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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#341

OH JEEEZ!!!

D3 main DMG!

nyc... nyc... I LIKE.. I LIKE!!!😈

upd8 nxt part soon!

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farah sharmin

@sweetshine

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: misslaugheasily
awww...
AR all over!😃
but i was expecting it to be shilpa gupta...i mean, she was the best dancer out of the three... 😕
oh, well...it was still a nice part!! 👏
hope u add some kriyaansh or swaron scenes next, though..😊

u can imagine Shilpa if u lyk😳

nd yeah next part for sure Kriyansh nd Swaron scenes😳

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Meera

@Sunsethues

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#343

🤣 i cant stop laughing

kya twist laya hai tum dono ne

fire exit mein kriyansh nahi kajen ko bhej diya 🤣

karan jen bhi st louis mein

very very interesting

ab toh college mein storm aa jayega

sab jagah hawa chalti rahegi

the dialogues are also fundo

boys par chaya jenny ka jaadoo girls honge bekabu 🤣

jen saying haq nahin hai tumhe !!!!!

kya yaar u shwg bromance btwn recky 🤣

enjoyed reading it a lot

luv it

congo both of u

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kumjoo

@kumjoo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Maan Gaye SARKARS,

Kya kya Khayali Pulao banaye the maine..But! It was a nice Twist. You gave me an insight into DMG. Quite nice...

Tum dono bhi na!!!! Cinevistaas jaise hi ho...PROMO mein kuch...Episode mein kuch aur hi dikhate ho 😆

Anyways, i liked it..Infact I loved it!!! RECKY rocks..Aww..I am missing them 😭 LOL...

And Boys drooling over Miss. Jenny...I wish that happens in the Episode. I would love to see JELO GIRLS...

One of the many things that I like about your Update is you give dialogues to each characters very appropriately, keeping in mind the nature of the character. TALIYA to both of you for this..👏

And the portion where you described Miss. Jenny's entry , that blowing winds and those effects were so Magical and beautifully written. HATS OFF to both of you here...

And FIRE EXIT...ha ha ha!!! Cute Convo between K and J ..that makes KJ...and that is me ..LOL LOL ...Anyways , Was Arman so cute in DMG?? His silly dalogues are so irritating to any girl but cute in this update. The best dialogue was ..Exactly, tumhara foot hi yahan tak aaya hai..LOL ...that's Hilarious...

WELL DONE GUYS!! But! Missed KRIYAANSH 😔 LOLS But! Nevermind ...This Part was cute..

Agla Update : DANCE PARTY ?? YAYA!!! I wan't to attend that Party ASAP ...😆

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~~ MICK ~~

@~~ MICK ~~

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: kumjoo
Maan Gaye SARKARS,

Kya kya Khayali Pulao banaye the maine..But! It was a nice Twist. You gave me an insight into DMG. Quite nice...

Tum dono bhi na!!!! Cinevistaas jaise hi ho...PROMO mein kuch...Episode mein kuch aur hi dikhate ho 😆

Anyways, i liked it..Infact I loved it!!! RECKY rocks..Aww..I am missing them 😭 LOL...

And Boys drooling over Miss. Jenny...I wish that happens in the Episode. I would love to see JELO GIRLS...

One of the many things that I like about your Update is you give dialogues to each characters very appropriately, keeping in mind the nature of the character. TALIYA to both of you for this..👏

And the portion where you described Miss. Jenny's entry , that blowing winds and those effects were so Magical and beautifully written. HATS OFF to both of you here...

And FIRE EXIT...ha ha ha!!! Cute Convo between K and J ..that makes KJ...and that is me ..LOL LOL ...Anyways , Was Arman so cute in DMG?? His silly dalogues are so irritating to any girl but cute in this update. The best dialogue was ..Exactly, tumhara foot hi yahan tak aaya hai..LOL ...that's Hilarious...

WELL DONE GUYS!! But! Missed KRIYAANSH 😔 LOLS But! Nevermind ...This Part was cute..

Agla Update : DANCE PARTY ?? YAYA!!! I wan't to attend that Party ASAP ...😆

awww.. that was an awesome comment.. u know i was saying to farah ki Preety ne DMG nahin dekha.. i was wondering u will like it or not... m glad u did.. n ya KSG was super naughty n funny.. . Tum start kardo dekhna.. 2-3 hafte aaraam se lag jayenge.. 😆 n most of the parts of this were written off by Farah.. so uski spl tareef karo.. mein toh thode bahut assistance de raha tha bas..😆 i told her ki Jenni ki entry tum likho as yeh kaam woh mast karte hai.. i call it as " F " SPL..

thank u so much again.. n put on ur dancing shoes .. 🥳

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Piya

@piya2025

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#346

awww..it was amazing..Loved both the new entries & so is their conversation.. I Loved Armaan malik's pranks,He was one genius in that lol.
Nice to see atleast boys still didn't forget their girls in the presence of jenny..

Nice update..update soon.

