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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Great nhi kahoongi, It was nice update. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘Thanks dear...mujhe bhi ye part bas thik thak hi laga tha...๐Ÿ˜†
but is ne accha kiya ki is baar us ne kuch alag kiya jo shayad Adil ne socha nhi tha.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Adil kitna bhi gussa kare Ashna ko to vahi sun na hai par Adil k liye itna easy nahi hai ye kehna bcz he is typical Adil Raichand.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰Yup...I wud say...both are typical...dono ziddi hai...๐Ÿ˜†
Tom Cruise to mujhe bhi pasand hai and Jonny Depp bhi.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰Gr8...๐Ÿ˜†...mujhe waise JD utna pasand nahi hai...I just like his attitude u knw...whereas...am awed by the fact that TC still looks so young!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Is baar to Shekhar bhi dekh aur samajh raha hai ki kuch hua hai is baar us ko jo regular AR se alag hai aur isiliye Rishabh se bhi us ne poocha.๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•Hmm...Adil's stress is showing on his face..๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†..bechara acting bhul gaya biwi ko tackle karne ke chakar me ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Kitna jaldi jaag jaata hai Adil, chain se so bhi nhi sakta par ab Ashna ko sula diya us ne.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Kab tak Adil ye sab chupa payega, kabhi na kabhi to Ashna ko ye pata chalna hi hai. ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜
Hope that happens very soon. And now I blv...u realize that it all gonna happen very soon...bas thoda zyada hi gradual process hai...๐Ÿ˜†..hope it doesnt bore u..๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks for the lovely comment Vertika!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

maza aa gaya padh ke...baht hi cute part tha...thanks dear..๐Ÿ˜ณ

kal tak jis Ashna se main chidh rahi thi...ab wo mujhe achhi lagne legi hai...aur wo bhi iss liye ki wo Adil ko pareshan karrti hai...iss liye...๐Ÿ˜›Haha...sounds funny na!! Wo kal bhi Adil ko pareshan karti thi..and u used to dislike her for that...and now also she does the same...but u r liking her..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†..pyar kya se kya kar deta hai..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

choclates n magazine ka scene ek damm mast tha...!!! Ashna ke answer se toh Adil bhi kuch pal ke liye bhul gaya tha ki akhir wo aaya kis liye tha...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†lol...glad u liked that scene. ๐Ÿ˜†

lo Tom ka naam liya toh Adil ko Jerry(Johny) ki bhi yaad aa gayi...!!! dekh lo Ashna...adil ko tumhare sare pasand yaad hai...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰Tom & Jerry...*ROFL*...waise Adil ko sab yaad hona hi hai...perfect husband hai after all..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

chota sa word hai 'HELL' ka...par iss par dono ka wo chota sa jhagda mast tha...maza aa gaya...sachhi...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›Hehe...thnx Pri..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ashna...toh Adil ko nahi chodegi...!!! Adil...tumhare liye worning hai...tum ladkiyon ko nahi jante...ek baar wo zidd par aa gayi toh karr ke hi damm legi...!!! ab tum chahe jana chaho ya na chaho...Ashna tumhe apne sath Hell ho ya Heven...ya phir Himalaya ki choti par hi kyoun na ho...sath le kar hi jayegi...!!!Haha...ye baat bilkul sahi kahi tumne...ladkiya iss mamle me kaafi ziddi hai...and Ashna to ye sab apne pati se sikh ke ayi hai...๐Ÿ˜† aur vaise bhi dekha jaye toh...tum khud bhi nahi chahte ki wo kahin akeli jaye...toh sath me jana aur humain tumhare video footage jarur bhejna...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†Hehe...ye bhi sahi kaha...ki wo khud nahi chahta wo kahin akeli jaye...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Shekhar toh hamesha se ek darling hai yaar...!!! kitna khayal rakhta hai Adil ka...!!! true!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒpar Adil aisa kyoun hai...!!! sab ke liye dil me pyar hai...par zahir karrne me use itna prob kyoun hota hai...!!! use sahi teacher ki jarurat hai...hope ki ye tution teacher Ashna bann jaye...aur teaching ka session thoda romantic ho jaye...๐Ÿ˜›Hehe...technically wat u hav said is gonna happen...lekin style thoda alag hoga...as ye meri slow motion fic hai...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...sab dhire dhire hota hai..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

