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Shimmerr thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
thx for all the comments!!
will try to update in the evening.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
dadi
dadima is holding his hand
am i right
i know
she will say what ever happened
that was awesome update dear
plz update soon
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5:

Person: You are Maan right? Maan looked at the person with questioning eyes.

M: Yes. You, but he was stopped before he could end his sentence.

P: I'm Parvati Handa, Geets dadi. Maan looked at her with shock. How does she know him?

M: How do you know?

D: Geet told me everything. I know you love her. Now tell me how much. What would you do for her?

M: I could give my life for. I could do anything for her.

D: Beta, if you want that Geet is alive, then please go from here and don't come ever back. They will kill her in the spot if they knew that you are here. If you really love her, then for her sake, just go away. Go. Goo!!

With that said, dadi pushed Maan away. He had no other choice. For her sake he had to leave. If he will do anything, they will kill her. He can't do this. He will live a life without his Geet, if she will be so alive. But he can't live with the thought that she died because of him.

With one last look to her, he rushed out with a broken heart and the mind to have lost her forever. Once he stepped outside the venue, he run, run and run, until his lungs couldn't take it. He was on an empty river side and sreamed out loud with all the pain, hurt and the feeling to be death in him. He lost her. He lost her too. She was the only one left who he loved, but destiny took her away from him, like the accident 2 years ago, which took her away forever.

He broke down completely and fell on his knees. He screamed, cryed and punched the stony floor. But he knew that nothing can bring his Geet back any more.

It was now evening and all the guests were leaving the venue. Geet was crying constantly after the incident with Maan. How could she ever forget the pain in his eyes when he looked at her with shock and hurt? She would never forget it.

She was like a death body, which was dragged from one side of the hall to another.

Then they took her outside and made her sit in the car. Sonu sat beside her. He again tried to hold her hand, but she covered her hands with her dupatta and sat as far as possible from him.

They reached home. They took her out of the car and took her in her room.

Sonu paid all his money for the wedding and for Geets dowry, so that there was just a bit left, to open a store in London. As he can't affort an own home, they have to live with the Handas. So Sonu shifted in in Geets room.

Geet was seated on the decorated bed and was just praying for her life to end at this moment.

She could hear the giggles of the girls who stood in front of her door and waiting for the boys, to get their money.

She could hear foodsteps and a few deep man voices. They were arguing with the girls about the money.

Finely the girls left and the boys were saying lines like "good luck!!" and "enjoy!!". She felt disgusted by all of them. Then she heared the door open. Someone entered the room and locked the door behind.

She new it was him and what he was going to do.


Precap: SR

Part 4 Page 9 Previous-Next Part 6 Page 14

So this was part 5. What do you think will happen now? will geet accept her faith and live together with her husband?

Pls hit the like button and comment, as it motivates me to type further.

Sorry for grammatical or spelling mistakes, as English is my third language and not so well.

Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Yay me first🥳 Daadi stopped him poor maan so helpless😭😭😭😭😭
Maan lost someone else 2yrs back who is that😕😕😕😕😕
poor geet me very sad😭😭😭😭😭
Waiting for next part continue soon😳😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
amazing update.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Beautiful update I hope sonu uske saath kuch galat nakare
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Awesomeee
nuh-uh i want Maaneet to end up as a couplee xD
i really liked this party
gosh i feel bad for them
cont soonn
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Awesome update!
But poor maaneet 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
sorry for late comment
poor maan

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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Suuuperb;D
Loved it;D
continue soon:D
thanks for the pm;D

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