adding dis!! 😳

Rey: matlab aaj ki party ka theme hai colour.. agar tujhe neha ke saath dance karna hai, toh u both shud be in the same colour outfits..
NICE IDEAA!!! waise bhi same same colour pehna hota hai dono nai... woh bhi is party kai idea sai uthaya ho ga!!!🤣🤣🤣

Sw: haan toh theek hai.. Vicky ko neha pasand hai.. tabhi he wants to know ki neha kaunsa colour ka outfit pehne wali hai..but Rey tujhe Kriya ka colour kyu jaana hai??
vick: mein bhi yahi soch rha tha..
Rey: wooo woo mein mein toh aise hi.. ab socho, agar waha koi dance battle hua, toh mujhe kriya ko face karna padega na..
vick: ohh acha.. swayam kriya ka bhi pta kar dena..😆
HAHAHAHAHA hHAHAH HAHAH HAHAH HAHA 🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣 I LOVEE BOYS KI COMEDYYY!! 🤣🤣

ALRIGHTY!!! sooo... uhm uhm.. now for da writerss... AAKKKHHH THOOO...🤣🤣🤣
...kya gala saaf kartey hain na bolne sai pehley!!! hahahahah🤣🤣🤣
BRILLIANT story banatey hai tum loug!! 🤣🤣🤣
IM LOVING IT!!! 👏da best part is kai jis bhi character ki lines likhtey ho aisa lagta hai original drama sai uthaya hua hai... matlab bilkul character main ghuss kar uske style maiinn... i love dat part of HEARTBEAT!!! ⭐️nd aise aise dialogues latey ho kai shak hota hai kahin CVs yahan sai COPY PASTE tou nahi karteyy!!! 😆
AWEESUMMM... MINDBLOWINGGG!! I LUB ITT!!! 🤗
next part par cmnt kuch tym baad...HEHEHE!! 🤣🤣🤣
BTW.. DID I SAY I LOVE MIKAH ND MIKAH ROAKSS!! YAASS!!! 🤣🤣🤣

@FARAH!!!

lolzz... yeah yeah.. chnne kai chad par chrh.. mick ko bhi utha kar leja upar!! lolzz🤣🤣🤣

nd awww I LAUUVE U TOO MIKAHH!!!🤗 haha 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: bakho

@FARAH!!!

lolzz... yeah yeah.. chnne kai chad par chrh.. mick ko bhi utha kar leja upar!! lolzz🤣🤣🤣

nd awww I LAUUVE U TOO MIKAHH!!!🤗 haha 🤣🤣🤣

BAKHOOO MAST COMMENT YAAR.. ITS ALWAYS FUN READING WT U WRITE NO MATTER WT IT IS.. AS I HAVE ALREADY SAID B4 ALSO KI U GT A GREAT SENSE OF HUMOUR.. COMEDY KI TIMING EKDUM BINDAAS HAI.. 😆 I CAN NEVER FORGET THAT STORY THAT U HAD WRITTEN.. 😆🤣🤣

NOW READ THE NEXT PART.. !!!!!!!!!!!😉

Originally posted by: ~~ MICK ~~

BAKHOOO MAST COMMENT YAAR.. ITS ALWAYS FUN READING WT U WRITE NO MATTER WT IT IS.. AS I HAVE ALREADY SAID B4 ALSO KI U GT A GREAT SENSE OF HUMOUR.. COMEDY KI TIMING EKDUM BINDAAS HAI.. 😆 I CAN NEVER FORGET THAT STORY THAT U HAD WRITTEN.. 😆🤣🤣

NOW READ THE NEXT PART.. !!!!!!!!!!!😉

KYA ISTORY KI YAAD DILA DI!! 🤣🤣🤣
AB ILL KEEP LAUGHING PATA NAI KAB TAK!! 🤣🤣
OKAYZZ WILL READ AB!! lolzz!! 😃😛

sooo cute..nyc 1 😊

Originally posted by: namy21

sooo cute..nyc 1 😊

must say

thanks dear

mick d last part was awsummm👍🏼

good luck and pm me after u update and hope you get awesome marks and bet you are really good at english and i wonder why lol