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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
dear friends!!

i was going to update today, but couldnt because my back hurts very much and im not able to sit properly. hope to be better tommorow, and if i get enough likes and comments, maybe i will give double updates!!;-)

so pls keep liking and commenting.

love you all,

bushra
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
i hope your back gets better :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
yaar this is not fair
i really dont like that
y did dadi do that
if maan thought
he would take geet away from ther
but nooo it dint happen
and then this SR
grrr disgusting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Get well soon😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi bushra add me to pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I M REALLY VERY SAD WHILE READING THIS FF

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shimmerr

dear friends!!

i was going to update today, but couldnt because my back hurts very much and im not able to sit properly. hope to be better tommorow, and if i get enough likes and comments, maybe i will give double updates!!;-)

so pls keep liking and commenting.

love you all,

bushra

NO PROBLEM HEALTH COMES FIRST
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
hey dears,

sorry for letting you all wait so long.
my back is still hurting but im now able to sit a while on my bed and upload the next part.
thx for all you comments and wishes.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nina (Danina) thank you soo much for helping me for this part!!

Love you dear!!🤗

Part 6:

Sonu walked slowly to the bed and sat down in front of Geet. He sat there for some time and slowly reached her ghungad with a smile on his face.

Geet was clutching her knees tighter to herself. He lifted her Ghungat and threw it on the bed.

Geet closed her eyes tight shut. He lifted his hand to touch her cheek, but she turned her head around. He thought she is very shy and tried talking to her and taking her nervousness.

S: Are you shy?? Don't be. I'm your husband and you don't need to be nervous or shy in front of me.

He again tried to touch her. This time Geet hold his hand.

G: Don't touch me!!

S: what do you mean don't touch me?! I'm your husband and have all the rights to touch you!!

Geet stood up and tried to go to the door, when he grabbed her hand and pulled her to himself. He locked his arms around her slim waist and pulled her more to himself. Geet struggeled to free herself, but he won't listen and tried to kiss her. She began cying out loud, but he wouldn't hear them or see her tears, which flow down her eyes. Geet shook her head from one side to the other to flee from his lips, which continuesly tried to kiss her forcefully. She pushed him with all her power and slapped him tight on his cheek.

Whith that shock, Sonu freed her for a moment. Geet took the opportunity to run to the door. She tried to open it but it was locked. She struggeled to open it, but she couldn't, as Sonu, who overcame the shock that his wife slapped him on their SR, grapped her and pushed her on the bed.

He came over her, but Geet continuesly kicked and punched with her legs and arms to free herself.

At last she was succesfull and kicked him between his legs with full power. He sreamed in pain and freed her at the spot. He was in so much pain that he forgot anything around himself and chrushed to the floor.

Geet stood up from the bed and went to the corner of the room, after getting a knife from her drawer, which her mother gave her a long time back. The knife was a family heirloom, which was given from daughter to daughter. She sat at the corner with the knife in her hand and clutched her knees to herself.

Sonu recovered after some time from his pain and stood up from the floor. He looked around and found Geet sitting in the corner with a knife.

He thought about forcing her again and this time to be successfull, but let the idea fall, as she had a knife in her hands. He would take her knife away tomorrow and would try it tomorrow evening again. He smirked at his idea and ley down on the bed and fell asleep.

Geet at the other side of the room was so much afraid, that she couldn't even close her eyes for a second. She was awake the whole night and cyed till she was to exhausted and fell asleep due to tiredness.

In the morning someone knocked on the door and both woke up with the noise. Sonu stood up and opened the door ajar, so that Brij, who stood at the door couldn't look inside. Brij whispered something to Sonu.

Sonu nicked his head, said one minute and closed the door again. He walked to the bed and took the spread from there. Then he walked too Geet.

She was confused at what he was going to do. Sonu saw her confused state and saw the opportunity. He took the knife from her hand. He took her right hand forcefully and cut in her palm. She screamed with the pain. He took her bleeding hand and smeered it on the spread, so that there were blood stains on it. He smirked and left with the spread to the door.

There, a waiting Brij was happy to see the stains on the spread and proud of Sonu, that he did the deed and was now a real man, after claiming his wife.

Sonu smiled and got again inside the room and walked directly to the bathroom. He came out after 10 minutes bathed and dressed and leaved the room, after giving Geet a look, which told her, that the issue of the night wasn't forgotten and he would take his revenge.

After he left the room, Geet stood quickly up and locked the door. She stood against the door and let out a breath of releaf. She quickly took some clothes and left for the bathroom to take a shower. She tried to wash the touch of that monster away. Maybe he wasn't succesfull yesterday, but this night she wouldn't be able to escape him. She cried out loud in the shower.

After some time she came into the room all dressed in a blue churridar and tidied up the room, which was in a mess due to their fighting. She heared after a while the men of the house all leaving and came out of the room to find her grandma looking at her with sad and teary eyes.

Geet walked to her and hugged her tight. Then she left for her room again to think with a clear head about everything what happened in the last week and specialy last night.

She had lost the love of her life for his sake and married a monster, who tried to forec her in the first night.

She couldn't live this life any more and she wouldn't!!

If she couldn't be together with Maan, than she would leave this world forever!!

She stood up from the bed and took a chair to the middle of the room, went to the store room to take a rope. She went back to the room and stood on the chair and tied the rope to the ceiling of the room. Than she took the other end of the rope and tied it around her neck.

She took one last breath with tears in her eyes and said to herself I love you Maan and kicked the chair under her feeds away.


PRECAP:??

Part 5 Page 11 Previous-Next Part 7 Page 17

So this was part 6. How was the part? No precap dears.

pls comment and hit the like tab as it motivates me to write further.

I would love to read your thoughts to this update!!

Next update by over 30 likes!!

Love you all!!

Bushra🤗

Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
loved it amazing update cont soon

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