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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#351

Hi Sumi

Nice part..It was just awesome..👏👏

Poor Adil he is so much in pain .How cud u do this Sumi but atleast he is fine now.😃

Ashna is heartbroken and her confession was the sweetest part in this update.

This was spesially gud"Tumhe ehsaas ho ya naa ho, meri zindagi tumhare ird-gird ghumti hai. Main tum par hassu ya tumhare sath hassu, meri hassi tumhari mauhtaj hai. Tumhari wajah se rou ya tumhare liye, ye aansoo bas tumse hai. Mera gussa, meri nafrat, mera pyar...sab kuch sirf tum ho Adil. Main bahut pyar kari hu tumse!!"

These were the show stopping lines for me.👏👏👏

Sorry for short reply

Bye

Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#352

Adil 😭😭 hope he is fine now 😛😛 else i am ready with first aid kit 😆😆

firstly welcome back Adil & sumiji 😃😃 hope u had wonderful holidays both of u 😃😃...adil ki toh holidays 😭

😆coming to part 😳😃...good 1 👏👏 thoda saddy saddy bhi tha

so good things first 😆

Felt good to have adil back after so many days...😃 ...though some1 was making it up for adil's missing 😉😉 at 10.20 pm 😳 ...but still Adil is Adil 😳😳

😆Rishabh 😊😊 first time u understood Adil 😳😳 ...ofcourse he is not selfish 😳😳...

😃Now bad things 😛... 😆

😲😲 u made Adil's car hit pole 😭😭... my adil 🤗poor him 😭 ... u made cut near his eye 😭 ... waise he does have a cut near his right eye in real

did he also got hurt on his permanent spot 😛 ... right hand side forehead 😉 😆... bechare ko humesha same spot par lagti hai ...

Rishabh ka andar ka bhai jaag gaya 😆 good 👏👏 its good to see him beside Adil at this time 😊

Overall good part 👏👏 So no jootas chapals for u from my side (not sure abt how "sweet sherni " gonna take it ) .😆😆. all the best 😆

But yes for making adil's accident ..you will have to take care of Adil 😳 😳 & will have to make sure that we get 200% fit & fine Adil in coming parts 😛😆 else i will come to take care without visa

so continue soon 😃
& Adil Get well soon(est) 😃😃

Edited by -purnima- - 13 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#353

the up is good as well as sad

so here reshab is remembering shekhar's words in his mind and realised that the conception he had for adil was so wroung

he has always minunderstood adil where as adil always was always there for him not like a bro but like his father

rashi is waiting for her ab to return as she wanted to talk to him about her love

but here adil met with an accident oh my god

but while fainting down he was remembering about his family who needed him

he was taken to the hospital

reshab who got this news from an inspector informed shekhar wbout this and they both went to meet adil

shekhar is really worried about adil which really obvious

he wants the police to find out how this accident took place

adil when regained his concious found his mom as well as all his dear one but he missed his love ashna

here ashna 's codition is no better she is blaming herself for adil's accident

the last convo between adil and ashna is really touchy and beautiful

plz cont with soon and pm me

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#354

sumiii...phele tho main kaan pakadthi hoon itne din se gayab jo hoon..i know i have not been commenting on the fanficc for quite sometime now...but i was caught amidst many things from being unwell, to being admitted in the hospital to my elder sisters engagement to taking up a work from home job of a instructional designer...ab jaake free hui hoon, woh bhi thodi si...this new year has really come with a very tight schedule...i hope you understand...the delay was never really intended... sorry...le ek barr phir maine kaan bhi pakde.. The image

