My Last Desire..!!AR SS... pt 8(4/3) - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
awesome part yaar, luvd it...
poor Armaan, really feeling bad for him...
curious to know the reason, wat happened before 5yrs to Armaan...
luv the way Riddhima took care of Armaan, she is a sweet heart...
waiting for the next part...
do update soon & thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
hiii radhi...

jus nw came thrg ur ff ...

simply awesome😊


plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
hey radhi
wonderful part
u expressed ridz s feelings very nicely
i liked it very much
wt happened 5 yrs back
eager to know about it
continue soon...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
amazing update!!!!!!!!
waiting to know the reason behind armaan's condition.
please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
hey dear
Awsome part👏⭐️👏⭐️👏
poor armaan
loved hw ridz take care of him
curious to knw what happen 5 year ago
which make armman like this
thanks for pm
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
hey Radhi
very nice part!
Armaan is so adorable but at the same time i feel bad 4 him...can't c him like dis!
wanna know the reason behind dis...
loved how Ridz is taking care of him!
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

PART 7

Riddhima was laying on sofa... n was in deep thought...

Riddhima(in mind):kyu itna sab badal gaya??? aur to aur Armaan ki

haalat bhi.. kya hua hoga ?? muje in sab ki jad tak pahoch na

hoga.. sabse pehle to Armaan ki file dekhti hu...

she got up n took file n was stdying file... she was confussed

at sum points... she marked with pencil...

n heard Armaan 's scream...

Armaan in sleep...

Armaan:nahi chhod do muje me nahi aaunga chhodooo

muje me nahi jaungaaa...

Riddhima rushed to him... n he woke up with a jerk...

sweat was all over his face n body...he was shivering badly... n sweating badly...

Riddhima:Armaan kya hua??? dekho koi nahi le jayega tume ... mein hoo

yaha Armaan...

Armaan saw her n hugged her...

Armaan:Basket wo muje le jayenge muje nahi jana waha...

Riddhima:koi nahi le jayega tume mein hoo na yaha...

Armaan broke the hug ...

Riddhima:dekho kitna paseena aaya n wiped it with her dupatta...

Armaan put his head on her chest...

Armaan:Basket muje dar lag raha haiii...

Riddhima:mein hoo na Armaan fir ... fir kyu dar lag raha haiii???

dekho mein yahi hu ... tumhare paas... aur hamesha rahugi...

aur ab jaldi se so jaao kyunki kal hume...

Armaan:bahar ghumne jana haiii... said excitedly...

Riddhima:hmmm so jaldi se so jaao...

Armaan put his head in her lep... n held her hand with both

hands n put her near his heart...

Riddhima:chalo ab aakhe bandh karo me yahi hoo...

n closed his eyes with her other hand...

n covered him with bedsheet... n moving her hand in his hair..

Riddhima had tears on her eyes...

Riddhima(in mind):kitni takleef me haiii .. kitna dard seh raha haiii...

aur me kitni majboor hu ki uska gham baat bhi nahi sakti...

use samja bhi nahi sakti ... par me use is dard se bahar nikal ke

rahungi... me Armaan ko is haalat me nahi dekh sakti ...

nahi dekh sakti... n staring at him...

mein use thik karke hi rahungi... chahe use thik karne ki liye

muje kuch bhi kyu na karna pade...

on other hand gang was worried abt Armaan and Riddhima...

NEXT DAY...

sun rayes fell on Riddhima's face n she opened her eyes...

n she was in still same condition she was sitting n Armaan 's

head in her lap... she saw him sleeping peacefully holding

her hand... she slowly pulled back her hand n slowly put his

head on pillow...without disturbing him... she got up...

Riddhima(in mind):Armaan to abhi so raha haii me jaldi se bath le kar

aati hu.. par mere kapde to ghar par haiii.. oh god ... par sayad

Niki ke kapde jarur honge...

she went to Niki's room n checked in her cupboard...

Riddhima:oh god ye to sab sleev less haiii ... ab kya karu????

jo bhi ho Riddhima aaj pahenle tere paas aur koi aoption nahi haiii

... sirf aaj ke din ki to baat haiii... baad me ghar jake kapde

le aana... jaldi kar Riddhima fir Armaan ke liye nasta bhi to banana

haiii...

she went to washroom after sumtimes she got ready...

she was looking her self in mirror...

Riddhima:itni bhi buri dress nahi lag rahi haiii...

n after that she went to kitchen n made aaloo ke parathe...

thn quickly went to Armaan's room...

n saw Armaan was still sleeping...

she went to him n carresed his hair... Armaan slowly opened his

eyes n firstly saw her smiling...

Armaan:Basket .. armaan whispered slowly...

Riddhima:good morning... Riddhima wished him...

Armaan turned n moved his head in her lap again...

Riddhima:abhi bhi nind aa rahi haiii...

Armaan:hmmm...

Riddhima:thik haiii so jaao...

Riddhima(in mind):ye jitna aaram karega utna uske dimag ko rest

milega aur utna hi wo jaldi thik ho payega...

just then Armaan remembered sumthing.. n he got up with a jerk...

