MN - Trapped in MAGIC. - Page 13

luved it to the core

just read from part 2- 4...i loved it😃

brilliantly written👏

this is the best FF by you atleast for me⭐️...i am completely hooked...u write suspense so well👏

u have played out such an interesting scenario- girl trapped in with a kidnapper with a heart of gold...she should hate him for what he does but will she love him back for who he actually is? can't wait to see!

mayank has already fallen in love with her innocent looks

continue super soon🤗
love ya❤️

1st of all thanks a lot 4 ur wishes kinza..it truely means a lot to me😃...🤗🤗luv u loads...

coming to the update...well i hv been numb since the very 1st update of this FF...in ur other FFs once i hv got started reading them,i always had some sort of relief n satisfaction due to its certain happy ending n i m really very particular n sensitive regarding this one n only couple...but this time that certainty is certainly not here while reading the updates..with every single update my fear increases thinking about the horrendous destiny...somehow those feelings r coming bk again which i had during forbidden magic, n somehow in other words its been written in a way as if it can b named as forbidden magic as welln very unfortunately while reading this ff,2 of the films' names continuously keep on rotating in my mind...bichchu(rani-bobby starer) n jannat (imran-sonal starer)..both of them had a painful tragic ending...bcos it always shows off dat people who belongs to this underworld,find hard to come out of it n have a safe life with their family...not even in a single case we hv seen an exception till date...neither even in stories nor in films..everywhere the same tragic,devastating end...n the feeling of hving the same end all over again over here also,makes my heart cringe...:(((

coming to ur update...my heart comes out 4 this poor girl seeing her in such a terrible condition..but why did mayank took such a risk by not telling the truth...it wil eventually lead to more bitterness in her heart...dunno what more to say...i m numb at the severity of the situation...

Just mindblowing part..
The story is getting interesting...U portrayed nupur's pain beautifully...
Cont soon...

beautiful/ mayank loves nupur, but nupur hates mayank. interesting

they killed her family pls tell me the other guy was lying poor nupur

Oh! This thing I like. The fear, helplessness, force, helplessness. Its all woven, perfectly.

The story is paced well, and I look forward to reading more of it.

Me likes. :D

Love,
Akki :)

Lovely update
loved mayank's caring side

It was amazing Kinzu