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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha


"perfect update" ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘Thanks dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ
this was the most awaited update for me ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Hehe...am sure...it was...for many!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Adil who never felt that much possessive and jealous till date is having such feelings now, it means love has happend. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณIt did happen long back...he cudnt hold bak this tym..๐Ÿ˜‰
He didn't like others complementing his beautiful wife and more over that he was unable to accept that she was avoiding her in whole party. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰Hehe..yup...dono baatein ek sath bardasht nahi hua usse!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
They are really passionate and love their kissing session .๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณGud to knw that..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Finally Ashna's mission is successful and she herself accepted her feelings for him. ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜Yeah...to him & to herself..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I can understand Adil's pain and just because of that he left for Pune in hurry without telling anything to Ashna ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”Hmm...he needed tym alone to deal with watever emotions..he had revealed...๐Ÿ˜•
But thank god Ashna has Shekhar who always help her to find Adil's location ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒHehe...yup...gud frnd..๐Ÿ˜Š
Ab jab Ashna baat karne ki zid thaan hi legi to how much Adil can avoid her?๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰Not much...and he knws that...so soon..he will talk to her..๐Ÿ˜Š
Good that he said that he needs sometime to tell her everything and i want him to do that asap. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠDont worry...might happen REAL soon..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
The insecurity in him that Ashna can leave him ever like his baba made me very sad for him. Hmm...insecurity is there for sure...as loneliness does hurt a lot..
Try to update soon. Thanks for the amazing comment dear...& am glad u had liked this part..๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hey sumi nice part ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š Thank you Shreya!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

ashna ki thinking process ko maanna padega ghar per baith ke wo kuch bhi nai kar rahi hai lekin phir bhi bohot kuch hota ja raha bina uske kare aur kahe hi bechara adil ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†Lol..thats girl power u see...kuch bina kiye hi bahut kuch kar jate hai...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

adil ko kitna dhyaan hai ashna ka use to ye bhi pata hai ki use tom achcha lagta hai ya jerry (johnny)bechara chuhe aur billi ke chakkar mein ye bhi bhul gaya ki baat karni kya thi๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜‰ Lol...love the way u say it..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†i think adil has asked ashna a very stupid question ki wo ghar pe baith kar kya karegi ye sab hi jaante hain aur adil bhi ki wo sirf jhak maregi ghar pe baith ke aur thoda sa adil ko pareshan karegi use line pe laane ke liye Yeah..wrong question to an even wronger person...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†aur shayad adil apni housemaker ki intentions ko samajh raha tha isliye usne do bar kya kaha๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜›Hahaha...u r justifying his "kya's"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† adil a free advice from my side to you pls ashna se behes mat karo kyonki haaroge to tumhi kyonki tumhi ne usko jaane se roka tha ab tumhari pyaari ashna is ball se tumhare upar humesha bouncers daalegi hi humesha ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›Yup...isiliye ball soch samajh ke phenkna chahiye..๐Ÿ˜‰ both are serious about going to hell or heaven whatever they may like pls accompany me there with you adil i would love to come along with you๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰Haii...yaha to aapka alag hi romance chalu hai..๐Ÿ˜†...will let ur Adil knw btw...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰...cant say abt Ashna's reaction to this proposal of urs!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

but what is the reason that adil has now become a too serious ya shekhar ki lingo mein tutne laga haiaur kaunsi galti kar di adil ne๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• aur agar shekhar ne rishabh ko kuch bataya bhi to rishabh kaunsi bohot help karega adil ki ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ but ab rishabh kya bolte bolte ruk gaya ... waise uska bolna ya nai bolna sab ek jaisa hi lagta hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Lol..u r seriously irritated wid Rishabh!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Rahi baat Adil ki...to u must be knwing Now...that he does have sum serious prblem...which he'll reveal REAL soon..๐Ÿ˜ณ