sone ka scene bhi mast tha...main hass rahi thi...!!! adil ki neend tod di...Ashna ne...!!! ab khud ullu bann kar jagg rahi hai...toh company dene ke liye Adil ko jaga diya...!!! lekin sachhi me wo scene baht hi mazedar thi...ha ha ha...๐Ÿ˜†Glad to knw that u were laughing. Main aksar rulati hu...especially in this fic...isliye am really glad that u liked this scene..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

chalo der aaye par durust aaye...itna achha sa part post kiya...!!! lekin phir bhi tumhe maafi nahi milegi...!!! tumhe tab maaf kiya jayega...jab tumhara next part bhi jaldi aayega...๐Ÿ˜›ahemz...ye "next part" concept me hi locha hai..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

isiliye next part abhi se likhne baith jayo...aur haan iss bar update jaldi hona chahiye...!!! warna...Vidu, Shreya aur mera popular BAND toh hai hi... her late writer ka BAND bajane...๐Ÿ˜›Hmm...and seems like...now-a-days only am in the gang of late writers...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...(I actually donno abt others...bahut dino se fic nahi padha)...khair will try to UD soon dear...thanks for the beautiful comment. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hey sumi nice part ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š thanks dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ

ashna ki thinking process ko maanna padega ghar per baith ke wo kuch bhi nai kar rahi hai lekin phir bhi bohot kuch hota ja raha bina uske kare aur kahe hi bechara adil ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†Hehe...she is smart enough...I wud say!! Aise hi uski shaadi Adil se nahi karwayi na...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..however Adil is certainly in trouble...poor him.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

adil ko kitna dhyaan hai ashna ka use to ye bhi pata hai ki use tom achcha lagta hai ya jerry (johnny)bechara chuhe aur billi ke chakkar mein ye bhi bhul gaya ki baat karni kya thi๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜‰ Haha...love the way u say it..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†i think adil has asked ashna a very stupid question ki wo ghar pe baith kar kya karegi ye sab hi jaante hain aur adil bhi ki wo sirf jhak maregi ghar pe baith ke aur thoda sa adil ko pareshan karegi use line pe laane ke liye Hehe...ye baat bilkul sahi hai...Ashna yehi do kaam to achhe se bina kisi mistake ke karti hai...jhak marna...and Adil ko satana..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†aur shayad adil apni housemaker ki intentions ko samajh raha tha isliye usne do bar kya kaha๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜›Lol...usse yakeen nahi ho raha hoga!! adil a free advice from my side to you pls ashna se behes mat karo kyonki haaroge to tumhi kyonki tumhi ne usko jaane se roka tha ab tumhari pyaari ashna is ball se tumhare upar humesha bouncers daalegi hi humesha ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›Exactly...he shud be careful...as Ashna realizes his weakness is she herself...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† both are serious about going to hell or heaven whatever they may like pls accompany me there with you adil i would love to come along with you๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰Aww...tab to tum sabko heaven me hi bhejna chahiye...and dont worry...Adil is surely gonna go to heaven...to tum aur Ashna bhi wahi chal jana..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

but what is the reason that adil has now become a too serious ya shekhar ki lingo mein tutne laga haiaur kaunsi galti kar di adil ne๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• No worries...Adil khud bata dega...jaldi..๐Ÿ˜ณaur agar shekhar ne rishabh ko kuch bataya bhi to rishabh kaunsi bohot help karega adil ki ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ Lol...he hardly can help...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†but ab rishabh kya bolte bolte ruk gaya ... waise uska bolna ya nai bolna sab ek jaisa hi lagta hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Hehe...he had his own doubts actually...but then...we least care!! Ryt? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

