MN - Trapped in MAGIC.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Express.. What an update... I could literally see the disgust and hatred in Nupur'eyes which covered her fear and the pain that Mayank's is feeling and his helplessness...

I loved one sentence in your update though..

I never doubted this physical heart beating with a rhythm, providing a normal blood pressure to your body, I am talking about the heart which feels the pain and understands what other people have in their own hearts

Don't be surprised if you see it as one of my FB's status updates... 😊

Amazingly written.. no wonder you are one of my FAV updates... 🤗

Edited by .Divya. - 13 years ago

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

brilliant update. I am confused what mayank actually is?

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

awesome updt kinza
beautifully written one.cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Im enjoying each n every bit of this ff...
U write all so interestingly and descriptively its difficult to kep patience for the updates...
Now im more willing to know abt mayank's past...Coz still his words made me feel that he has something bitter in his past...
Cont soon...

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

i honestly dont know what to think of mayank...i guess he's still a mystery thats why...i dunno if i should expect for anything to ever happen between mayur...but one thing that is certain is that the magic will overtake mayank's mind...and if in the end he doesnt get nupur, i hope that at least it makes him leave behind the criminal world he claims to have willingly entered

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

very nice update.

feel bad for nupur.

mayank has so much guts ...only he ahs the guts to talk to nupur like that.

continue soon/

thanks for the pm.

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

I really Loved Nupur's blind believe in God and that's truth God never do injustice with any one

Lovely update

thanks For Pm

cont soon

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Damn Good Update !!

Nupur not moving an inch even after being soo close😲😳

Kinza u got me begging for romance !! 😵

Now i want a romantic,passionate scene btwn these two☺️ a.s.a.p

Im loving Mayank's attitude and Nupur's change behavior 😎

Pllleaaase update next part soon😳

Edited by ArTizAngel - 13 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

brilliant update
very interesting
i m eagerly waiting to knw abt mayank's past-

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Hey Kinzu apu🤗..

First of all, I'm so sorry for not commenting on the last 3 chapters! *holding ears*😳 This school really makes me stressed out, so I don't get the strength to type! 😔 But I do have read the chapters and truly speaking, each of them are just perfect! I have no words to explain how flawlessly you have written them! ⭐️ I love how the story is proceeding, the pace, the development - everything is well-maintained! 👏 At first, I was really sad for Nupur and Mayank as well! 😭 Poor Mayank had to behave strict with her sometimes just for her safety, but I'm loving how he takes care of her! 😳 All the MN convos were fabulously written and so realistic! 👏 Loved them! 😳 Nupur is not scared of Mayank anymore, I like it! 😃 Waiting desperately to know about Mayank's past! 😊

Continue soon and thanks for the PMs! Will try to comment though I'm not sure but don't worry, won't stop reading and pressing the like tab! 😃

Love,

Bidushy❤️