chal abhi baaki saari baatein baad mein..let me come to my comments on the fanfic...i hope tumko mere comments pasand aaye...pehli baat tho main yeh kehna chahoongi sumi kii yeh fanfic bohat hii achche se jaa rahii hai, i can see it going towards the place where i told you earlier.. with every update which is being written i can see that, dheere, dheere hii sahii lekin yeh kahani us mukaam par pohanch rahi hai jahaan par main usse dekhna chahthi thi...aur mujhe lagtha hai kii sumi tum tho jaanthi hii ho na kii main is kahani ko aakhir kis mukaam par dekhna chahthi hoon...waise bhi main tho is baat kii farmaish tumse bohat pehle hii karr chuki thi..kyun, sahii keh rahii hoon na main sin..hehe...so slowly, but steadily, the updates are surely getting adil & aashna closer..they may be just small, subtle change but still there are changes, their is progress in their relationship with every passing update...though they are very subtle but they surely cannot be missed..kyunke after all we read this fic for adil & aashna na..so even little small changes in their relationship just cannot be missed by us...kyun sumi tumhe kya lagtha hai kya main sahii kehh rahii hoon..mujhe batana zaroor okie..main jaanna chahoongi...hehehe...so let me talk about the bits of the fanfic jahaan se aashna starts acting a bit weird...a bit kya she was acting totally weird, ek dum out of character, aur iska shrey jaatha hai kissi aur ko nahii balki kudh humare hero mahashay ko, humare mahaan hero adil jinko bas ehsaas se, feelings se bhaagna aatha hai, he is completely responsible for aashna being so out of character..lekin patah hai in sab mein sabse achchi baat kya hai woh yeh kii aashna ka weird bartaav adil ko effect karr raha hai, pareshaan karr raha hai & this goes onto prove adil kitna bhi kyun na apne feelings se bhaage, he just cannot stop himself from caring & worrying about his wife, aashna...for the starters i like how aashna is troubling adil by calling him for small doubts..& then when Mr. smarty Pants, Adil Raichand, says he would send shekar to help her, aashna is left cribbing...yeh adil bhi na budhu hai bilkul, kya samaj nahii saktha uski hot headed biwi ko uske saath time spend karna hai aur isliye she keeps using petty, small excuses kii woh uske pass aaye, madat ke bahane hii sahii...ufff adil...but aashna tho smarty pants kii biwi hai na & she calls shekar tells him to refuse adil when he says for him to go help aashna...very good aashna...shekar maan gaya lekin he is stuck with rishab..well rishab ko koi sahii line par laa saktha hai tho it is only shekar as adil tho usse kuch kehne se raha, tho this is good.. tho ab adil had to go to help aashna..hmm..nice...hmm..tho aashna, thinks that adil's interest in her runs in negative..well agar aashna ko patah chal jaaye kii aakhir kitna interest hai adil ko usmein to woh khushi ke maare shayad Mount Everest pohanch jaayengi, only with her happiness...hehe..then adil & aashna work together..adil explains to her about work..& the way aashna corrects him saying if anything goes wrong the loss will be 'our's', na adil ka na aashna ka, but adil & aashna's put together loss..this was cool..aashna then asks adil for lunch but akdoo ne mana karr diya..very bad...then the next scene were shekar was driving some sense into rishabh was awesome..in a way i even understand rishabh's insecurities, but rishabh just saw what he had lost he had never realized that with the things he had lost, those things were burdened on adil's shoulder & adil took the burden upon himself without a doubt in his mind, but because of that adil has no life of his own...his life is just over shadowed by the burden..& adil never takes it as a burden, it is his way of repaying the family which took care of him as a part of it, but even adil fails to realizes to has lost his life in all this mess & adil is ok with it, he is so selfless...i liked shekar, he is a true friend...i hope now at least rishabh sees things from shekar's point...then here aashna is doing jasoosi of her hubby & what hurts her is adil prefers to have lunch out, alone, with his solitude, with his main aur meri tanhayi types attitude, but he refused her lunch...yeh adil bhi na jaane anjaane aashna ko hurt karr hii detha hai...not fair on his part...patah nahii yeh adil aashna ko itna avoid kyun kartha hai, woh bhi in aashna's way in a unique style, if he has feelings for her he has it bas, just face it na...lekin yeh adil ko tho sab kuch ulta karna hotha hai, bhudhu kahiinka...then one more problem knocks on the door for adil, aashna has gone missing..kuch bhi keh lo adil lekin you care for your wife, isliye tho uske ghar gaye to check if she is there..hmm...adil is hairaan, bouraan, pareshaan for his wifey & his pareshaani is something i'am enjoying because adil ke pareshaani se uska concern tapak raha hai for aashna...so finally our hero tracks