wah wah ashna mam aisa bhi sochti hain adil ke baare mein ye to breaking news hai ... well jo bhi for a change is baar kuch achcha hi soch rahi hai๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰ convo btw ashna and the diary was good๐Ÿ˜ŠThanks dear...glad u liked it all..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

but raat mein dono ullu so nai paaye thik se pehle jo soya hua tha use bina dimaag waale ulli ne jaga diya aur baad dimaag waala ullu jaag ke baith gaya phir se serious situations sochne ke liye๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Lol...ULLI...๐Ÿคฃ...raat ke 4 baje as in subah ke 4 baje ye post reply karring...shukr hai...I have controlled my laughter..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...just love the way u put it dear...๐Ÿคฃ

ab is ullu(shudnt it be ULLI๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†) ki aapse yahi prathna hai sumi ji ki aap is baar jaldi humaare dono ulluon ko pesh karengi nai to humare saath saath vidushi aur priya dono hi aapko ullu bana ker chali jayengi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Haha...working on the next part only..๐Ÿ˜†

shreya๐Ÿ˜Š ye iss ullu ka naam hai๐Ÿ˜†Hehe...and iss Ulli ka naam to pata hi hai...(as u mentioned it above)...isliye bsdhanyabaad kehke post khatam karungi...aapka ye anuchhed padhke main ulli bahut prasanna hu...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha1984

Awesome part...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Thanks Nisha..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Aakhir kar wo ho hi gaya jo hum chahte the... Ashna ne Adil se keh hi diya ki she loves him and the unexpected kiss scene was star of the update...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›Hehe...thanks dear!! Glad that all these were in ur wish list of the fic..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
First of all Ashna was so happy to know that Adil cared for her and then kajal scene... Adil ne kaha bina kajal ke ashna khoobsurat dikhti hai lekin usko to har haal main khoobsurat hi lagegi na... afterall he loves her๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Haha..thats the catch u knw...jo unfortunately Adil khub bhi realize nahi karta..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Party main Ashna ne Adil ko jealous kiya... good going... warna wo khadoos kahan apni dil ki baat chehre pe lata...Kabhi nahi...khadoos loves it this way...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
finally ashna made him understand that she is his wife and has right to share his happiness as well as his sorrows...Yup...and hopefully he is gonna get it soon..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Adil is so afraid and fragile from inside when he asked her that she is never going to leave him...Glad that u felt that...I tried my best to show his softness in that scene..๐Ÿ˜Š
Finally the awesome kiss scene and Ashna's confession but ye adil phir bhi chala gaya usko chod ke...Yeah...i knw...uska chala jana must be disappointing...but this is wat goes along his character u knw..๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†
Aakhir kaunsi baat usko sata rahi hai... eager to know what's going on with him...Dont worry...u'll knw soon..๐Ÿ˜Š
I hope wo jaldi puna se wapas aa jaye...abhi aa gaya hai filhaal...๐Ÿ˜†...tutafuta hi sahi..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
update soon...sure dear...thanks for the lovely reply..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey sumii...finally u updated๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...part thoda saddy saddy tha but m happy that adil is all safe n sound just because of u๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...now strting from the begioning like the way rishab was thinking about wht shehkar had told him, n he's changing his perspective towards adil that whatever he did n doing is just for the sake of their happiness and nothing else...seems rishab is efffected by what shehkar had told him, like the new rishab but love adil ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

poh poor Ashna she's so confuse k what to talk with adil, she's thinking so hard k ye bolun gi aur ye ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...us nai to practice bhi start krdi hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ...aray ab phone krnai main kia pbm hai...simple uthao n krlo pr nhi n kehna ye hai k its adil who makes thing complex ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...good shaleen's father wants to meet rashi, chalo ab ye set hogain to adil ki aik tnsn to khtm hogi...phew!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