Armaan:Basket aaj to hume ghumne jana haiii...

muje sona nahi haiii... said excitedlyy n loudly...

Riddhima:ha baba jayenge... par pehle brush karlo fresh ho jaao...

aur fir baad me nasta bhi to karna haiii pata haii mene tumhare

liye aaloo ke parathe banaye haiii...

Armaan:wow aaloo ke parathe me jaldi se ready hoke aata hu tum

mera wait karna haaa...

n ran to the washroom..

Riddhima:paagal ... n smiling n just realised wat she said...

paagal??? wo paagal nahi haii Riddhima... scolded herself...

after sumtimes he came out n then they had their break fast...

Riddhima:Armaan itni jaldi khatam kar diya???

Armaan:ha Basket jitni jaldi jayenge utna jyada ghumenge na????

Riddhima:thik haii par pehle medicine khani padegi ...

Armaan:nahi Basket aaj nahiii...wo bahut kadwi lagti haii

n made face...

Riddhima gave him his medicine...

Riddhima:ye lo khalo jaldi aur fir uske upar juce pee lena kadwa nahi

lagega thik haiii ...

but Armaan made bichara face...

Riddhima:chalo jaldi muh kholo...

he opened his mouth sadly...

Riddhima made his eat medecine n made him drink juce...

riddhima:ab aise muh mat banao abhi paani lati hu...

then she made him drink water...

they went out ... n sat in car... Riddhima on driving seat...

just then she remembered she forgot her mobile...

Riddhima:Armaan tum 2 min ruko me mobile le kar aati hu...

Armaan:Basket jaldi aana...

she again went in n took her mobile n came out ...

n loked the door... n turned n saw gang... was standing in front of her...

Anjali:Riddhima tu kaha jaa rahi haiii?????

Riddhima turned her face as she dint want to see any1...

Niki:Riddhima plzzz hume bhai se milna haii ek baar plzzz...

hospital wale sirf hume use dekhne dete the milne nahi plzz...

Riddhima:muje der ho rahi haii me chalti hu...

n abt to go... bt stopped hearing atul's voice...

Atul:Riddhima plzz...

Riddhima:me bhi wahi keh rahi hu plzzz jiju... aap log Armaan se na mile

wahi behtar haii uski haalat wese bhi thik nahi haiii aur me nahi

chahti ki aap logo ko dekh kar uski haalat aur kharab ho jaye...

wo car me betha haii aur me chahti hu ki wo aap logo me se

kisi ko bhi na dekhe...

n went to the car n sat in n drove off car...

Niki:plzzz koi to use roko muje bhai se milna haiii

n crying...

Atul:Niki galti humari hi thi to saza to hume bhugatni hi

padegi...

Muskaan:galti sirf humari nahi thi Atul... tayaji (Gunjan's father) ki bhi thi...

Anjali:ha Atul muskan thik keh rahi haiii galti papaa ki bhi haiii...

hum to Riddhima ko sab kuch batana chahte the par papa nahi chahte the ki Riddhima ko kuch pata chale...

Atul:par hum papa ko to kuch nahi keh sakte na????

Rahul:guyzz ghar chalte haiii Riddhima ko manane ke bareme sochte

haiii...

Sameer:wah Rahul bilkul thik kaha me bhi yahi soch raha tha...

muskaan:sameer plzzz ...chalo guys...

then every1 left from there...

Armaan n Riddhima went to shopping mall n did so many shopping n each

n every time Armaan behaved like a child n Riddhima's heart

was fet tug seeing him as evey1 was staring at him...

then they went to resturent as Armaan was hungry ...

then Riddhima again gave him his medicine...

then they went to park... they played so many games...

its evening n Riddhima's cell rang... n Dr.shashank calling...

Riddhima:hello...

Dr.Shashank:dr.Riddhima aap abhi hospital aayiye muje aap se jaruri baat

karni haiii...

Riddhima:ji sir...

n shashank cut the call...

Riddhima(in mind):Armaan ko kaise kahu????

she saw he was swingging...

she went to himm...

riddhima:Armaan jhula roko...

Armaan stopped...

Armaan:Basket muje aur jhula lena haiii...

riddhima:Armaan hume hospital jana haiii...

Armaan:kya??? Armaan was socked..

Armaan:nahi Basket tumne muje promise kiya tha ki hum

hospital nahi jayenge... aur tum abhi... nahi me nahi jaunga...

Riddhima:dekho Armaan hum waha rehne nahi jaa rahe haii hum apne

ghar hi rahege ...

Armaan:nahi mein nahi jaunga...

Riddhima:dekho Armaan mein doctor hu ryt???

Armaan:ha...

Riddhima:to doctor log kya karte haiii????

Armaan:sab patient ko thik karte haiii...

Riddhima:hmmm to wo patient ko thik karne wo kaha jate haiii????

Armaan:hospital... aur kaha???

riddhima:dats it... muje bhi wahi jana haiii...

Armaan:nahi Basket tum waha nahi jaaogi plzzz...