where his heroine is he goes to the place, the place where they met for the first time, he tells her ghar chalein, aashna ka usko kehna she knew he would come..she wanted to see how much adil cares for her yeh tho main bhi dekhna chahthi bhai..then the talk between them in the form of riddles, aashna asking him why he avoids her, aur yeh adil mahashay is baat ko bhi jhutlakar avoid karthe hai..sumi adil ko sadh-bhudhi de & let him accept it, agar concern hai tho hai, agar pyar hai tho hai, kya farq padtha hai...then aashna telling him a small example of how he avoided having lunch with her saying he had a meeting when he went & ate alone...adil getting to know she followed him..adil telling her she has no right...ufff yeh adil bhi na, na jaane kab rishton se, ehsaas se bhaagna chodega...koi usko samjhao jitna woh bhaagega utni hii dugni raftar se those feelings & emotions will catch up with him & toil around his heart, mind & soul..i loved the way aashna placed her arguments here...she told him yes she has no right, she is no one to him then why did he come searching for her... common adil is baat ka jawaab tho do...i liked the calm, composed rational aashna who gave valid arguments for which adil did not really have a comeback..then aashna telling him he has no fayada in staying married to her, while she has as she has nowhere to go, then aashna suggesting indirectly as to why they still together, he wanted to fulfill her dad's last wish so it is done...now there was no need for adil to have the bojh called aasshna on his shoulders, i think aashna has told this just to get a reaction out of adil..& it worked adil grabbing her shoulders questioning her what is she intending to say proved he loves & cares for her, to the limits aashna can't even imagine or guess...then coming to the bits where aashna questions him, adil has no answers for it...it seems like aashna questioning him is bringing the vulnerable side in him out the open, the side which he wishes to hide & be the evil monster, this i feel is because adil does not want aashna to get attached to him, as he wants to move away setting things right one fine day, even this adil is doing for aashna...i loved how aashna questioned him, adil is left wondering about her determination, is baat par i would like to tell adil, boss tum zyada load matt lo apne dimaak par, i will tell you aashna ka yeh determination us rishthe se aaya hai which you & her share, her determination has come from the love she has for adil...so adil forces her in the car & warns her if she does anything woh usse behosh karke le jaayega... yeh adil na sach mein akdoo hai..for once why can't he come out clean about his feelings & his love, after all aashna is his better half.. patah nahii kyun yeh adil kudhko aashna ke liye bitter half saabit karne pe tula hua hai, something which he is not...lekin take it from me adil your wife is not going to give up so easily...i loved when aashna asked adil if there was another women in his life, the untold answer in adil's eyes put aashna's fear to rest...waahhh...kya baat hai, adil, aashna ek dusare kii aankhon kii zubaan samajne lage hai...too good hai jii yeh baat tho...hmm...then adil from the next day has appointed security guards for aashna, this shows he is worried for her well-being...lekin all i can tell adil is beware adil, your wife does not wife to pull the same stunt again, she surely has some other plans, just for you exclusively...hehahaha..villainous laugh & i'am thoroughly loving it...so the next tactic used by Mrs. Aashna Adil Raichand, is that madam ne office jaana chod diya hai...& after two days her hubby dearest, looses his cool & confronts her about it...yeh hui na baat..aashna bohat achche se jaanthi hai how to get reactions out of her stubborn strong willed husband..lekin is baat par i would like to tell adil, your wife is no less..aap sher tho woh sava-sher...so aashna is talking about how gorgeous Tom Cruise is, i agree with her Tom Cruise is really gorgeous (lekin Rajeev se zyada nahii haan.. hahaha..)waise i know a day would come when may be aashna adil ke beech kii harr deewar tootegi & adil would love to here from aashna's mouth that he is indeed gorgeous...i sensed jealousy too in adil when he asked how can a man be gorgeous...good..good...nice.. hmmm...then adil coming to the point & asking her what she wants... aashna makes it plain & simple she needs answer to her questions.. adil tumhare liye ek advice never try to evade a strong willed stubborn wife who is fighting for her relationship, who is fighting to find a foot hold as a wife..agar aise aashna se pange loge tho kaafi mehenga padega...i loved how aashna was irritating adil..adil telling her to go to hell, aashna telling him she would go if he comes along, this literally cracked me up...seriously aashna go to hell, seriously adil accompany me...hahaha...how damnnn hilarious...these both need to leave the childish games behind & come to accept each other...well adil says he does not care if aashna goes or does not go to the office, well adil i would like to tell you jab jhoot bolna nahii aatha tho bolna nahii chahiye..