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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetshine
😃😃GET READY EVERY1 AS TMRW WILL BE DHAMAKA AFTR DHAMAKA
LOLZ NEXT UPDATE COMING SOON TMRW AFTR THE MUCH AWAITED KABBADI MATCH😳😳😳
PLZ BE ALIVE TO READ D UPDATE😆😆😆

BRING IT ON !!!!

Well, Actually I don't Guarantee to Read this as I might have an attack after KM ...😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

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fire exit means kriyaansh scene 😉...waiting plz update soon !!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

FIRST OF ALL V WISH SHAKTI MOHAN A VERY HAPPY ROAKING AND MEJICAL BIRTHDAY ...🥳 🥳🥳
LOVE U SHAKTI...❤️

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Rey n Kria get detension fr a day. They take a quiz from prici..
Kriyaansh n swaron get stuck on the highway where they manage to get lift from Karan Malik which happens to be a past student in St Louis...
Another fight between the girls which is resolved by RDX n he anounces that there will be a new student councellor coming to this coll..
Except Kriyaansh n Swaron, the gang plays pranks on Karan...

Part 8:

Please note that all the previous scenes were a flashback n Kriyaansh are remembering their old days... This part too will be a continuation to the flashback shown in the prev post...
Kriyaansh n Swaron come to coll next day where they find out that there is a new Counsellor appointed.. They find out that it is d same guy that gave them lift last evening.. Rey n Swayam
sulk coz of this while Kriya n Sharon are super excited.. 😆😆

Princi, RDX n Karan arrive together at the Atrium. The Weaklings nd Dazzlers were all gathered in the atrium as the Princi had an important announcement to make. RDX and Karan stood beside the Princi all d girls moved towards where Karan was standing and everyone started drooling over him….Karan smiled at them feeling awkward...😳

The guys watched with envy at Karan and also were angry looking at the girls reaction. The boys were at one side and the girls were at d other side….it looked as if LOC was already rubbed off between all of them.

Princi: Good morning students, today we have called you here for making a special announcement…as u all know Mr. Malik is here to bring all of you together.. dazzlers nd weaklings

N: arey yaar ye Buddha tape recorder ke tarah kyun baj raha hai…as if we dnt knw y he's here...😆

V: xactly humari ladkiyon ko humse cheene ke liye aaya hai.. dekh dekh kaise lut pit mar rahi hai sab unke liye...😆

(Vicky said crying nd Nilesh strtd patting him)

Princi: So students…i want all of u meet Mr Karan Mallik who is an Ex louian n now a Student Counselor for St Louis
Karan: Hello everyone…i guess i have met some of u last evening as well..

(Pointing to Kriyaansh n swaron….Rey and Swaym gave a forcefull smile while Kria nd Sharon waved lost in Karan😍)

Princi: i had been receiving so many complaints from this particular section.. (in a loud tone) In past so many years i never felt the need for a student councilor, but i guess u guys are in desperate need of counseling...

RDX: All the issues will be handled by Mr Karan now …He will also help Sharon n Swayam in organizing the cultural events . .

Princi: Mere khyaal se even Rey n Kriya will be needing his help so that they don't repeat such blunders like last time.. Also from now on, u wont have the right to take decisions by urself.. U will b consulting mr Mallik for ne new decisions..
is that clear??
Rey n Kria : yes sir..

Neha (to Vishaka): Neha getting feeling ki kuch bura hone wala hai..
Vish: Karan sir ke hote hue, kya bura hoga??😳
N: pata nahi…feeling toofan coming..😆

Karan: Sir, itni koi prob nahin lagti.. ab mein aa gaya hun.. sab theek ho jaega.. Right Guys??

Girls: right (smiling at Karan)

But the boys were all looking furious.

RDX went upto Princi to say something and there was complete silence in the whole atrium.

(OK WHILE READING DIS SCENE IMAGINE THE SONG TUMSE MILKE FROM MAIN HOON NA😳)

Suddenly there came the sound of little bells ringing… all the guys turned around to find the source and their mouths dropped down…Princi and RDX stopped talking….Karan looked towards the door curiously….the girls turned around…there was a big blow of wind from the main doors of the colg and coming up the stairs was a BEAUTY….her beautiful thin well shaped body was wrapped around in a dark juicy green chiffon sari which had black sequence work on the par and her black blouse which was short sleeved perfectly fitted 2 her body and her anchal fell on one side flying behind her wid the wind….her silky chocolaty hair flew around her….she moved out her hair from her face while her other hand had a file….her face was a perfect round shaped with cute chubby cheeks which made you wish to pull them….her beautiful big round eyes emitted a light brown spark with heavy dark kajal….she walked with so much grace and elegance which made all the guys go gaga over her and every guy stood with their hands on their hearts😳…. all of them looked bowled over as she walked in to the Atrium towards the Princi on the stairs….the moment she smiled it was as if a big blow of wind hit them all and all the guys felt lyk they were falling from the sky….the girls on the other hand looked at her with awe….she was really beautiful….but then was disgusted looking at the boys reaction.😆

There was one person who seemed very unaffected by her presence or maybe he was in a shock. Karan stood there in shock when she moved her hair out of her face….it was years since he saw her….she still had that beauty and grace with
in her….but it seemed she was glowing more lyk a swan now….her silky hair always falling on to her face…her cute pink cotton candy cheeks which he always loved pulling….her big dark striking eyes…and her cute pink glossed smile….she was still his same old pink bunny😍. Suddenly he went back to time and remembered those awful days those awful fights….his smile faded looking at her….what was she doing here??? Just then his phone started ringing and it was an important call so he had to excuse himself and take the call..😛

She entered the college with excitement brewing inside her and feeling the presence of being in the college once again…. the place which at once upon a time in her lyf was her life….this place gave her everything she ever wanted….it brought her more close to her passion….it gave her a recognition to the world outside….it made taught her to live life….and the most precious thing it gave her was friends….friends some who were still there in her life and some who seemed to have blown away with the years. She looked around the college and at all the present students lined up in front of her and missed looking at him who went away from the atrium towards the corridor.😃

Edited by sweetshine - 14 years ago

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farah sharmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Princi: OH... Ms Jennifer Gupta.. WELCUM …Mein aap hi ka intezar kar raha tha..😃
(for those who dont know we have clubbed Jennifer Winget (Riddhima of DMG) wid Riddhima Gupta jus lyk Karan Malik😉😛)
(Jenny greeted the princi with a big huge smile which was very breath taking for the boys while the girls looked with disgust at the boys😆)

J: Good Morning sir

P: Very Good morning Ms Gupta.. plz meet our –

J: I know Mr. Dixit

RDX: Hi Ms Gupta its nice to meet you (he seemed somewhat lost himself looking at her😳😆)

J: same here

(The Princi looked towards the students)

P: Well as I told you all earlier humare Student Councilor is here to take off the divide between you all-

Nil: phir se bhaj gaya is ka recorder

Vick: huh arey chod na uspe kyun dhyan de raha hai…..look at her….bilkul pari jaisi..

Neha who was standing close by was furious wen Vicky was gawking at Jenny. Nilesh hit him on the head and turned his face towards Neha who ignored him and moved her face away. And Vicky stood with a guilty expression..😛

Princi: and now guys, Yeh hain Ms Jennifer Gupta…and she is here as the new Dance assistant for our College..

(every1 including the boys went in SHOCK…DANCE ASSISTANT...wat???😲)

Sharon: WHAT?????? U must be kidding me…Y do v need a dance assistant for our college sir?

(All d girls agreed with Sharon)

Princi: Because i want St Loius to win the Footloose competition this year. . Ms Gupta bhi humare student councilor ki tarah ex loiusan hain n she was the captain of the dance team from St Loius which won the Footloose competion 5 yrs back.. She is not here to teach u guys how to dance as all of you are great dancers.. But there are 2 groups here coz of which the best is not coming out from u guys.. Ms Gupta will help to bridge this gap between the 2 groups and make them 1 along wid the councilor.

Vicky: Toh matlab, No dazzlings, No weaklings, Only Louisans???
Princi: Exactly…Tum sab Footloose competion mein as 1 team participate karoge..
Sharon: But this is not fair Sir… Hum log inn weaklings ke saath nahin perform karenge..

