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Anila

@-Anila-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

awesome update API...👏👏

loved it lodsss...😃

n han jisne bhi ye title likha hain wah kya khub likha hain...👍🏼

so Nupur now trusted Mayank...😊

n he felt guilty for saying a lie...😒

bt i guess agar woh asa nehi karta to Nupur ki halat aur buri hoti...

phir bhi m scared for dat moment wen she will know d truth...😔😕😔

Mayank is really caring for Nupur...😳

waiting eagerly for ur next update...

love u API...🤗

Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Moving house will be back in a week's time will reply to all parts individually than😊 till then reserved😃

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

superb update kinziii

aww...feeling really bad for nupur

mayank has no other option bt to lie...

loads of love

P.S: thnx for posting today

PPS: loved da title😉

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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Aysha Saxena

@aysha_mayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Fantuuu...beautifully written...🤗

The title is awesome...whoever wrote that...

and the way you explained Mayank's emotional turmoil

and Nupur started trusting him!!!...but he is too guilty for lying to her

He should have told the truth...

now when she would start falling for him and truth would come out..she will hate him even more

Update soon Fantu🤗

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

amazing

what a title and what an end

u r an amazing writer

luved it to the core

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

mayank has to say lie. nupur have to trust . interesting

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

its painfull...he cant have heart...he jsut cant have one...this illusion will break evrythng, now sumhow im fearing mayank;s end rather thn nupurs...

gr8 cont soon

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

nice update
good that nupur trusting mayank.but mayank should've told the truth.when nupur will learn it she'll hate mayank

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

This is getting so complected

Lies Never stay Longer

Hope Nothing bad will happen further

thanks for pm

cont soon

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Ufff kinza ur ffs r addicted...How badly i want ur update everyday and continuously check my pm box if u updated...
I ws reading it first time in one go and second time ws absorbing nupur's pain and mayank's helplessness u wanted to portray here...
Everything ws sooo perfect...u described the whole situation, their feelings so naturally, nt one word more or less...
I lost myself in this update...its indeed one of the most amazing parts i've read so far...
The title surely took my attention and the last line made me more greedy...
Brilliant piece...thnxx for this ever so amazing ff kinzu...

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