wah wah ashna mam aisa bhi sochti hain adil ke baare mein ye to breaking news hai ... well jo bhi for a change is baar kuch achcha hi soch rahi hai๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰ convo btw ashna and the diary was good๐Ÿ˜ŠThanks...glad u liked that scene..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

but raat mein dono ullu so nai paaye thik se pehle jo soya hua tha use bina dimaag waale ulli ne jaga diya aur baad dimaag waala ullu jaag ke baith gaya phir se serious situations sochne ke liye๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†ROFL...dimag wala ullu and bina dimag ki ulli...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...this is awesum!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Really feels nice to see the way u put things in ur own way..๐Ÿ˜†

ab is ullu ki aapse yahi prathna hai sumi ji ki aap is baar jaldi humaare dono ulluon ko pesh karengi nai to humare saath saath vidushi aur priya dono hi aapko ullu bana ker chali jayengi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Hehe..yeah...ye experience mujhe aaj kaal kaafi hone laga hai..๐Ÿ˜ณ..sorry for that though..๐Ÿ˜ณ

shreya๐Ÿ˜Š ye iss ullu ka naam hai๐Ÿ˜†Hehe...thank you ulluji..๐Ÿ˜ณ


Waise...mujhe ispe bhi doubt hai ki shayad maine ispe bhi reply kiya tha...๐Ÿ˜†...donno for sure!! so (phirse!) karring..๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome ๐Ÿ˜ณupdate๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘



Thanks dear...am glad u read the part & liked it as well..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Sumi

How shud I describe this part??? It was just amazing๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Oh...thanks dii...that means a lot..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I was waiting for Adil to loose his control over his emotions for once in his life..see where that lead him too.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒHehe...and wasnt he lead exactly where he was supposed to?๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Ashna is in love with him since a long time but this time she expressed in words and Adil was terrified.Hehe..terrified is the correct word I guess...๐Ÿ˜†...he WAS shocked...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I wish I had more time to comment.๐Ÿ˜ƒIts ok dii...am just glad u take out tym to read and comment...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...thanks for that effort...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Pls continue soon
Bye

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

hey sumi...how u doing...I am doing gud dear...hope u r f9 as well..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณthnx for the update...its worth reading ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...awesome update...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...Glad u feel so ๐Ÿ˜ƒhmm so ashna is happy that adil talks to her...aray ashna how could u say our beloved adil a pathar..aray baba he has feelings too, if he doesn't express his feeelings that doesn't mean he's a emotionless person ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ wrna raat ko ap k jagnai k bawajood wo khawab khargosh k mazai laitai...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Aww...tum to bura maan gayi...๐Ÿ˜ณ...yes..he does have feelings..and am sure Ashna knws that by now..๐Ÿ˜ณ

oh party time...๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ...aray ab adil ki personality hi aisi hai k koi bhi dekh k bus kho jata hai...n u r his better half to phr ap ka kajal to bigarna tha hi na ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Haha...bilkul sahi kaha...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰...arauy ashna ab to party main agia ab bhi kajol ko lai k ro rhi ho...aray sath main adil hai...us k sth to achai achai bhi aur achai lagnai lagtai hain n above all the comment by adil was so good...luved it..Thank you so much dear...am really glad u liked those small sequences btwn them..๐Ÿ˜ณ.aray baat mukamal hi kr daitai...ashana jee ap ko wo sadgi main bhi pasand krtai hain๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...jatatai nahi to kia hwa..Yehi to problem hai...baat mukammal karna inhe ata hi nahi hai..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰.oh adil ko bura laga k ashna ignores him...see ashna he is not a pathar...ionhai bhi jealousy hoti hai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†... ashna ka teasing session phr start hogaya...Yup..and man he was Jealous!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

