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Posted: 19 years ago
haila shirley what a romantic part 😳
i love it 👏
keep up the gr8 work dear 😃
cant wait 4 next part😳
love u lots 🤗
Amina 😊 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Shirley

Hey guys....couldnt update episode 63 2day...was really busy.....but..i'll update it 2morrow... 😃

awww...its ok shirley 😊

w can wait😃😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

awww...its ok shirley 😊

w can wait😃😉

awww...chhwweett of u amina.....kitne sweet u tum....😳😛...updating episode 63😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Shirley

its not like that...i'm just trying to add a comedy scene...2 add some humour...i dont my stories 2 have the ordinary boring rona dhona..like all K serials...do....so..just a little humour.....😉

heyi know wat... i was the happiest reading that scene... don worry if ever again u wanna hit ekta with darts,guns or missiles... feel free to use me😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
Episode 63

(Next day is Holi. Akshat meets up wid Charu...and decides to tell everything 2 her).

akshat:erm..charu...i need 2 tell u sumthing..
charu: yeah...what is it?
akshat(takes off his engagement ring):i'm breaking off our engagement..
charu(shocked): why..?
akshat: erm...we cant married now..
charu: why...yesterday...u were fida on me..and now....did i do sumthing wrong?
akshat: no..for some reason...our luv wasnt tru luv....and...
charu: plz...akshat...dont do this 2 me...
akshat: i cant do it 2 her either....
charu: her?
akshat: amina...i luv her now...
charu: so..amina stole u away from me...
akshat: she didnt steal..i went 2 her..by self...and i cant live widout her....
charu: but..
akshat: i'm sorry...charu...(leaves)
charu(thinking): u didnt do the rite thing..amina...one day..u will have 2 suffer 4 this....

(Holi has began...the couples r throwing colours at each other)

arjun: oh marriyam....happy holi..(rubs colour on her cheeks)
marriyam: happy holi...(throws water on him...)
arjun: hey...not fair....
(marriyam starts running....arjun is chasing her)
marriyam: face it..arjun..u will neva catch me...
arjun: i will.....sooner or later...
marriyam: u mean neva...
(marriyam loses control and falls down....arjun catches her)
arjun: gotcha....hehe...what eva happened 2 "u will neva catch me"..?
marriyam: arjun..i think i hurt myself...
arjun(concerned): where...?
marriyam: erm...on the arm...
arjun: oh..show me...
(marriyam shows the scratch...arjun lightly kisses the scratch)
marriyam: hey./...stop it arjun..
arjun: but i can neva see yur pain....
marriyam: seriously?
arjun: seriously...
(both hug each other tightly...shefali sees this...and gets enraged)

(adi is talking 2 kavya a and kavya s...amal creeps up and throws colour on him)

adi: what the...?
amal: its holi...
adi: come here...u
amal: neva...
adi(throws colour on amal):there...we're equal now...
amal: but happy holi...hunny...
adi: happy holi...
amal: so..come on...lets play...more...
(both throw more colours at each other)

(tashu is playing wid shivangi and diya...when tashu can feel colour being rubbed on her face)

tashu: what the....who is it?
(she turns around and sees its sujal)
sujal(laughing): hahahahaha.....oh..luk at yur face...tashu...u luk like a doll...
tashu: oh really?
sujal: really....
tashu: and yur face..luks like a clown..
sujal: not it doesnt...
tashu(throws colour at him): now it does...hehehehe....
sujal(starts running after her): tashu....
(tashu starts 2 run..and goes behind veena)
tashu: mama....plz...plz...save me...save me..from this clown..
sujal: clown? me?
tashu: yeah...u...a....clown..
veena: hey..stop it..come on....dont be like kids...
sujal: OMG....amina and akshat luk so cute together..
tashu(luking around): where...?
sujal(grabbing tashu): here...
tashu: ooww....sujal..plz..let me...go...
sujal: only if u say sorry...
tashu: neva...
sujal: fine..then..(holds her arms tighter)
tashu: fine...fine..i'm sorry....
sujal: say...i'm sorry..sujal sweetheart..
tashu: i'm sorry sujal sweetheart...
sujal: gud....(lets go..)
tashu: such a mischevious boy u r..
sujal: thats me...hehe...

(amina and akshat r playing holi)

akshat(rubbing colour on her): Happy holi..hunny...
amina(putting colour on him): happy holi....akshat...
akshat: hmm...it would sound better..if it was happy holi hunny...
amina: ok...happy holi hunny...
akshat: thats like my gal...
amina(throws a jug of water on akshat): u r rite...that is like yur gal....hehehe...
akshat: hey..amina...not fair...
(amina starts running..akshat chases her)
akshat: amina...wait up..
amina: no...neva...
(amina slowsl down..akshat comes and carries her in his arms)
amina: u no..u dont have 2 carry me...
akshat: i do...
amina: why...?
akshat: bcoz u r tired...and u dont have the energy 2 walk
amina: how did u know that?
akshat: i tell it from yur eyes....(luks at her..amina lowers her eyes)
amina: u no..u might get tired from carrying me...
akshat: no...u r the one and only person in the world..who i will neva get tired of....i will just keep loving u...for ever..and eva..and eva...
amina: really..?
akshat: really...
(charu sees them two..and feels jealous)

(rahul is playing holi..wid sohan and piyush)

piyush: rahull?
rahul: huh..
(piyush throws colour on him)
rahul: hey..not fair..(gets the red colour and throws it at piyush but piyush moves out of the away...and goes on poonam's maang)

rahul: oops....i'm sorry....i didnt mean it...
poonam: its ok....its holi...u dont need sorries...4 throwing colour accidently..
rahul: erm..i'll get that off u..(about 2 rub off the colour in her hairline)
poonam: no..its ok...holi colours are auspicious..neva remove it...
rahul: rite...ok...erm..why dont u come and play wid us..?
poonam: sure..yeh bhi koi pochni wali baat hai..?
rahul: hehe...nahin...but still..
poonam: shall we go?
rahul: yeah..lets go...
(both play holi 2gether)

(tuhina is carrying colours ina tray and bumps into sohan..all the colours go on sohan's white shirt)

tuhina: oops....i'm so...so..so...sorry
sohan: oh..its ok...i luv it..when colours go on my shirt...
tuhina: erm...i'llw ash it 4 u..
sohan: nah...yaar..its ok...i'll keep it as a memory...wheneva i see it..i'll remember a pretty yet clumsy gal bumped into me...
tuhina: hehe....pretty but clumsy....
sohan: hmm...
tuhina: ok..and i will remember that i dropped all my colours on a cute but annoying guy...
sohan: annoying..?
tuhina: hmm....if i cna be clumsy..u annoying...
sohan: yur brother was rite...u r too much..
tuhina: my brother...? what else did he tell u?
sohan: oh..lots of things...and all of them r gud...
tuhina: rite....
sohan: come..lets play....holi..
tuhina: erm...ok..

(both play holi...)

(shirley is playing holi wid her frends..)

nihal: hey shirley....happy holi(throws purple colour at her)
shirley: very funny....(thorws yellow colour at him)
gauri: hey shirley....luk..rainbow colours...luk u squirt rainbow colours at once...
shirley: kool...
gauri: innit yaar....? i created it myself....
shirley: yurself..?
gauri: yep...i'm a genius...luk..i gave one 2 sujal-tashu..and in 5 mins..they dripping wet wid colours...(see that sujal-tashu r wet wid different colours)
shirley: can i have one...?
gauri: sure...fire it any1 u want...
shirley: ok..(aims at gauri..gauri aims it at shirley at the same time....and both get hit)
gauri: i think we have been staying wid each other..way too long..
shirley: any doubt..?
gauri: nope...let me see my next victim...(sees arjun and marriyam)...haha....romeo and juliet..hehe...(goes over and shoots at arjun-marriyam)
arjun: what the....?
gauri: eheheh....luk at yurself arjun...
arjun: not funny...gauri...not funny..
marriyam: wow gauri...thats a kool machine u made...
gauri: thanx...here have one yurself...fire at arjun..all u want..
marriyam: hehehe....i will
gauri: u no..us girls have these weapons...us girls r armed....the boys..bechari....heheh
marriyam: thanx gauri yaar....u r a genius...
gauri: i no...no need 2 mention it......

