MG[FF]Maan Proposes Geet Disposes[Thread1/Note149]

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: prerna1
hi dear just read your fic
its awesome
lovely concept
plz continue soon and add me in your pm list too

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: Eowyn
The thing I liked best was that there was no more confusing drama between Meera and Geet...
Highly relieved Jazz...
So finally the match is set in Savitriji's mind...
But if we look back to the title of the story...
The drama is yet to unfold...
Thanks for the PM Jazz...
Kudos🤗

Thank you...glad you liked it! :)

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi there...thanks 4 da pm n rocking update! Love dit|! Savitri impressed by Geet n wants her as her badu bahu! Daman correctts her when she thinks Meera is Geet. |Update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: Aussiebabe
Jazz my Sakhi 😃 now come on, give me pat on my back 😆 I finally completed reading all the updates...am soo loving it how the story is building up... !!!
Plz update soon 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy
Awsome...

Originally posted by: sneha0504
awesome!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious
OMG that was fantastic Jazz... i'm literally jumping on my seat eager to read the next part... esp want to see Geet's reaction when she finds out 😆

LOLz...Geet's reaction will be out soon. Though not what you would expect.😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Jazz,

Aww, sweet sisters teasing Meera but who knows what will come next for them to deal with specially Geet.😆

"Khulus kay bandon mein ek khami hai Adam
Sitam-Zarif bla kay Jald-baz hotay hain" SSK was so sure she will find her Bahu today itself that she did not want to postpone & forgot to inform Chaudhary Mohinderlal.

So far Daman look more indulgent person & Arjun is limned as somewhat obsessive impulsive person.
More on Arjun later.

SSK saw Geet's beauty & her dedication to help her sister to be fitting to be her Bari Bahu. It's true that Geet's incognizance of her own beauty is more binding than her being aware of her charm but SSK is overbearing now. She just can't impose her decision on others without them being least prepared that too in such matter.

But I am waiting to see If it's SSK's love at first sight then how is it going to be for Maan (When he comes with grown hair😆)?
lolz...
Thank you for your wonderful comments😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii
Lovely
cont soon
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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: HayaShazal
savetri selected geet for maan's bride😳 awesome update👏

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Interlude

The Heart of a Father

(August 23, 1980...)

"Mohinder jee I know this was not something you were expecting, but if you agree let us know before we leave for Chandigarh tomorrow morning. We will staying the night at the Guest House of Shri Harmandir Sahib. If you agree then we can inform Maan to come home and set a date for a formal meeting to discuss the alliance."

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What does it take when you come home after seven years of imprisonment in foreign soils with a limb missing and a wife to feed, shelter and protect?

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"Oye langde!," the goons called after him, "let us know if you can't take care of wife," they sneered.

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What does it take when your first born is not welcomed with the choicest blessings, but looked down upon with disdain? And only on account of the gender.

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"Kudi hoyi hai Chaudhary jee," the mid-wife informed in a dejected tone.

"Koi nahi Mohinder," his aunt tried to console a happy Mohinder because she assumed that he would be sad, "maybe next time God would be kind."

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What does it take when you were laughed at for calling your daughters equal to sons? To make endeavors to get them educated, to dream to see them capable of earning their own bread, to wish that they find men who treats his princesses like queens.

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"What will you achieve by this Mohinder? All this education, studying," his uncle chided him, "will it get them better matches than the rest of the girls. Changey sanskar de bas."

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What does it take when no one would come forward to accept your eldest daughter as their daughter-in-law just because you had all daughters and no son? And when you did get her married, it was to a man who was a widower and a father to a son. To hear her being called the second-wife was a killing pain he lived through every day, never mind if the son-in-law was a decent fellow in himself. No matter how happy she is in her house, it would always pinch that maybe he would have found her a better position in life had he held out a little longer, not giving in to the pressure of her growing age.

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"Look Mohinder," his elder cousin advised him, "with this handicap of yours you will never be able to run around to find a better match for Nandini. Daman is a good man. And only married for one year. Poor soul, his wife could not survive child-birth. Nonu is just few months old. For him only Nandini will be his mother. And anyways I don't see anyone else coming forward for her. Your other daughters will suffer if Nandini remains unmarried at her home."

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What does it take to realize and live with the mistake you made a lapse in judgment in choosing a groom for your second-born? When the man who chooses her by choice snubs her family at every opportunity? To rub in their faces that he has done a favor by accepting her.

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"Anwesha is lucky that I chose to marry her," Arjun boasted, "otherwise even her good looks were not enough to get her a husband as good as me."

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What does it take to see your one daughter passed over two others? What does it take to take a decision this hard, where you know that even despite everything that can be counted as wrong; the one right that would occur would make your daughter's life better?

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"I was very keen on this match Sammy," Mohinder had confessed to Sameera after the Khuranas left. "I have always wanted a son-in-law from Army. From the same profession as mine."

"Papaji, does your heart still agree for this?"

"It is not every day such good families, such good alliances come by Sammy. And where will this langda run to if this match also slips away. Atleast Savitri ji claims that she genuinely likes our Kakku. Which mother-in-law would admit that? It is such a good house. Kakku will be well-settled in life. And," he let out a sigh, "I have always wanted a son-in-law from Army," he repeated his heart's desire once again.

"Then I trust you and your heart's decision Papaji."

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What does it take to suppress your pain so that your family lives with a smile on their faces?

It does not take the strength of Hercules.

It does not take the wisdom of Solomon.

All it takes is a Heart of a Father.

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(August 24, 1980...)

(Guest Room, Golden Temple...)

Savitri opened the door as the bell rang.

"Mohinder jee..."

"Savitri ji," Mohinder began, "I am ready to consider your proposal."

"Thank you Mohinder ji," Savitri folded her hands, "you have the kindest of hearts. I will inform Maan to come home as soon as he can."

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If I can call myself one, then I plead a writer's block. This is a very crappy update and the best I could manage. I hope all this makes sense.

The italics are all flashback scenes.

I will not send PMs for this. Will send them together with the next part. As a compensation...next part Maan will be back with all his hairs back😆

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Chapter 9 - Page 89

Adamant Him

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago