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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

interesting updt kinza
loved confident nupur..ont soon
thanks for the pm

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

nupur hates mayank too much. its interesting. I hope there may be some magic when nupur will love him

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Ayesha

@..-Ayesshhaa-..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

amazing
sorry for not commenting on your last updates

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

very nice update.

like mayank.

waiting for next update.

continue soon.

.thanks for the pm.

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Fantu another FF of urs Congo🥳

OMG ur FF's name made me interpret it right, its gonna be a suffocating life story of theirs

i so so hae such people...they killed her family when they were such good n innocnt people

though Mayank was trying hard to protect her from start n is very nice to her eversince but still Nupur liking him is a far fetched thought even for later in the story😕

n i see Fantu u have started playing wid words dear n i so love to ponder over ur framing of sentences specially in this FF😳 keep rockking⭐️

sigh finnally read it😆

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Priya Iyer

@priya_1234

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Loved the update dear.

Loved this new improved confident nups. I love the way u play with ur characters.

Super .. waiting for the next update.

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

😊😊smile in nupur's face...mayank falling for nupur...😊

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

nice updates, sorry for the late comment!

so nupur's house was intruded, and mayank was part of that gang? :O she was scared, so she hid in her room while her dad called the police. but he was too late, and they tied him up.

they took nupur with him, and mayank had a strange connect with her. he wanted to protect her! aww.

nupur's family was killed? man, thats cruel. but good to know that mayank did'nt want that to happen.

mayank tried to make nupur eat, but she was'nt willing. He had to force her to eat, and when that did'nt work, he blackmailed her. he lied to her, and she believed him.

she was not afraid of him anymore, and was happy to see him get irritated on the mistress thing!

thanks for the pm

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stargurl34

@stargurl34

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

heyy you ! so i have been a silent reader of this FF and sorry for being super lazy and never commenting on this FF before, but ur writing style is awesome awesome awesome !! continue as soon as you can ! P.S- im loving the carefree nupur. Your writing always brings a smile to my face ! I'm super loving this concept <3

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Kinza !!!!!!!!!🤗

This FF is just awesome..👏👏

I loved the concept...first few updates really gave me shivers...I myself was in a fear of what might happen next..😕
It is really cruel dat Nupur's family is dead & she doesn't knws it..

Their talk over Mistress was really nice...

Overall..all the updates were fantastic & brilliant..👏👏

I am eagerly waiting for next..😃😃

Thanx for the PMs..😳😳

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