(shirley is about 2 shoot at shazy...but ends up hitting ansh..ansh's face is covered wid rainbow colurs)

(shirley bursts out laughing)

ansh: whats the menaing of that?
shirley(laughs): i'm sorry....i wanted 2 hit shazy..but u got in the way...
ansh: uff...i hate these colours....
shirley: hey..widout colours..holi has no fun...enjoy..ansh...
ansh: umm....u wont tell any1 about this..?
shirley: nah...i wont...
ansh: umm..r u going 2 throw that on kavya...?
shirley: my brother kavya...yes..
ansh: no..the other one..
shirley: no..his face is too sweet 2 be ruined....bye..(leaves)

((kavya a bumps into shirley)

kavya a: oh...why is it isnt Miss. Sinha?
shirley: hi kavya...
kavya a: hi...
shirley(squirts colour at his shirt): happy holi...
kavya a(throws colours at shirley): happy holi...
shirley: what the,...?
kavya a: so..umm....wassup?
shirley: nothing....umm...i have 2 go..
kavya a: ok...
(kavya s comes)
kavya s: ooi..kavya...throw more colour on her...
kavya a: ok..(gets some colour)
kavya s: fill up yur hands...
kavya a: ok...(fills his hands up wid colours...and throws them at shirley...a girl gets in the way..and the colour hits her...the girls turns around...)

Precap: Shefali and Charu join together against Akshat and Arjun. Meanwhile, Ansh deicdes to make use of Kavya A.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
lovely........... 👏 wat a holi..........!!!! 😊
every1 really happy with their loved ones... 😉
n this pretty but clumsy girl's on cloud nine now....... 😳 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow yaaar...nice holi...i reallly really loved it.....kiya holi thi.....aik dum yaaadgaar rahe gi.... 😊 ..
u really rock yaar....
keep up da good work... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
glad u liked it...frends..updating episode 64 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Episode 64

(Shefali, Charu and Ansh r sitting in their room..thinking of what 2 do next...shefali gets flashbacks of arjun wid marriyam)

shefali: i cant stand it...
charu: cant stand what?
shefali: that..that...arjun luvs marriyam...he is only mine...and mine only..
charu: shefali...instead of mourning over arjun's memories..try and win him over again..
shefali: how..?
charu: just do sumthing that will plz arjun..like start becoming frends wid the sinha girls...
shefali: forget it..charu..like if u can do sumthing straight...
charu: meaning?
shefali: meaning...u lost akshat...and u r giving me advice...
charu: uff..luk at yurself...shefali..at least akshat luved me once in life....but arjun neva luved u...
shefali(angry): charu!!!!
ansh: shut it...u girls...
charu: what?
ansh: thats the problem wid u all...u r so overcome by emotions..that u dont use yur intellect...
shefali: ansh...u shut up...like if u luv sum1....
ansh: dont eva say that again...shefali..bcoz there is um1...
charu: who...?
ansh: Shirley Sinha...
shefali: her...?
charu: u luv her?
ansh: more than anything....and i know the exact mohra that will help me get her..
shefali: who..arjun?
ansh: uff...all u think about is yur sweetheart arjun...sum1 else...
charu: stop talking in riddles...and tell us...
ansh: Kavya...
shefali: i dont udnerstand...u will use her brother...2..
ansh: not her brother....her bets frend....Kavya....Agarwal...(grins)
charu: hmph....mind of a devil....anyways..when is he coming back..?
ansh: who..?
charu: him...the one who has a habit of dumping girls at the mandap...
ansh: him..will be back...(grins)
shefali: charu...if we join hands together...then we will get what we want...our lost luv...u get akshat back..and i get arjun back...
charu: whateva...
ansh: charu...u want akshat back...u need shefali..and amina...use her...and then...finish off wid her...
charu(grins): exactly....
ansh: so...kavya...is the only one between me and shirley...he will be out of the way...soon..