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sana

@_sana.Magic_

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#347

its a really nice update and thnx for PM me

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Bakhtawar

@Bakho.RK

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#348

😆

Originally posted by: sweetshine

Part 8:

RECAP!!! hahaaha... asli show wali feeling aney lag gai hai ab tou full on!!! hehehe

(OK WHILE READING DIS SCENE IMAGINE THE SONG TUMSE MILKE FROM MAIN HOON NA😳)

hehehe imagining 😆

came the sound of little bells ringing 🤣

all the guys turned around to find the source and their mouths dropped down

😲 aisa kya dekh liya!!!

coming up the stairs was a BEAUTY'

😲 haila ...new entry!!!

made all the guys go gaga over her 🤣🤣

aweesum explanation yrrr...😊.. u guys r soo gud wid da words...👍🏼. explaining da new character.. i can totally imagine her lyk dat... and karans thoughts..and den Jenni's( btw i didnt knw it was jenny... but i was at da AT side by side tou u guys tld aarti woj JJ nd dhokaibaz wala stuff tou mujhe pata chal gaya..hehe😆) feelings... awwweeessuummm!!!!!!!👏

and the most precious thing it gave her was friends'

awww...😊

Nil: phir se bhaj gaya is ka recorder 🤣🤣🤣

Yeh hain Ms Jennifer Gupta'and she is here as the new Dance assistant for our College..

niceee... i likes... 👏

Boys: yes sir ofcourse sir no problem sir..
Jenni: Wow' the boys seem to be more mature here' well then I'll c you all later for rehearsals. 🤣

This angered the girls more and they left off from there.

jealous haannn... batao batao..tell tell... 🤣 im tou loving it!!! 😆

kiske bare mei soch raha hai??

V: Ms. Jennyyy.. ~~ ❤️

i can sooo totally imagine dis scene!!! awweessuummm!!!! 😆

K: boys par Jenny ka jadu'girls honge bekaabu'interesting..😆😆😆

(Rey who was standing beside Vicky hugged him)

R: kya idea diya hai tu.. toh pakka mera bhai hai.. kitni achi soch hai teri

(said Rey both hugged each other while Rey kissed him on the cheek) { lol }

Nilesh lukd at dem wid disgust..

N: GUYS (he screamed out and separated the 2) tum dono ko ho kya jata hai party ka naam lete hi??

V: arey tu chodd na (said Vicky nd moved Nil away nd went nd stood beside Rey hugging him nd both strtd kuchi kooing each other while Nil hit his head on d desk nd Swaym Bharat nd Amar stood dere laughing)😆😆

🤣 cant stop laughing!! 🤣🤣🤣

arey yaaarrr... ilove u guys for adding dis... i missed RECKY sooo much!!! 🤗

opened the fire exit door and pulled Jenny in.

awww... dmg ki yaden taza ho gai!!! 😊

K: wait a sec u knw wat I think tume zaroor yahan BAI ki naukri mili hogi hai na hai na (he said xcitedly)🤣

lemme guess shayad paanch saalo se FAIL ho rahe hoge.. is liye abhi tak yehi aatke hue ho'sad...!!!!🤣🤣🤣 maar dalo gai hasa hasa kar!!!

J: OMG councilor'.kis andhe ne tumhe councilor banaya'.aur kis cheez ki counseling karne aaye ho? yehi ke tattoos kaise banwane hai? ya phir doley sholey kaise banana hai?? ya phir usse bhi acha ek din, ladki in ka funda...

😆 amar ko tou yehi sikhaya issne... 😆

RDX: ab chup chup ke fights karne lag gaye ye weaklings aur dazzlers😆 🤣

Karan and Jenny stopped with fingers pointing at each other as they noticed RDX on the door and looked embarrassed and moved away from each other.

🤣🤣🤣 totally imagining dis scene... students ki larai khatam karne aey they yeh!! hehehe🤣

K: andhe..🤣🤣🤣

RDX: and the Princi said it would be a delight if you both would work together and bring them all 2gether..

K&J: WAT??

hahahaha... wat a joke!!!🤣🤣🤣 hogai teams aik ab achi tarhan se!!🤣🤣

farah nd micky... maza aa gaya!!! ...kya likhte ho yarrr .👏... brilliant... aweesuumm...mind blowing...outstanding...out ov dis world... balke main tou kehti hun out ov dis universe!!🤣🤣🤣🤣 aur kya kahun main... ainda dictionary pass rakha karun gee for more words!!🤣🤣🤣

lagey raho ishi tarhan!!! 😊

Edited by bakho - 14 years ago

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Shruti Tah

@sweetapple2995

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#349

yaar mein dono taraf se phas gayi hoon ek i loved kajen and kash (not kasu so much but they were okay) so i enjoyed both just a little more biased towards kash but love kajen as well so very happy with this! but then i wished there was a kriyansh scene😍 becuz i love them just as much as well but heres the suprise...YOU FREAKING READ MY MIND 😲I WAS THINKING A FEW DAYS AGO HOW IT WOULD BE INTERESTING IF KARAN HAD AN OPPOSITE IN THE COLLEGE AND THE BOYS HAD SOMEONE TO GO PAGAL AFTER!! YAAR TUM THO MINDREADERS HO MICK AND FARAH!!!😆 hahah awesome job!