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Posted: 13 years ago
just like a sea...so much noise still its peacefull...
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Posted: 13 years ago
suddenly what happened to nupur? may be nupur has some plan
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Posted: 13 years ago
This update was srsly something out of blue..
Nupur trust Mayank..she was even bothered about his feelings..
hope she falls in love with him soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
so heart wrenching yar
I am really feeling so bad for both of them
Lovely update
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update Kinza..👏👏

Superb!!!!!!👏👏

but I am not able to understand Nupur's action..has she surrendered?? If yes..then hw come so quickly..I have many questions regarding her sudden change in behaviour...😕😕may be I shud wait for few more updates..to get my answers..🤔🤔

Cont soon..😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice upate.
awesome.
poor nupur ...she even forget to react.
i hope, mayank do somthing.
conintue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That captain was sickening🤢 I hate men who have that point of view towards girls🤢 the way he said idhar pariyan hai was so cheap🤢 I guessed mayank was the shareef one amongst them😆 and it's nice that at least one person has his head screwed on properly😆 yet nevertheless I don't see how nupur can ever like him; he may be better than the others but he's still one of them👎🏼
another fab chapter loved chapter 2 tons🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 3; can't believe her father and her sisters died😭 that caption and Joseph are such sick people.🤢 can't believe what they told him about enjoying her and all🤢 dont know why have a feeling that the person who informed the police was none other than mayank. I love how protective he is of nupur it's so adorable😍 but again like I said can't see her ever reprocating his feelings especially once she finds out her family is dead coz of them
amazingly written 👏
Edited by MayUr-ArTi_fan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good point made by Riya he should've told her the truth instead of saying he can't let her go👎🏼 without a doubt she's going to think he's the one who killed her father and sisters😭 the bit at the start was so adorable😍 but her constant pleading made me really sad😭 feel really bad for her; her desperation and anguish was really painful to read about
all in all another great chapter. Perfect mix of love, care, fear and everything👍🏼 I can tell this FF will have a sad end cant see nupur ever liking him I'm guessing he will die trying to save her than nupur will realize he wasn't bad😭 but if that's not what you're thinking don't get any ideas from this🤣 thanks for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5 was so sad the dream she had about her family was so heartbreaking😭 Mayank is the sweetest kidnapper I've ever seen😆 but nevertheless the fear she has from him is never going to leave her no matter how nice he is to her👎🏼 the end was also sad I'm guessing maybe those two were the ones who killed his family so he's with them trying to avenge his family's death but that seems very unlikely considering the fact that he seems to have chosen that path himself👎🏼
another fab chapter 👏

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