(meanwhile the holi ceremony is going on...the girl that got in kavya's way...is none other than PAMMI from kavyanjali..)

pammi: hi..
kavya a: erm...hi...who r u?
pammi: i'm pammi...
kavya a: kavya....kavya agarwal..
pammi: oh..so u r kavya.....heard a lot about u...
kavya a: thanx..i guess....
pammi: so...wont u introduce me 2 yur frends...?
kavya a: sure...

kavya a: erm..hey guys....this is pammi..pammi this sujal...my childhood frend
sujal: hi...
pammi: hi...gosh he is so cute...
sujal: and married....thanx..
pammi(upset): oh....
kavya a: and this is kavya sinha....
pammi: such a handsome face..
kavya s(freaked out): thanx...erm..enjoy holi...
kavya a: this is sohan..piyush...both r brothers..
pammi: hi...
sohan: hi...
piyush(whispers 2 sohan): not that pretty...haina?
sohan: now u found out..
kavya a: this is yug and zeeshan....
pammi: oh hi..yug...i'm pammi...
yug: nice 2 meet u...

kavya a: and this is tahsu garewal...sujal's wife..
pammi: wow....she'z beautiful...is she yur sister?
kavya a: nah..but like a sister...and thats gauri...
gauri: hey...
pammi: hi...u r gauri sinha....london's greatest artist...plz..plz....paint my paintings as well...
gauri: if i eva get the time...i will...
tashu: so...pammi...enjoy i guess.....
pammi: yur husband is so cute..
(tashu luks freaked out..and little nagry as well)
kavya a(whispers 2 tashu): i think she has a little mental problem..sujal was freaked out...
gauri: not little...i think big...
kavya a: ok....here r the other sinha girls...shazy...a social worker...pooja..a univeristy student....mamta...a bollywood actress....shivangi..short shivz...a basketball player..and...hetal...eldest of all....tina..daniel radcliffe fan...marriyam...arjun's wife....amal....my bhabhi,...and adi's wife...amina..akshat's fiancee....and....simi..shirley's frend...and wheres shirley?

(shirley is getting out more colours....kavya a and pammi join her0

kavya a: umm..pammi..this is my bestest and sweetest frend i eva had....Shirley Sinha..and shirley..this is pammi..
shirley: hi...welcum i guess...and..
pammi(interrupts): OMG....so pretty....
kavya a: she is...no doubt...
shirley: thanx 4 the compliment...
kavya a(whispers 2 s): she thinks sujal is fit..
shirley: did tahsu and sujal mind..?
kavya a: both got freaked out.....
shirley: rite...umm..pammi..want 2 play some holi...?
kavya a: erm...shirley...why....let her socialise wid other ppl?
shirley: come on..kavya....shez new....
kavya a: fine..
shirley: come on pammi...
pammi: ok...
(everyone is playing holi....soon..everyone goes inside...)

amina: oh..luk at me...drenche din rainbow colours..thanx 2 gauri's new machine...
gauri: oh...dont mention it...hehehe....
pammi: erm...that wa sa great holi...
shirley: thanx..where r yur parents?
pammi: i dont have any1 in my life..i'm all alone..
zeeshan(whispers 2 adi): i bet shez lying..
adi: cut it out...
shirley: tis ok...u can stay wid us at the Sinha House...
kavya s: huh...?
tashu: hmm...gud luck...wid u all...
shivangi: kool...

Precap: Sujal meets a new person in his life, meanwhile Kavya A wants to tell Shirley something.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
supurb...yaar 👏 👏 👏
its getting good day by day....keep it up....cant wait 4 da next one....

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