& aashna i'am sure till now at least understands you so much that she can see right through your lying facade...waise the best part of this aashna irritating adil was that she openly without any hesitance accepts that she is wife..she wants to be a home maker.. adil surely is having a tough time handling his wifeys new tactics to make him react...all i can say is bechara adil..& all i can do is laugh at him...an irritated adil & a naughty aashna is something which is making me laugh like no man's busines..hahaha...hmm..then the talk between adil, shekar, this was something very nice..shekar is very nice..a true friend...the droplet of tears which come to adil's eyes when no one is around, this kinda saddened me, but one day will come i'am sure when adil would let the drolets of tears flow freely & his shoulder to lean on, the lap to cry on would be aashna...she would make the droplets of tears disappear & make them droplets of smiles & wash away adil's pain...shekar & rishabh talking about why adil is pareshaan, this shows rishabh too cares for adil...then aashna reading her fathers dairy was good..this way she will get to knore more about the kind of relationship, rapport her & adil actually shared...it was kind of emotional..then in the evening adil ka aana & sothi hui aashna ko jagake poochna kii why she has not had lunch.. hehe...then aashna telling him her mood was off so she slept & her suggesting the same to adil kii he should sleep as he is always in a foul mood...then aashna ka question why he cares whether she has eaten or not...adil ka evading...is baat pe i would like to ask adil, adil yeh baat jaanthe hue bhi kii aashna would ask you questions why are unable to stop yourself from caring & showing concern towards your dear wifey...sochne waali baat hai na...hehe...then the night scene was too funny, aashna refers to adil as ullu..their banter in the night was lovely...hahaha...tho aashna then sleeps while our hero jii is awake looking at his wifey & he then sees her father's dairy, seeing that he sees the page mentions about how her & aashna's father decided it would be better to tell aashna of his illness...adil's thoughts travel back & he seems to understand what has caused aashna to be so down...this is what i love about adil & aashna's relationship, in their relationship words are not needed to know what is wrong or what one is going through...it is the simplicity in their relation which attracts me...& now adil is left wondering should he answers aashna's questions...hmmm...this is just awesome yaar...hmmm.. so on one side aashna is happy that adil cares on the other hand adil is doing something which he is best at doing avoiding & running away from things...you know i liked the chitter patter going on between adil & aashna when they reached the office party early..it was awesome that adil unknowingly admitted aashna's eyes are beautiful without kajal too...hmm...tho batayiye adil babu aapne kab apni biwi ke aankhon mein jhanka, kahiin chori chupe tho apni biwi ke aankhon mein doob nahii gaye na..hum sab ff readers ke nazar se bachkarr..hmm... bolo..bolo..tell..tell... hahaha...then adil aashna come back home adil is irritated because aashna was getting compliments from men that she is beautiful, gorgeous, pretty & amazing...hmmm.. so good to see the jealous side of adil coming out...jealousy always works, use it to your advantage aashna..just go flirt with shekar then see how adil burns with rage of jealousy & comes clean with his love for you...warna yeh adil tho koi bhi initiative lene se rahe...well adil says his being jealous is beside the point, well let me tell adil his being jealous is entirely the point & it indeed is a very very big deal... aashna ka seeing through adil's lies of she could have messed up... aashna is really brave to question him that if he is sure that is the reason as his eyes tell a different tale altogether... is baat par mereko ek gaana yaad aaying 'aankhein bhi hothi hai dil kii zubaan bin bole karr dethi hai haalat yeh pal mein baayaan'..hehe...then the next scene adil cornering aashna to the wall...adil ka aashna se kehna not to complete it..aashna in a very caring, soothing voice telling him to share his pareshaani with her...this shows how much she cares for adil...i can sense concern oozing out of her voice & actions...then woh aankhon se aankhon ka milna, adil finally voicing his fear, his asking her if she will always be his...awww this showed the fear adil holds, the fear of being alone..this shows he does not like being alone.. being alone is just a mask which he has taken up...it shows he is sensitive & vulnerable..