Adil said: ki tum hamesha meri rhogi...ka baat hai adil ki...oh the most awiated scence..luved it...so finally ashna confess her love...Am happy that the scene turned out to be as per ur expectation...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

ohn yahan adil sahab sb chor chr k pune chalai gai...oh ashna is angry that adil left w/o telling her...n being adil wife kuch quality to aai gi called him till the tile he picked up the phone๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ...Yup...itni baat phn bajegi to uthana to padega na...๐Ÿ˜†oh my poor adil is so disturbed.what 's the thing which bothering him too much...please ab sub sahi rakhna...cant see him suffering like this๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...Dont worry abt him dear...he is gonna be all okay...๐Ÿ˜ƒ main hoon na..๐Ÿ˜‰oh is bar to kafi urdu main baat ki hai maine...achi hogai hai meri urdu bhi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...chalo jee m happy that we'll get another update this yer ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ...I wonder if u got that UD...๐Ÿ˜†...anyways..aapki urdu achhi lagi...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

till then take care U too dear...and thanks for the lovely comment...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Awesome part Thanks Nisha..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ashna has learnt it were well how and when to irritate Adil so that she can get him to react and show his emotions. ๐Ÿ˜‰Haha...thats true!! If not anything else...she ha learned this art veryy well..๐Ÿ˜‰First Adil gets irritated because he did not want to get late because Ashna was trying to apply kajal in her eyes properly and later in the party he feels jealous to see all the guest complimenting his wife's beauty and trying to impress her.๐Ÿ˜ก Yup..and moreover...Ashna made sure he felt every bit of the jealousy!!๐Ÿ˜‰But he did not miss to notice how beautiful she always looks.๐Ÿ˜ŠNow that cudnt be ignored by him ever!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Finally adil lost his control and kissed Ashna, making her confess her love for him. He is schoked to hear that she loves him because he has convinced himself that he does not deserved to be loved by anyone.๐Ÿ˜ณWell yeah...he is shocked...as he never thought she wud love him back..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Ashna feels hurt when Adil just leaves her but she knows that it was a big shock for him and is worried about him. She is touched by the care that he shows for her.Hmm...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Adil did not want to face Ashana or rather himself and so makes and excuse of work and leaves for Pune.He needed sum tym wid himself I suppose.. Waiting to know what is holding him back from accepting love and happiness in life. Hope he will share his pain and feelings with Ashna.He will for sure...but thats so out of his nature..that its gonna take him a bit long to do that...๐Ÿ˜•
please continue soon Thanks for this lovely comment dear...& thnx for reading!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Inu-13

Summiii ๐Ÿ˜ƒ wowww i mean just wowww.. its juts the perfect explanation for the phrase "short and sweet" Thank you Nehu...am glad ki tum khush hui...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰i won't complain dat it was small part as m completely into tis part.Ahemz...gud to knw that ma'm..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ Don't knw what made me feel soo but m luving this part.. have read 4th time :P Okay...4 times is really much...๐Ÿ˜†...but am glad that u liked this part so much...now wat made u like...let that question be in rest...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Continue soon! :) Thanks for the lovely comment dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

hi Sumi...Hey Guglu...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Awesome, beautiful, amazing, mindblowing...aur kuch baaki hai...?Hehe...pata nahi...am bad wid adjectives...๐Ÿ˜†...lekin jitna likha wo sab bahut badhiya hai...thank u ji...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I am actually at a loss. The sizzling chemistry between Adil and Ashna is just awesome... Ashna deliberately wanted to infuriate Adil...and voila... she succeeded...!!!Glad u felt the chemistry was sizzling!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ..and well..Ashna itne dino se yehi to sikh rahi hai...ki uski pati ko kaise corner kiya jaye...be it the love game or war!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

Adil is afraid he will lose her just like others... well.. I am more concerned about what is troubling him... his rage and pain is what hurts me the most...Adil shouldn't be in pain...Aww...thats true..he shudnt be!!...But guess wat..he is!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† achha chalo..i dont wanna sound like a villain here..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...u might knw his trouble in the next part..๐Ÿ˜ณ