(she cud not believe dis was really happening)

Jenni: Toh theek hai …hum aapka naam cancel kar dete hain dance team se.. Aur kisiko back out karna hai?? { she looks strict }

(said Jenni looking sternly at Sharon and the others….all the girls got furious at this)

Rey: Arey nahin Ms Gupta.. Sharon ki toh mazaak karne ki aadat hai.. we have no problems in performing together as long as you are here with us.. Hum sab kuch manage kar lenge.. Kyu Swayam ??
Swayam: Yes of Course..Even our group has no problem.. (without even looking at Kriya n other girls)

(Kria and Sharon looked at Rey and Swaym with disgust and anger)

Princi: Sharon n Kriya.. Aap logon ka Rehersal hall se related pehle kuch issue chal raha tha.. Abse Ms Gupta decide karenge ki rehersal hall kaun use karega..
Boys: yes sir ofcourse sir no problem sir..
Jenni: Wow… the boys seem to be more mature here… well then I'll c you all later for rehearsals..😳

She smiled and they all walked up the stairs to the Principal's office. Other students started dispersing but the boys(Rey-Swaym-Vicky-Nilesh-Bharat-Amar) stood there looking lost after Jenny. This angered the girls more and they left off from there.

Karan noticed the girls leave in anger and finally got off with the call and came back to the Atrium to find it empty except for d boys who stood smiling towards the stairs.

K: boysss (he whispered)

Boys: hmmm (dreamily)

K: (cleared out his throat and moved towards Vicky and kept his hand on him but still there was no reaction)kiske bare mei soch raha hai??

V: Ms. Jennyyy.. ~~ ❤️

(Karan straightened up…WAT was going on??? he had to find out wat is Jenny doing here but before that)

K: WAKE UP...!!!!!! (he clapped his hands in front of the boys)

All the boys came back to their senses and each one ran off to different direction..

K: boys par Jenny ka jadu…girls honge bekaabu…interesting..😆

...

All the boys were sitting in the empty class room..Vicky sat wid legs crossed on d desk (kabhi nahi sudhrenge😆).. Nilesh sat on a chair beside him.. Amar and Bharat sat on the chair beside Vicky nd Nilesh..Rey stood against the wall near Vicky, while Swaym paced in front of them...all were deep in thought...

A: aisa kya tahrein hum jo woh humse aur impress ho jaaye??

B: mai toh kehta hun unko ek achi si gadi mei ghumane le chalte hain..

V: abey oye teri sui gadi pe hi kyun attak jati hai??

S: guys kuch aur socho.. we hav to do sumthing for her.. (smiling) I mean them aftrall humare seniors hai n ab dance assnt bhi

R: exactly...

V: IDEA (he suddenly jumped off the desk where Nilesh was resting his hand but fell becoz of Vicky's xcitement on d floor)

(Every1 gathered around Vicky)

R: kya hai bata na..

V: guys, kyun na hum ek surprise welcum DANCE PARTY rakhein aaj raat??

N: Haan yaar.. mast idea hai.. waise bhi itne saal ke baad coll wapas join kiya hai.. Ek surprise treat toh banti hai..

V: exactly..party unke liye aur kaam humara bhi.. double bonus..

Every1: KAAM??

V: (with an evil smile) ladkiyon ko impress karne ka mauka aur unke saath dance karne ka mauka aise thodi na jaane denge jani.. 😆

(Everybody was xcited for such a gr8 idea)

(Rey who was standing beside Vicky hugged him)

R: kya idea diya hai tu.. toh pakka mera bhai hai.. kitni achi soch hai teri

(said Rey both hugged each other while Rey kissed him on the cheek) { lol }

Nilesh lukd at dem wid disgust..

N: GUYS (he screamed out and separated the 2) tum dono ko ho kya jata hai party ka naam lete hi?? 😆

V: arey tu chodd na (said Vicky nd moved Nil away nd went nd stood beside Rey hugging him nd both strtd kuchi kooing each other while Nil hit his head on d desk nd Swaym Bharat nd Amar stood dere laughing)😆

S: ok so Rey tu jake permission le lena Princi aur RDX se for the party..

V: haan aur kehna this is SPECIALLY for Ms.Jenny..

(Outside Simmi nd Rinni overheard Swaym nd Vicky and was in shock dey cudnt believe that the boys were planning for a party for Ms. Jenny... they had to inform Sharon abt all dis😈)

Edited by sweetshine - 14 years ago

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farah sharmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Karan stood inside the fire exit and watched closely from the blinds as if he was spying on sumone😆….he looked around if she was anywhere near the corridor….he then spotted her walking in d corridor and opened the fire exit door and pulled Jenny in. Jenny was caught in surprise as someone strong armed pulled her from sideways… she was blinded by her hair and could not c where she was pulled and almost tripped but the strong arms caught her by her waist and her hands lay on his shoulders. She looked up to the person who pulled her and caught her.
She went in shock she could not believe it was him….wat was he doing here….how dare he pull her here…

Karan caught her and looked at her as she moved away her hair…after years he saw her so close…everything was still the same….he wished to pull her cheeks😳 but he noticed her shocking angry expression and before he decided to leave her she quickly pushed him away...

J: TUM???….TUM yahan kya kar rahe ho and how dare you pull me here in the fire exit...

K: Hi to u too(he said coolly)…aur ye sawal mei bhi tumse kar na chahta hoon…TUM yahan kya kar rahi ho??

J: tum sach mei ajeeb ho….mujhe yahan keech laye aur mujhse puch rahe ho ke mei yahan kya kar rahi hoon??

K: OH GOD (he said to himself hitting his head😆) maine pucha ke tum COLG mei kya kar rahi ho??

J: wohi toh mei tumse puch rahi thi..

K: wait a sec u knw wat I think tume zaroor yahan BAI ki naukri mili hogi hai na hai na (he said xcitedly)

J: WAT??? (furiously)

K: nahi woh tum sari mai aayi ho toh maine socha..😛

J: SHUT UP tum kabse sochne lag gaye….tumhe soch na suit nahi kar tha….waise sochne wali baat toh ye hai ke tum yahan par kyun ho oh lemme guess shayad paanch saalo se FAIL ho rahe hoge.. is liye abhi tak yehi aatke hue ho…sad...!!!!

K: oh please for ur info tumhe bata du ki mei yahan ka student nahi student councilor hoon..

(Jenny looked at him in shock she cud not believe it that he is the councilor but no she wont believe him coz he always plays pranks with her and she was sure he was playing a prank with her rite now)

J: OMG councilor….kis andhe ne tumhe councilor banaya….aur kis cheez ki counseling karne aaye ho? yehi ke tattoos kaise banwane hai? ya phir doley sholey kaise banana hai?? ya phir usse bhi acha ek din, ladki in ka funda...

K: shut up JJ...😳

J: don't u dare call me dat…haq nahi tumhe ab..

K: kahe ka haq, naam maine diya tha.. copyrite hai mera-

J: lekin naam toh mera hai…aur waise bhi tumhe mujhe ab Ma'am bulana hoga..aadat daal lo iski..

K: hehehe ma'am(Karan strts laughing)….ab mujhe pata chala ke tumhe na bohot bada sadma puhcha hoga…. aww silly girl..

J: WAT?? (giving him the angry look)

K: mummy bachao teacher darra rahi hai.. { Remember this same dialogue in DMG??😉 }

J: go to hell (she moved towards the door but Karan held out her hand…there was a moment of silence where they looked at each other)

K: tumne bataya nahi tum yahan mere peeche kyun aayi ho JJ..

J: tumhare peeche my foot

K: xactly tumhare foot mere peeche yahan tak pahunch gaya..

J: oh shut up….ye colg sirf tumhara nahi hai….nd nor did u buy it

K: kaash aisa hota ke maine kharid liya hota toh sab se pehle tumhe dhakke mar kar nikal deta..

J: tumhari problem kya hai

K: simple.. tum JJ (with a big smile😆)

J: stop calling me dat (he hasn't changed a single bit thought Jenny he was still the same…the pranks master…the irritating but cute smile…and his stupid silly talks)

(And there they went again arguing like kids. Outside RDX heard some bickering coming from the fire exit as the door was closed)

RDX: ab chup chup ke fights karne lag gaye ye weaklings aur dazzlers😆 (said RDX to himself nd sighed and opened the door to discover no weakling or dazzlers but d student councilor and the dance assistant teacher…RDX was in shock)

Karan and Jenny stopped with fingers pointing at each other as they noticed RDX on the door and looked embarrassed and moved away from each other.

RDX: Mr.Malik….Ms. Gupta…aap dono...!!!

K: ek dusre ko bachpan se jhante hai...(aftr along pause of thinking)

RDX: bachpan...

K: I mean woh colg ek saath hi the na toh bohot dino se mile nahi toh isliye we were jus catching up on old tyms ..rite JJ??

