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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

u ended it so soon? :/

i never expected dis ff ending like dis

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

kinzzziii...hats off for suc a fab ff and a superb ending...

it ws soo realistic

loads of love

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

i dont even know what to say...this left me in tears...for nupur to get news of her family in such a way is heartbreaking...and i cant believe this ended so fast but im glad you ended this realistically...i dont think i wouldve been able to come to terms with nupur ever forgiving mayank...even if he didnt kill her family, he was an accomplice in what led up to it...please come back soon with another story

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

U end it i never thought it will end this way heartbreaking but it was beautiful end Kinzu coz it would fell awkword if nups forgive mayu well written FF hun thanks alott for the pms plzzz do come back with new happy FF of mayur

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

OMG!!! wht is this??!!!!!

its a shocking end...

nvr thought tht u'll end it so soon n like this...

v painful ending...

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 just wanna say that i hate sad endings to mayur ff

all over FF was so good!

but cant see this ending

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Mitali

@...Mitali...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

OMG kinzu...😲

i was talking abt the 9th update wen u updated the 10th part too...😆

i m still shocked...😲😲😲😲

hats off o u to write such a story 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

there was not a perfect ending, a happy ending but still it was beautiful...😛

i just cant get out of it , this all was so unexpected...😲

anyways it was an outstanding ff

the most different n a unique ff i hav ever read...👏👏👏👏

hats off to u, u r just the best writer... 😃

it was a pleasure reading it...

hope u cumwith an other ff soon 😳

Edited by ...Mitali... - 13 years ago

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

OMG!!you completely blowed me off with the end..hats off..:D

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I would sound weird but m actually proud the way you twisted everything and gve this story this end...I wud again like to mention, having read every story of yours, m so so so happy with my Angel's progress...<3 like seriously, here we all thought she will fall for him, then come to kno abt Mayu's lie to her and all..but you -- SUPER AWESOME!!... Thats what makes the Writer Angel- One of the BESTEST!! <3

Me so glad to see the way u ended it :D *hats off👏 ❤️* I was shocked no doubt ! but more amazed .. Brilliant writing my dear..just BRILLIANT...😳

Okay, so coming back to the story...I can just say..they were Unfortunate..very unfortunate...the way wrote, I hav nothing to say except that, ki it was actually ubfortunate and pricking ! Mayank Got what he wanted, he trapped her... her mind...forever ...ekkks the last para gave me goosebumps!! Anyways it had to be this way...She worshipped her family.

Now, I want you to be back with a new magic soon..m addicted to ur ffz...well, u kno that :D

take care love u Infinite..🤗 and Godless ya always <33

Once again...hats off...*claps*..MINDBLOWING JOB!! ❤️

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 13 years ago