Riddhima:plzz Armaan dekho hum waha jaldi se kaam khatam karke

wapas aa jayenge ...

Armaan:nahi hum hospital nahi jayenge... nahi matlab nahi...

Riddhima(in mind):

oh god ab kya karu??? waha dr shashank ne bulaya haii'aur ye

maan hi nahi raha haiii... muje kaise bhi karke ise manana

hoga...

Riddhima:agar me baad me tume ice cream khilau to bhi nahi

chaloge???

Armaan thought for sumtimes...

Armaan:nahiii... to bhi nahii...

Riddhima:thik haii tum yahi raho akele me chali jati hu...

n she was about to go...

Armaan held her hand tightly... Riddhima turned n saw him in tears...

Armaan:Basket plzzz muje akela chhod ke mat jaao plzzz...

Riddhima:Armaan plzz ro mat...

n wiped his tears...

Riddhima:main tumhare sath aaunga... par promise karo ki hum jaldi

hi wapas ghar aayenge aur hum ghar par hi rahenhe waha nahi

aur waha me koi injection nahi lunga... aur wapas aate waqt

muje ice cream khilaaogi...

Riddhima:thik haiii promise ab khush???

Armaan:ya...

then Armaan n Riddhima went to hospital... as they entered Armaan held her

hand tighlty...

Riddhima:Armaan relax koi tume nahi le jayega...

but Armaan didnt leave her hand...

n was looking here n there...

then they went to dr.shashank's cabin ...

Dr.shashank saw them... they went in ..

Dr.Shashank:betho shashank told them to sit

Sh:betho

they sat on chair...

Dr. Shashank: so Armaan kaise ho ????

Armaan was looking at him blankly...

n then looked at Riddhima...

Armaan:Basket muje inse koi baat nahi karni ... pata haii ye ,muje

injection lagate the... aur wo bhi har roz... he turned his face from dr.shashank

Dr.shashank:well Armaan to muje thik lag raha haiii.. par Riddhima muje

tumse ye umeeed nahi thi... tum Armaan ko yaha se aise hi le

gayi... bina kisi ki permission ke bagair... aap kya ye nahi

janti ki koi bhi doctor apne patient ko aise hospital se nahi le ja sakta..

said in hard tone... a very tight voice

riddhima:janti hu sir ... plzzz sir muje maaf kar dijiye... muje aise

nahi karna chahiye tha .. par me kya karu?? mujse Armaan ki

haalat nahi dekhi gayi...

Armaan:nahi meine Basket ko kaha tha ki muje yaha nahi rehna

aur muje yahase le jaaye... armaan defended Riddhima

shashank smiled at his answer...

Riddhima:Armaan ye lo mobile game khelo thik haiii...

n Armaan started to play game..

Dr.Shashank(in mind):is haalat me bhi Riddhima ko defence kar raha haiii...

Dr.Shashank:me janta hoo ki aap log acche dost haiii .. par aise kaise

Riddhima tum Armaan ko hospital se le ja sakti ho??? kya tum nahi

jati ki Armaan ki haalat kya haii???

Riddhima:janti hu sir par mein janti hu wo yaha rahega to kabhi thik nahi

ho payega... plzzz sir ... permision de do...plzz sir...

Dr.shashank:thik haiii ise le jaao.. mein yaha sambhal lunga...

aur me ye permision is liye de raha hu kyunki muje Armaan ki

haalat me thoda fark haii ... kyunki wo yaha tha to ek dum

wild tha... wese wo ab bhi thoda naraz haiii... par muje yakken

haii ki tum use thik kar sakti ho...

Riddhima:thnk u sir thnk u...

Shashank:muje thk u bol rahi haiii????

both smiled n Riddhima got up n hugged himm...

Riddhima:sry ...

Shashank:so ab sry bhi...

they broke the hug...

Riddhima:sir aaj me bahut khush hu bahut... aap kitne acche ho...

aur aap ki beti bahut hi lucky hogi...

Shashank:ha wo to lucky haii par badnaseeb to mein hoo... said in slow voice...

n made sad face...

Riddhima:sir aap ne kuch kaha??

Shashank:nahi ab tum log jaao thik haii???

Riddhima:haa thik haii chalo Armaan...

then they went out of cabin..

n shashank had tears in his eyes...

Shashank:kitna badnaseeb baap hu main me apni beti ko beti bhi

nahi bula sakta aur aaj ... aaj pehli baad meine use apne

seene se lagaya...

n rememberd that moment...

Riddhima was driving n Armaan was still playing game...

Riddhima(in mind):pata nahi par kyu Dr.shashank ko hug karke

kuch alag hi feel hua...

Armaan:Basket tume yaad haii na tume muje ice cream khilani haii

she cameout of her thoughts..

Riddhima:ha baba...

precap:

Riddhima took Armaan to college...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Finally you updated this one
Loved it
Poor Armaan
Feeling bad for him
Love Shashank-Ridzy moment
Do try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take-care

Lots of Love
Geet
Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
very nice part! loved it!
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
~Sunita~
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice parts
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continue soon
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