HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ]

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Sarah

@HPmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awww...😃 lol,I've just been reading and grinning like an idiot...it's soo cute! I wish aisa sacchi mein ho jata... please continue soon!😊👏

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome awesome and awesome...loved that...well i m also new here i had joined yesterday...nd me also dont knw...

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

wow mick that was sooo cutee

n kriya kisses him on the cheek ...=)

lol i can imagine rey's face...n running after her

that dialogue rocks...

agar ek thapad se hum itna close aa sakte hain, toh i dnt mind getting slapped everyday *claps*

but dude kriya ko achanak kya hua ??

cant wait 4 next

see yaaa

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kumjoo

@kumjoo

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Thanks MICK...Good one...Eeessshhh...She kisses his ...eeeaaassshhh..are you gonna kill me?

Please write more. Am waiting for part 3

P.S. Thank you so much for PM

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upeka

@upeka

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

u r a fab writer👏 ur creation is superb yaar i'm speechless 🤗

R: Mein soch raha tha ki agar ek thapad se hum itna close aa sakte hain, toh i dnt mind getting slapped everyday . .

really cute😊

Edited by upeka - 13 years ago

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~~ MICK ~~

@~~ MICK ~~

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Thanks guys.. looking fwd to ur ideas n suggestions.. 😉

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Wow loved the part. Wating for the next.

Ok pming is very easy. You have two opisons. Like first one is that you pm one person one buy one. But it take much time. My myself write and Maaneet ff and i asked everyone how want pm to add me on there pm list. Then when you send next part you go and open pm andwrite what ever you want and klick all the buddys you want to send to with link and send it.

Hope you understand and its not so confusing.

And yeha one more thing add me on your pm list

Edited by Kriyanshlover - 13 years ago

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@~~ MICK ~~

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

ok thanks amina,, i will try it next time..

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belleza

@belleza

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Wow..loved the way this story moves.its cool.😛
Awesome work👏👏

Originally posted by: kriyaaansh
S: Ahaan. But tum apna kaam uss weakling behanji se kyu nahin karwate?? (Mein hi janta hun kitne dard se mein kriya k against yeh likha.. :P)

In the entire story I loved this portion more than any other part.I too feels bad when sharon tease Kriya.