& i'am glad this vulnerability about him came in front of aashna & he expressed it...then the next scene which followed...adil acting on his heart & he kissing his wife..adil, aashna first kiss...their fist intimate hug, their first contact of intimacy, adil's kisses acting like nasha for her, all these were completely ethereal, beautiful & heart warming..all i can say is how much ever you try to hide your love, but love has it's own way of acting on people's lives... kissi ne sach hii kaha hai pyaar par koi bas nahii chaltha...both adil, aashna are lost in the whirlwind of intimacy & pleasure & finally aashna utters the three magical words of being in love with adil, the words which she was scared to utter to herself too, she has voiced it to adil & out...i believe that moment was magical...but adil has to yet again run away from this..why..why is he like this...ulluuu...you love her, accept it, shower her with the love she deserves & in turn get showered with love from her...stop running from your feelings adil... adil leaves & aashna a strong person is left to tears..sometimes love can be cruel...see what it has done to both adil & aashna..but i'am sure a day would come when love will fill their lives with total days drenched in the rain of love..the next day morning dawns, adil is missing...aashna realizes adil has placed her on the bed in the night when she dozed off on the floor...aashna calls the office enquiring about her hubby dearest who has taken it upon himself to distance & move away...mann kartha hai adil ke kaan kheenchkarr usse aashna ke saamna khada karoon..so this time adil has run away to Pune.. yeh itna bhaagtha kyun hai..was he a running race champion in his childhood or previous birth...lekin phir bhi bhago adil, bhago chahe jitna chahe kyun na bhaag lo but you can run away from your feelings as the feelings are with in you & you can't avoid them... then the scene where aashna calls adil 48 times in 15 mins, this showed aashna's restlessness...finally adil picks the call, both are quiet...sumi seriously un dono kii yeh khamoshi bhi bina kuch kahe bohat kuch bayaan karr jaathi hai...then aashna breaking the silence asking him if he will not say anything, adil's reply that he will & has much to express but he needs time..this literally warmed my heart..& i wouldf say adil chahe kitna bhi time kyun na chahe le lo, lekin don't run away from your feelings & your love i'am sure aashna will want the same thing...then aashna asking him when he will be back, when adil says two days, aashna saying she would wait for him, this conversation for the first time made me feel that it was a conversation between husband & wife..& it made me very happy...then adil thinking about the previous night when he carried aashna to bed, her dried tears, his want to let go, the droplet of tear..the realization that he loves her & she could read that emotion through his maked facade, all these thoughts were beautifully expressed. & now adil knows he has to talk to aashna..he wants to clear things & regrets he had not done it earlier...well i'am a bit apprehensive about this to tell you frankly...i don't know ek ajeeb si bechaini hai in my heart thinking that adil does not say anything negative...i hope what adil talks to aashna is not to push her away but something which gets them closer & strengthens the bond, the relationship they have..keeping my fingers crossed & hoping adil does not mess it up this time..because if he does mess up, he will only end up giving aashna, the women he loves with all his heart more tears & pain & in turn not just to aashna he will be giving bouts of pain to himself too...& i can't see either of them in pain.. so hoping that adil does not mess things up between him & aashna... then now talking about the most recent part which you have updated...that is i'am talking about update number 28...& this update was filled with twists & turns...so this update starts with rishabh reflecting back on what shekar told him how adil was burdened with responsibilities while he, i mean rishabh got everything ready-made, he was did not suffer the consequences that came with the responsibility, but got to enjoy the fruits coming out of the responsibilities fulfilled...i'am really happy finally rishabh is thinking on these lines & this is making him realize too that kahiin na kahiin he was wrong...somewhere he has misjudged adil... i'am glad this sense of realization is coming on rishabh...with this i'am sighing a huge sigh of relief...now the ball is in rishabh's court & it is on him as how he would mend fences with his elder brother...good one relationship kii ek taraf kii complexity tho kum hui...nice..then next here aashna knows adil would be returning that day..& she is restless, nervous...this shows kii aashna ke liye her relationship with adil is the most impotant one..