oh My sweeto met with an accident n is main bhi he is thinking about his family...loved his attachment with all of them from his mother till Ashna...love the way u rite ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...oh Adil is so badly injured as well as weak..jaldi sai acha krdo wrna phr hamian nahi kehna k ap ki tbyt khyun kharab hwi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...oh rishbah was so tensned if anything happens to adil n shehkar saying him not to worry, love the concern by both...so adil is happy that he is not lonely, people are there who loves him n cares for him...oh ahsna i felt bad for her..she's was thinking k it all happened just coz of her n coz of this she's going in front of adil which wasn't liked by him...

loved the care adil shows for her...nice convo b/w them in the end...ab is convo ko please jaldi sai cont krna...till then

take care

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Posted: 13 years ago

sab se pahle tumhara tag change karrna padega...!!! tumhara naam AB se GB rakhna padega...abhi tumhe lagg raha hoga ki main tum se khush ho kar tumhara promotion karr rahi hoon...๐Ÿ˜Š

nahi...promotion nahi...tumhara demotion hua hai...AB se GB...matlab ke Gandi Bachhi...๐Ÿ˜ก

ek toh late hone ke sab ka record tod rahi ho...upar se chota update post karr rahi ho...aur uss se bhi tumhara dil nahi bhara toh thik Adil ke scene par hi episode end karr diya...arey kamm se kamm usey do line toh bolne deti...!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ

abhi tumhare liye warning hai...jaldi agar next part update nahi hua toh aaj ke baad main tumhe GB keh kar hi bulaungi...HUH...mere laad-pyar ne bigad diya hai tumhe...abhi dande se baat karrni padegi tumse...๐Ÿ˜ก
okay...aaj ke liye itna kafi tha...baki apne next comments ke liye rakhti...!!! aaj hi pura dil ka bhadas nikal diya toh next time kya karoongi...๐Ÿ˜›

okay...abhi update par aati hoon...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

'pahla half padh kar main Dhaka janewali thi...dushra half padh kar khud ko shant kiya'...!!! ab tum isi se imagine karr lo ke mujhe update kaisa laga...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›

kitne atyachar karti ho tum Adil par...!!! din raat kaam par laga rakhti ho...bichara thik se khana bhi nahi kha pata tha...iss se bhi tumhara jee nahi bhara Sumi...jo uss ki accident kara di tum ne...๐Ÿ˜†

aur phir ankhon ke paas ek cut...!!! vaise main kehna toh nahi chahti thi...par phir bhi bol deti hoon ke...wahan khamoshi se Adil ka Ashna ko yun dhundhna achha laga...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Rishabh ko bhi yun Adil ke liye pareshan hona...achanak yun emotional ho jana...achha laga...๐Ÿ˜ƒ!!! vese mujhe ye kyoun feel ho raha hai ke...tum Droplets ko jaldi khatam karrne wali ho...haa...๐Ÿ˜•

aur Ashna...muh kyoun chupa rahi thi...jab ki Adil tarash gaya tha use dekhne...!!! ye ladki bhi na...kuch dhang ka nahi karrti...!!! vese yeh itna bura bhi nahi tha...kyoun ke...uss ne khud ko chupa rakha...tabhi toh Adil ke zuban pe ye line aaya ke 'panch din se tumhe nahi dekha tha...'...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

yehi ek line thi...jo yeh bayan karr rahi thi ke Ashna uss ke liye kya mayne rakhti hai...!!! wo last part na maine do baar padhi...dil garden garden ho gaya...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ!!! khush matt ho...tufan bhi aaya...jab tum ne update rokk di tab...HUH...๐Ÿ˜ก