And now instead of facing the situation, he is running away from it... Well, he needs some time to sort out his confusions and troubles. I am happy Ashna understood him so well and decided to wait for him...Hmm...he is running away..."like always"...may I add?๐Ÿ˜‰

48 missed calls in just 15 minutes... LOL... this girl certainly is something... I couldn't stop laughing at that...Haha...then am glad I added that portion...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

And the kiss between them surely was the most beautiful moment of the fic... Oh...thanks a lot dear! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hope you had a safe and happy journey... Keep updating... M waiting eagerlyyy for the next update...Yeah...the journey was tiring but the trip was gud...๐Ÿ˜ƒ..thanks..๐Ÿ˜ณ

And yes...before I forget... wish you a very Happy New year 2012...Hehe...this Feb...and yet...wishing u the same dear!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Luv
Guglu

Thanks for the lovely comment Guglu ji..๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice ud...

lagta hai Adil ke is accident se uss ke dimag par kafi asar pada hai...!!! Rishabh kitne pyar se uss se baat karr raha tha...par janab use kafi rude the...

Ashna bhi gusse me thi...par janab ne unhe bhi avoid karr liya...yeh ho kya raha hai...yaar

Ashna aur Rishabv ka scene baht achha tha...!!! infact aisa laga do mature log baith ke baat karr arhe hain...๐Ÿ˜†

main bhi akshar yehi karrti hoon...gusse me darwaza zorr se bandh karrna...ta ke kam se kam logon ko pata toh chale ki main gusse me hoon...!!!๐Ÿ˜†

gussa do min me anshun me badal gaya...!!! yaar yeh Sumi aur Adil dono mil ke hum sab ko kitna pareshan karrte hain yaar...๐Ÿ˜ญ

aur Sumi...tum na plz...adil par thoda rehem karo...tum janti ho ke uss ke liye hum yahan pe aate hain...aur tum ho ki her ud me use dard deti ho aur humain rulati ho...not fair...thoda sa mushkurane ka mauka toh do yaar...๐Ÿ˜›

chalo abhi jaldi se next part post karo...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
heylo ๐Ÿ˜†

update to accha tha lekin kintu parantu bandhu saamne wo aati hai dil me pyaar aur zabaan per pyaar kyon nahi hota hai๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

ek to aj pehli baar rishabh ne usse acchi tarah se baat karne ki koshish ki lekin wo param pujya shri shri 2006 maharaj adil ko kya sanak sawaar hui ki bechaare rishabh ko apni baat kehne tak ka mauka nahi diya aur jab raat me ashna ke kehne par baat karne gaya to rajdhaani ki speed se khud pata nahi kya kya keh gaya aur shatabdi ki speed se uske room mein se waapis bhi aa gaya aur pyaare rishabh aur ashna maal gaadi ki tarah khade dekhte hi rah gaye๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

ashna aur rishabh ne jo baatein ki usse to yehi lagta hai ki ab ye log apni akal se kaam karenge arre bhai bacche bade ho gaye hain aur pehli baar i agree with ashna iss baar adil thoda akdu ho raha hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

aur phir last mein adil aur ashna ka conversation ye ladki bhi ajeeb lagti hai ... lagti kya hai hi puri ki puri ek to pehle adil ko gussa dikhana chahti thi aur door adil ke sar pe patakkar dikhaya bhi lekin gussa karne se rona bhi aata hai ye nahi pata tha kyonki aap ek baar me ek hi kaam kar sakte ho na ya to ro lo ya gussa kar lo to mera exactly ye point hai ki wo karna kya chah rahi thi ya dono ki usne khichdi pakai gussa+rona๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

ab jaisa ki aapne kaha adil ko koi bimaari nahi hai ...i hope i understood your note correctly๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• to aisa kya hai jo adil sabse chhupa raha hai kisko nahi bata pa raha hai๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

pls sumi ji try to unfold this mystery as soon as possible๐Ÿ˜‰
continue soon ๐Ÿ˜›
shreya๐Ÿ˜Š

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