& she values her relationship with adil more than she even cares to accept...the talk between rashi & shaleen was sweet...really cute..a couple in love.. chalo at least there is one relationship which is less the complexities...hehe...good...then rashi calling adil..par yeh kya the shocking bit was adil has met with an accident, his life, his family, aashna all flash in front of his eyes...this bit scared me off to my wits...i was like what the he** this just cannot be happening...it was like my heart was out in my mouth..heart thudding faster, for adil to be safe...then the next scene where rishabh is left numb to react about adil's accident..shekar & rishabh's scenes, at the hospital...they are worried sick about adil, the way they give each other & themselves dilasa that adil would be fine, all this was really well written...then the family is informed...i liked the care & concern all had for adil..it is good to see not just adil, but adil's family cares for him equally too..it is good that adil is out of danger..though he needs proper rest & care, i'am sure he will receive proper care from his beloved wife aashna...then adil ko hosh aatha hai..man even i'am breathing a sigh of relief...& adil ko ek tarah kii sukoon milthi hai seeing shekar, rishab, rashi, his mother, dadi worried about him..well kabhi kabhi when you know people care that is surely has a soothing effect...it is really a good thing..& i was happy that adil's family was by his side, when adil needed them the most & they made it clear to him that he is cared for...this is really really good...i liked hpw adil convinced & assured his mother he is fine...lekin ab yeh kya jiski talaash adil ke nazron ko hai wohii adil ke nazron se ojhal hai...it is like aashna is playing hide & seek with him..something like she does not want to come in front of him...adil knows she was at the hospital, lekin phir bhi woh uske saamne nahii aathi...well in a way this is good as it has made adil want aashna more..& also more restless for her & i like it..actually i loveee it...then finally adil is home, after two torturous days for adil at the hospital, he forced everyone that he wanted to come home..i'am sure the main reason for this was that adil has not seen aashna yet..& that is what is torturing him all the more...lekin once adil is home, abhi bhi adil ke is torture ka koi jawaab nahii miltha..ghar pe bhi aashna does not come in front of him..i'am sure this is making adil go crazy with concern.. & his love is getting restless...on the other hand, aashna knows that adil is home, she sees him, she also knows he is worried for her, aur aashna kahiin na kahiin yeh baat bhi jaanthi hai kii adil kii nazrein usse hii dhoond rahii hai...well aashna yeh kya baat hui you are seeing your love 7 life chori chupke, but you are not going in front of adil..aur tum usse bechain karr rahii ho...not fair aashna..apne deewane ko, apne pyaar ko itna na thadpao...is situation par mereko ek gaana yaad aaying 'joh haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai, woh haal dil ka udhar ho raha hai, jaane jaa dilon pe pyaar ka ajab sa asar ho raha hai'...yeh pyaar bhi na pyaar karne waalon se ajeeb ajeeb cheezein karwatha hai...then here aashna sees to it that adil is well attended with food & medicines at the right time... waahhh...waahhh...waahhh..yeh hui na baat...i really love the way aashna loves & cares for adil..both adil, aashna love each other staying in the background, lekin woh dono hii kabhi khulke apne pyaar ka izhaar nahii karthe, na doosron ke saamne na ek dusare ke saamne & now i think it is time for both of them to express their feelings, pour out their love in front of each other..& that would be ust great...then the night falls & aashna enters the room with a thought that adil would be asleep..seeing adil gets tears to her eyes, the tears have so much of meaning here...then aashna going to close the window...adil startling her saying not to close it as he can't see her face if she did..yeh hui na humare hero waali baat, he knows his wife is avoiding him, he knows that his wife would be in the room to check on him when she is sure he is asleep, that is how well adil understands his better half..this is awesome... now adil & aashna are face to face & i love it..muaahhh...aashna is surprised that he is awake... adil saying he has not seen her for five days show his restlessness in the heart...this was too good...then aashna asking the obvious question to avoid adil's comment that he is awake..