aisa koi karrta hai kya...Gandi Bachhi...Gandi Bachhi...Gandi Bachhi...๐Ÿ˜ญ

next part jaldi update hona chahiye...no bahana...samajh gayi...๐Ÿ˜›

aur abhi toh maine apna DP bhi change karr diya hai...aur apna signature bhi...isiliye bina dare...jaldi se update post karo...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
sumi update kar na jaldiii...me waiting for the next update...jaldiii post kar na pleaseee...https://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpghttps://www.imageenvision.com/150/34539-clip-art-graphic-of-blue-guy-characters-waiting-at-a-bus-stop-bench-standing-reading-a-newspaper-and-sitting-by-jester-arts.jpg
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

amazin part...loved d kiss...beautifully described

yeyy so ashna confessed to him nd he confessed to himself thts awesome
now plz dnt let adil work his brain overtym nd plz let him move on in lyf wid ashna...he really needs to



Glad to knw u loved the part dear...and am sure u liked the kiss as a gr8 progress in their relationship...however I need to stretch it lil more...Adil ki trouble dur karni hai na...thats why..๐Ÿ˜†...but at the end...he'll surely move on...no worries..๐Ÿ˜ณ...thanks for reading & commenting dear. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Loved this part...

though it was small but emotional...Thanks dear...am glad u felt so..๐Ÿ˜Š

loved the way Ashna made Adil jealous at the party... Hehe...I kinda said it in brief...didnt wanna get into detail...but glad u liked it..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

He has become possessive about Ashna ... this had to happen he loves her... So Ashna and Adil came close and Ashna admitting to that she loves Adil was sweet... Yup...not always u can fake ur feelings...๐Ÿ˜†

But felt bad when adil moved away with a jerk... What is disturbing him so much why isnt he letting himself do what he wants to do what is stopping him from doing all this... Good atleast he shed a tear... Why does he holds it back...Now thats wat I am gonna answer in a few parts...am just glad that u get the idea so well..๐Ÿ˜Š

Pls update soon and make Adil and Ashna talk to each other... Waiting for Adil to return from poona... Hehe...abhi to laut aya hai..achha laga kya?๐Ÿ˜†

pls update soon dear... Yup sure...iss baar inshallah pakka!! I wont let the sangeet sabha begin again...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

Kya khoob likhti ho...
Bada sundar likhti ho...
Phir se likho...likhte raho, accha lagta hai๐Ÿ˜‰...
Adil and Ashna ka future ab saccha lagta hai...
Kya khoob likhti ho...
Bada sundar likhti ho...Haha...ye gaana itna achha kabhi nahi laga!! Dhanyavaad Vidu...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hey Sumi Di. I am sure ki update ke baaare me meri bhavna apko mere madhur sangeet se pata hi chal gayi hogi...Jee aapki bhavna bina kisi rukawat ke hum tak pohuch gayi hai...aur hum bahut prasanna bhi hai..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณalthough he was kissing aashna, i fell in love with my dil all over again...Haha..ye achha hai...kiss/shaadi kisise bhi kare...we have full rights...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†mujhe to lagta hai ki aap aur priya di competition kar rahe hain...ek mind-blowing part deta hai..to dusra aur do kadam aage nikal jaata hai...i am sure prii di ab next part me mehnat triple kar dengi๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†...Haww...tumhari ye baat mujhe soch me daal rahi hai...Priya ne kaunsi brilliant cheez likhi hogi...am wondering!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...maine to kabse uska UD nahi padha......hope to read soon...๐Ÿ˜Š...and nah...usse mehnat triple karne ki idea mat do yaar...wo waise bhi itna kamaal likhti hai...main adha fiction me ghus jati hu...pura ghus gayi to real world me wapas ane me locha ho jayega...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
This time it all and all AA and i loved this...Things are going on smoothly i suppose...lekin ye adil aashna se itna bhaag kyo raha hai (Did i forget something jo pehle kabhi likha ho??๐Ÿ˜•)...Hehe..nope dear...maine abhi tak kuch reveal hi nahi kiya...sabko bas aise hi ghuma rahi hu...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
UpDaTe SoOoN..

with luv
Vidushi

Thanks for liking the part so much dear...and love u for the lovely comment!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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