J: exactly (said Jenny smiling and giving an angry look to Karan)

RDX: but aap dono toh jagda..

K: jagda where jagda (he said moving towards Jenny and hugging her from behind his hand on her shoulders) hum toh best buddies hai….ye toh humara style hai baat karne ka..

(Jenny looked at him in disgust nd moved his hand away)

J: exactly Mr. Dixit woh hum dono bas baat kar rahe the….we really hav a gud strong bond..

K: yes yes humara rishta bahot gehra hai just lyk her sari colour😆 (Karan said taking d anchal of Jenny's sari in his hand…Jenny gave him the look and he dropped the anchal…Jenny was not at all surprised wid his immaturity which did not seemed to have improved even an inch)😳

Karan and Jenny moved out of the fire exit.

RDX: oh ok waise mei aap dono ko hi dhund raha tha….Ms. Gupta I didn't knw u knew Mr.Malik personally but I was just coming to tell you that he is our new Councilor..

Jenny looked in shock at RDX den at Karan who was smirking.

K: andhe..

RDX: I'm sorry wat..

K: who actually Ms. Jenny compliment de rahi thi ke jisne mujhe hire kiya-

J: eh woh mei keh rahi thi ke koi andha hi hoga jo Mr. Malik ko councilor ke position mei na le (RDX seemed confused) becoz he's soo gud at counseling….ache tara se janti hoon isse.. he's very gud wid children I mean students (she said putting her hand on Karan's arms…Karan looked at it and winked at her she removed immediately😳)

RDX: oh yes dat he is….bohot saare students ne aapki bahut tariff ki hai Mr Malik..

K: thnx

J: jhoothe tariff honge (whispered Jenny which only Karan could hear)

RDX: aur Karan, Ms. Gupta yahan in dazzlers nd weaklings ko ek saath dance rehearsals kar ne ke liye assist karne aayi hai...

Karan looked shocked towards her and it was Jenny's tym to smirk.

RDX: and the Princi said it would be a delight if you both would work together and bring them all 2gether..

K&J: WAT??

RDX: kyun any problem??

Karan looked at Jenny he could not believe he had to work with her again…Jenny looked wid disgust dat she had to work again wid Karan and that too in sumthing she luvd to do….DANCE. They both sensed trouble coming ahead..

K: no RDX no problem at all

J: same here

RDX: All the best then Ms Gupta n Mr Mallik.. ( shakes hand wid both)

While both Karan and Jenny give a look to each other and both moved away in two opp direction...😳

...

that's all for part 8 guys.. i hope u liked the twist😳.. not many had thought about it right???

Well we were laughing n enjoying the comments u gave us after the promo.. Fire Exit = Kriyaansh..

Well very sorry to dissapoint you on this.. Was purposely done in the promo.. 😆 i think most of u are DMG fans as well.. so thats y v thot of getting this here... u also must be missing good days of DMG like we are.. N for those, who are not DMG fans, this may not be the best part for them.. But i hope then also u will enjoy reading this update.. 😃

N I HOPE U LIKED THIS SURPRISE WE PROMISED LAST TIME..😃

Keep Posting your Comments n Suggestions.. 😊😃

Thanks for Reading...!!!!!!!!

~~~ Mick N Farah ~~~

Edited by sweetshine - 14 years ago

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kumjoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#336

Aaj ke Episode ke Baad bhi main ZINDA hun ..Lao Lao Update Post karo...😆

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Saumya Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#337

are...!!! update kaha hai...??

epi ki disappointment k baad yeh hi ummeed thi...!!!😉

NAHIII...!!!!!😆😆

-Saumya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: dildostiidancee
are...!!! update kaha hai...??
epi ki disappointment k baad yeh hi ummeed thi...!!!😉

NAHIII...!!!!!😆😆

-Saumya

ITS ON D WAY.. 😆 THODA TRAFFIC JAM HAI NA AAJ.. ISILIYE DELAY HO GAYA.. 😆

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amber (nick amy)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#339

awww...

AR all over!😃

but i was expecting it to be shilpa gupta...i mean, she was the best dancer out of the three... 😕

oh, well...it was still a nice part!! 👏

hope u add some kriyaansh or swaron scenes next, though..😊

Edited by misslaugheasily - 14 years ago

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chetna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#340

its just awesome n loved u introduced jeni n karan

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