& adil saying that yes he is...on this i would like to say guys adil is awake tab hii tho you are talking to each other..hehe...then coming to the baatein between adil & aashna..it was lovely..mereko bohat zyada bhaagaya yeh part...ek dum mazaa aagaya...aur yeh bit padhkarr seeti maarrne ka mann karr raha tha..so let me tell you what i loved about this bit with my comments, so unki baatein drifts towards the place where aashna tells him i thought you were asleep.. in turn adil retorts saying & that's why you cared to enter the room..this is a typical naraazgi, banter between miyaan-biwi...tooo cute...now aashna tries to deny, but aashna i would like to tell you you fail to realize your hubby though infringes indifference towards you, he still knows you very well may be better than your own self, just like how you adil inside out...hehe...so adil's concern, care sawaal bannkar comes to his mouth, he asks aashna what's wrong...& he says he knows that somethingis...this is mast, humare hero jii rocks...love him completely... then aashna following adil's footsteps she wants evade the matter, but adil usse aise hii chodne hii thodi na waala tha..naahhh..adil realizes aashna is crying...he is more worried to wants aashna to come & sit by him...but aashna does not & she says sorry to him...she goes onto to say that she feels responsible for his accident as she kept nagging him, she says she should have given him time to come to term with his feelings... well i understand aashna's guilt...she feels it is because of her i think it is her fear, her love, her guilt all put together talking..i felt bad for her...adil ka telling her kii accident accidentally hotha hai & she is not responsible..was very sweet on his part...i like how adil aashna ko samjha raha tha... too nice...then aashna ka voicing her fear, her love, uska kehna kii her life revolves around adil...all this shows aashna values adil more than her life...this brought tears to my eyes..it was emotional..too touching..the way she says she loves him too much, it touches my heart...bohat bura laga mereko for aashna...then adil ka concern for her, because she is guilty of something for which she isn't responsible...her tears are hurting adil...adil's pain is hurting aashna.. dekho tho inka pyaar kaisa hai, ek ko takleef hothi hai tho dusre ko dard hotha hai aur agar ek rotha hai tho dusare ko chubtha hai.. finally aashna has voiced her thoughts of what adil means to her... awesome..dialogues..perfect sense...it touched my heart it was brilliant put forth..& wonderfully written...& the final bit where adil walks to aashna with the pain & hugs her...this was the highlight all adil cares for is too soothe aashna's pain, ismein woh kudh ka dard bhi bhool gaya...it was like both aashna & adil wanted to just wash away their pain with their hug..their hug was so effective..& simply beautiful..i loveddd ittt...it was just a hug but it had so much depth to it..for me it seems like this one hug has washed away the wall existing between the two of them...hyeee...main gudh khake marr-jawaan..main vari-jawaan adil aashna ke pyaar par...ufff.. jadoo hai un mein joh mujhe unki aur kheenchtha hai..as though they are magnet... just tooo gooddd...really liked it very very very very very very very much..the updates were mast, zabardast, superb, marvelous, perfect, brilliant, wonderful, beautiful, nice, lovely, bindaas, dhaasu, jhakaas, bole tho ek dum raapchik...fantastic, fabulous, mind blowing, mind blasting & mind boggling...it was just out of this world...& your writing is very good yaar..keep up the good work going..i'am thoroughly enjoying the way the fanfic is progressing, it is unique, different & very interesting...your writing completely rocks yaar sumi...whitles & claps from my side yaar... keep it up... 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now sumi let me talk about my guess for the coming up parts...hmm..i hope mera guess sahii hai..this is something which is just my guess...aur mera guess kitne hadh thak sahii hoga ya ghalat that depends on you...tho yeh raha mera guess...well i think now in the forth coming parts, adil, aashna ke bohat saare close moments humko padhne ko milenge...you know as in adil needs care aur ab aashna uska poori tarah se khayal rakhegi...she would not let him do any work...shayad aisa bhi ho kii aashna adil par apni biwi hone ka roub jaadegi..she will use her right of being his wife & make sure that adil is fit & fine...& i don't know why i feel that you know even now when he knows that aashna loves him but still he would push her away, as he may be of the notion that may be aashna would be better off without him...shayad adil usse kudh se durr karne kii koshish karega, but this time i'am sure aashna uska peecha nahii chodegi she will force his love for her from him..woh majboor karegi adil ko agar adil tries to push her away or distance himself from her...waise i think bohat saare romantic, awkward, intimate, typical hubby wifey ke scenes are on their way in Mr & Mrs. Adil raichand's life...hehe...so sumi ab tu bata kya mera yeh guess sahii hai...am i right or am i right...mujhe zaroor batana...hehaha... ab sumi next part jaldi se post karna..me waiting for the next part very very very eagerly... okiesss.. The image

