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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

I'm not finding any words to say! Still in a shock! 😲 Will edit the comment soon!

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago

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stargurl34

@stargurl34

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

OMGGG. i swear i got goosebumps after reading 2 words- "the end". i think im on the verge of tears, u have no idea, ur such a gifted writer. I wish the story ended in a different way, but I love the fact that you ended it on a realistic note. OMG i honestly have no words, please keep writing more FF's and oneshots. ur a gift to the fan fictions forum !

love,

-kiran

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

res... ill comment kal 😳
n im upset that u ended it... 😳

edited:

No like seriously? i took a whole night to get over it and i still cant believe that you've actually ended this one... 😔

but it was beautiful... very well written... sigh, she actually gave up! losing her family just made her lose her senses... awwh the part where she imagines the pillows as her Bauji and sisters, it was so argh... !

Trapped for a day, trapped with him forever... no doubt she would be nice to him, she would never ever fight back, yet she would never be able to feel anything again... damn kinzu, why did it have to end this way 😭

i expect another magical story... woh be ASAP 😳

thank you for the PM... love ya 🤗 ❤️ mwahzz ❤️

Edited by ria.arjun - 13 years ago

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

you ended it so soon and so sad😭nevertheless i couldnt think of a better ending to it i knew she was never going to love him back it was literally impossible. yet i never imagined the shock of losing her family would make her insane🥺the last line was so sad and depressing i seriously felt really bad for her she lost everything in one go😭

beautifully written throughout. please start a new one soon with a happy ending😆i dont like sad ends for mayur even in FF's😆 thanks for the pm🤗

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

i nevr evr thought this end...

im spechless...maybe numb...

no words really out of words...

wonderfull story kinza..wonder it self

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Kinzu..
I just dunno hw to react or express my feelings after reading this update..
Its not just that u ended it so soon but u ended it in a way that left me utterly shocked..I knew it would be a sad ending but this is way too traumatic..it just affected me in an indescribable manner ..The power of your words is just amazing..
Plz be back soon with a happy ff..I need a mental therapy certainly from you after this shocking update

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

i wont say = it was a magical ending
but yah it was indeed something different which touched my heart

i loved ur ending kinza

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

it was an awesome part ,the way her pain was depicted was so deep and beautiful

BUT WHY DID YOU END IT? we wanted mayur scenes more romantic ,emotional

but anyways it was your decision so i respect it

but please can you give an epilogue if possible??????

- lovenuckts!!!!!!!!!!

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

OK... FOR THE FIRST TIME IN LIFE, I M HAPPY IT ENDED HERE AND THIS WAY... SMHOW EVERYOTHR THING THT SHE WAS SUFFERING WAS A DIFFERENT THING, BUT AFTR SEEING WHT HER FAMILY HAD SUFFERED, I DNT THINKK THR COULD HAVE BEEN A BTR ENDING... M SHIVERING AND NOW I NEED A HUG KINZU!!! THIS IS THE MOST BRILLIANT PEICE OF WRITING BY U!!! LOVE U!!!