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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome parts.I just loved them...
I read the 2 parts together.
I'm sorry for the late comments Punam.
My lappy is out of der.I'm commenting from mobile.So maaf karna is baar short comment ke liye.
Rishima is soo naughty just like her dad.
AR moment was so cute...
Can't wait for AR's marriage now.
plz update the next part soonest.
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part😊...loved it❤️
waiting for ar marriage😃
and thanks for the PM:-)
CONTINUE SOON...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum Ossum Ossum Ossum Ossum!!! 🤗
Waiting for next part!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awwwm.,..
Nyc part. Rishima is so cute. Waitng fr their marriage. Lvd the moment. Cont sooon cant wait ziada
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Posted: 13 years ago
desperately waiting 4 AR's marriage! cont soon
thnx 4 pm :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey di...!!!

aap update kab karogi GKD and duke&dutchess???
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Posted: 13 years ago

the following 7 member(s) liked the above post:

PoonamT, peachgirl, TANVI_SEXY, Jyo_Ksg, KaJen_addiction, crazy4KASH_AR, teenorchid...thanks a lot friends for your lovely and inspiring comments...sorry for so so late...actually last whole month i was out of town and now i am very sick ,mainly i have eyes problem which is making me unable to read or post any ff...


hey friends,promise i will read and comments on your ff surely,plz. give me some time for it...thanks a lot...


now the next part...


chapter--22






"sarva mangla mangle sive sarbatha sadhike
sarnema sthambhake gouri narayani namastute
"


vivah sampann hua,ab jakar mata -pita and gurujano ka asirwad lijiye...

"dulhe ji,ab dulhan ka hath choden aur mata -pita ka asirwad len.."panditji almost cried to broke arman's trance.


But dulha was lost in another world, giving panditji a deaf ear…actually he didn't know, when he came in the mondop,when his dulhan sat beside him and when vivah rituals started,when ferey was finished, he never knew anything…just knew that after a lot of struggle,he was getting his basket,his jaan,and now must not leave her hand at any cost.



Actually when arman entered in dr. sashank's house ,since then kept silence totally…he couldn't believe that today he was going to marry , with his basket.. ..whom he had lost at a time ,not once..many times he lost his riddhima, left all hopes to get back her in his life…today he was getting back his this precious treasure again,his life,his basket…





When he entered dr.sashank's house..nani and padma wecomed him with aarti and put mangal tika on his forehead and took him to the vivah mandap … but when he discovered his basket as the most beautiful bride in this world.. ..totally lost himself…..he was lost in dreamland with his basket..whom he had achieved after a great fight with his fate.




"FLASHBACK" --- yaadein



ARMAN : "mujhe pyar ho gaya hai...haan mujhe pyar ho gaya hai.."



"aur ye pyar kitni baar aur kis kisse hui hai dr.arman?"riddhima asked blinking her eyes….



but riddhima's heart melted for arman…she fell in love with him…


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ANJALI TO ARMAN : "mai apna bet wapas leti hun arman…..


RIDDHIMA TO ANJALI :" mai arman se pyar nahi karti di,mai arman se pyar nahi karti…."


ANJALI TO ARMAN : "mujhe lagta hai arman,tumhe riddhima se sach me pyar ho gaya hai..don't worry..wo tumse jyada din gussa nahi rah sakti….



RIDDHIMA TO PADMA : "ma,koi to hoga mere jaisa..wo arman nahi hai ma..kahin to hoga mera mr.right."



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RIDDHIMA'S CONFESSION OF LOVE : "I hate…I love you arman…I love you…."


ARMAN TO DR.SASHANK : "dr. sashank,riddhima meri hi hai aur mai usey pakar rahunga..riddhima ko arman se koi alag nahi kar sakta"




But they separated….their fate which is always the greatest enemy of true lovers ,separated them and laughed on his strenghth,actually not arman-riddhima ,all true lovers like heer-ranjha,laila-majnu,romio -juliet,sohni -mahibal..all were the criminals in the eyes of fate...as true love is not allowed in this cruel world. but again they won,their love won and they met...




ARMAN : "aaj mere jeene ka maqsad mere samne hai"
"tumhare bina mai sirf saans le raha tha,ab jina chahta hun"..
akelepan ko chodkar meri jindagi me aur kuch nahi tha..lekin ab tum mill gayi ho,ab kuch nahi chahiye
"ab hum kabhi alag nahi honge,hamesha sath rahenge...promise..."




"BUT UNFORTUNATELY"



RIDDHIMA : "mai ab sidh ki patni hun arman..mai dr. riddhima modi.."


DR. SASHANK :"dr. arman ish sachchai ka samna ab karna hoga aapko ,riddhima ab sadi suda hai,sadi ka matlab aap bhi achchi tarah jante hain…aapko riddhima ko ab bhulna hoga.."


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"FLASHBACK"




RIDDHIMA(with teary eyes) :"ja rahe ho? humesha ke liye?


ARMAN(in choked voice) : "ish janam me to tum sidh ki ho chuki ho,par agle 6 janam me tum meri rahogi..

"sorry,mai tumhare itna karib aaya,actually mujhe pata nahi tha tumhari sadi ho gayi hai...

bye the way,tum sindoor me bahut khubsurat lagti ho..


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"NOW" "in vivah mandap"


arman looked at riddhima, who now put on sindoor of his name..and looked more beautiful…more beautiful than this time cause now she put on sindur of her love..her life.


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FLASHBACK"



RIDDHIMA (trying to hide her tears,but unabled) :" jab tum chale gaye they na,tab saanse lena band kar diya tha maine..aaj mai jinda hun sidh ki wajah se,to phir keun? keun karte ho mujhse itna pyar?



RIDDHIMA :"jab tum mujhe aur sidh ko karib laane ki koshish ki thi,tumhe bilkul takleef nahi hui thi?sara dard akele chpchap sahte rahe,bina kisise kuch kahe...




NOW (IN VIVAH MANDAP)"


"sachchi bataun..bahut takleef hui thi,lagta tha jaan de dun but maine tumhare papa se promise kiya tha na…" arman said in his heart…looking at his beautiful bride..




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"yaadein"



AND THEIR HEART BROKEN PROMISE ….."jate jate aur ek wada karna chahta hun,is janam me hum ek dusre ke sath nahi rah sake,lekin agle 6 janmon me tum meri rahogi"..



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"NOW"


"tum har janam me meri ho riddhima,agle 100 janmon tak,jab tak ye duniya hai…isey to ab bhagwan ko bhi manna para hai…arman mumbled and caught riddhima's soft hand more tightly.





his trance broke hearing a sweet ,whispering voice..."arman,kahan khoye ho? panditji kuch kah rahe hain..."





love u all
punam






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Posted: 13 years ago
awww. U updated... Plz take care of urself... Nd finally they r married...wooowww. Cnt wait fr next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow! AR got married!
can't wait 4 next update! cont asap
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved this part so much.
Flashback was amazing.
Plz update the next part soonest..

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