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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 7:

Daadi, who came to talk with Geet, got a shock, as she saw Geet with a rope around her neck and trying to push the chair under her feeds away.

She stormed in to the room and held Geet from her legs and held her tightly, so that she wouldn't kick with her legs. Dadi somehow managet to calm Geet down and put the rope away from her neck. He hugged Geet tight after pulling her down and cryed, thinking what would have happened, if she wouldn't have reached on time.

Geet hugged dadima so thight, that dadi had it hard to breath, but didn't said anything.

G: Why did you stop me? Why didn't you let me just die?

She cried loud. Dadi took her to the bed and make her sit down. She took her hand to hers and had another shock at what she saw. Geets right palm had a deep cut in it. The wound was not too old and she could guess how that wound came to her hand.

D: Why have he done something like that? How could he hurt you? Have he done anything else to you too??

Geet shook her had and told her everything what happened, after they left her in the room. Dadi couldn't take it any more. How could someone stoop so low and try to force his wife? As if that wasn't enough, he cut her hand to prove to others that he was a real man? She had to do something, before that monster could harm her more.

D: Geet, now listen to what I will say. Do you know where Maan lives?

G: Yes, but why are you asking?

Dadi took her phone out and dialed a number.

D: Hello, xxx caf there? Can I speak to Mister Maan please?

He took a leave for today? Ok, I will reach him from his home number than. Thank you very much.

She hung up and Geet looked at her confused.

D: now listen to me carefully dear. Where is your passeport?

G: In moms drawer. Why are you asking?

D: don't ask questions and go and bring it. She nodded her head and brought her passeport. In the meanwhile, dadi took a small bag and took few of Geets belongings, which are needed, and packed them inside the bag. Then she took the sac from the besidetable, where all the jewellery and money from the wedding were kept. She took the sac and packed it to the other items. Than she took Geets handbag and and gave both of them to Geet.

D: Take them all and go to Maan. Don't look behind and just go straight to him. When you meet him, you both will take the next flight and go far away from here. Don't worry, I will handle the things here, but hurry up and take the first flight. In the bag is enough money to start a new life together.

Both of them had tears in their eyes.

G: Dadi

D: Don't. Just go. I love you!!

G: I love you too dadi!!

They hugged each other. Maybe, they won't see each other ever again. After a short time they broke apart and dadi pushed Geet out of the house, as it is now or never for Geet. She ran for her life.

@ Maans apartment:

He sat on the floor. His eyes were red and he hadn't slept for the whole night. He was numb and couldn't think about anything.

Out of nowhere the door began to ring. Who could this be? No one here knows who he is and where he lives. Who could it be?

He ignored it and tried to think about something else, but the door rang continuesly and he was getting angry. He stood up and went to the door. He opened it without looking who it was.

M: what is it??

Before he could look who is on the door, the person jumped on him and hugged him thight from the neck. The moment the person touched him, he knew who it was.

M: GEET!!


Precap: ?

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So this was part 7.

Pls comment and hit the like tab.

Next update by 40 likes sweets!!

Love you all,

Bushra

Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome jst read two parts and it's really good , i'll read the remaining parts wenever i get enough tym
Thn for the PM :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmerr



there was a serial with this name, and im sure you watched the same vm which i watched too with the title music of the serial.😊


the name is the same but the story here hasnt to do anything with it. in the serial it was about an affair of the young wife of an middle aged man (around fifty years old widower with two children) and his own nephew. my story is compleatly different.😉

seems lyk that vm maker is quite famous among maaneet lovers 'coz even i have watched that vm...😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: worldofdreams

seems lyk that vm maker is quite famous among maaneet lovers 'coz even i have watched that vm...😆😆



me myself im a turkish girl, and all my friends used to watch the serial.
so i was buff to see a vm on maneet on this song, but loved it.
the man who made the song is Toygar Isikli. he has made a lot of songs for serilas, which are all superb.😉
😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Amazing👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️ Dadi saved Geet Yay😃😃😃😃 Daadi is such a sweetheart she sent Geet to Her Maan😳😳😳😳🥳 Maan and Geet Yay😳😃
Waiting For next part continue soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow just loved it yaar..hope they would leave before anyone comes there...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Bushra 😊
Awesome update!!! Loved it lots!! 👏
Am happy that Daadi saved Geet!! 👍🏼
Can't wait for more!! 😃
Continue soon and thanxs for the pm! 🤗
Saba xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear
wat a turn
geet came to maan
super awesome
now hope every thing goes right
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!thankgod daadi ne bachaa li...
she helped geet to reach maan..so nice f her..
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Posted: 13 years ago
thx for your lovely comments!!
will update the next part, when there are over 40 likes.
pls keep commenting and liking!!
looove you alll,
bushra

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