P.S: Is Barr I Had Told Myself I Would Not Reserve A Comment, Kyunke Harr Barr Res Karke I Don't Comment, So Is Barr Socha Directly Comment Hii Likhoongi..So Here Is The Comment I Hope Tumko pasand Aaya Ho..Sorry For The Delay Once Again..

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#355

Awesome...

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Sorry galati se reply ka naya post add kar diya niche...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#356

part 28
how did he land like this?
no concentration?
Rishab seems to now understand things...
Ashna was so inconsolable...
even Adil wants to be with her...
hes changing...
cont soon dear...

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#357

Hi Sumi...

Beautiful update...lovely part...par haan sad to tha...sirf sad nahi bahut sad... I mean how could Adil meet with an accident and he is hurt so badly... well I know he is going to be fine... otherwise you will be killed by us... so am not worried on that front... but still My Adil hurt... OMG...

And here Ashna has one more of her panic attacks... but why did you leave it in between...???

Sorry...m actually running out of time... hence my comments are short... but couldn't stop from dropping in with a word...

Continue soon...

Luv

Guglu

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#358

Awesome part...update as good as these are the reason why we wait so impatiently for your updates...loved the part

Finally Rishabh has realised that he has been wrong all these years. He has just been blaming Adil just to deal with his sorrow. Chalo finally inhe apni galati toh samj mein aayi..dair aaye durust aaye.😉

Rishabh panics with fear and worry when he hears about Adil's accident. While he gets scared for his brother life, Shekhar takes out his fear by shouting at Rishabh and the police officer.

Adil is touched to see his whole family present when he regains consciousness. It meant a lot to him but he is disappointed on not seeing Ashna there. But his restlessness turns into worry when he does not see her for five days.

Ashna's guilt and confession was heart touching. She could not bare the thought of losing him. How do you think of such brilliant dialogues...the way in which she confesses that her happiness, sorrow, tears are all for him and because of him...it was simply superb.

Adil could not see her crying so hard. He jsut wanted to take all her pain away.

Madam aapne bhi update thabhi rok liya jab finally Adil kuch bolne wala tha. Hope this time he will confess his feelings. waitng for the scene when rishabh will apologies to adil...so please continue soon.

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#359

hey swtheart ...how r u doing bacha ...hope ur new year started with a bang darling ...

So one of ur missing readers is back aftyer a long time ...sorry swtheart ...cud nt come to IF so much ...but yeah thanks for pming me ..dat I finally got thru this wonderful story of yours ...

thank goodness...Aashna confessed her love ... but my poor Adil ... u got his car bang trhat bloody pole ...poor boy cudnt even open his eyes ...new year wasnt so good for him ... sweetoo ko jaldi thik kar dena ok ...n make sure Aashna is 24 hours taking care of him ...bas romantic lines bolne se kuch nhi hoga ...she shud personally take good care of hubby dear...

Rishabh has changed ... his eyes moistened to see Adil in that condition ...

I feel sad for Adil's mother ...she has got thru so much in life ...n now her son in that condition ... but its good dat u made him recover earlier ..poor lady must be feeling fine

So as usual Rocking part ... n joote chappal kyun maarnegne ...tenu toh pappiyaan jhapiyan deni hain menu...missed u alot ...tu toh bhoolgyi akki di ko nhi...chal apna khyaal rakh n now i l be regular with my comments

love u swtheaRT

AKKI

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#360

update to bohot accha tha sumi mam😊 😊 😉but adil ka accident karana zaroori tha kya kitni chot aayi hogi use 😡 😡 chalo gussa thodi der mein karte hain pehle update ki baat karte hain

so finally rishabh mein kuch kuch akal aane lagi hai use shekhar ke words hi uske dimaag mein ghum rahe hain accha hai kahin to apna dimaag laga raha hai lagta hai rishabh ke liya ab dilli dur nahi hai🤢 🥱 😆 shekhar ke baat karne ke baad se atleast use ye to samajh me aa raha hai ki adil ne uske liye kya kya kiya bina uske pooche kahe kitna pyaara aur accha bhai mila hai rishabh ko i hope iss baat ki akal bohot jaldi aaye usme😉 😉 😊

rashi aur shaleen ka convo normal tha but it was nice😊 😊 😊

ab aate hain humare pyaare adil per jinka abhi abhi sumi madam ne ek accident karwa diya ... well iske i will not say much kyunki agar adil jaldi thik nahi hua to priya pata nahi kya haal karegi tumhaara aur uske baad hum sab to secondary waise priya hi pura ka pura kaam kar degi aur apni salaamati ke liye to tumhe adil ko jaldi thik karna hi padega aur coincidence to dekho priya ne apni profile pic bhi change kar di hai tumhe daraane ke liye aur ek bhootni ko bhi apne comment me lekar aati thi wo tumhe daraane ke liye i guess use shayad doubt ho gaya tha ki tum aisa kuch karogi😈 😆 😆

itni chot lagi hai use lekin phir bhi wo apne ghart waalon ke baare mein soch raha hai kitni care karta hai sab ki😔 😔 lekin rishabh ko dekh ke pehli baar aisa laga ki shayad ab sudhe=ar jaaye pehli wo adil ke liye darr raha tha ki kahi kuch na ho jaaye chalo rishabh sudhar to raha hai kam se kam😊 😊 😊

baad dono adil aur ashna bada cute part tha yaar hope ki ab adil ye sab sunne ke baad wo bhi accept kar le ashna ke liye apna pyaar aur jab adil bolne ja raha tha to uski bolti band karke update rok di😭 😭 😭 plsss jaldi aur likho aage😍 😍 😉

ppplllsss sumi continue soon😭 😊

shreya😊