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PART 6


Armaan was sleeping helding Riddhima's hand tightly...
n tears were streaming out of Riddhima's eyes...
Riddhima POV:
kya halat ho gayi Armaan ki ...kyu hua iske sath ye sab
jis insan ki ek smile par log paagal ho jate haii wo aaj
khud paagal... Aisa kya hua tha 5 saal pehle jo iski ye
haalat ho gayi????... jis insan ke chehre se khushi aur
hasi kabhi gayab nahi hoti thi... aur aaj usko dekh ke log
has rahe haiii... jo insan sab ke dard dur karta tha wo
aaj khud itna dard seh raha haiii... aisa kyu??????..
aur me mene kya kiya??? jab use meri sabse jyada
jarurat thi tab hi me use chhod ke chali gayi????
gheen aati haiii ... mere hote hua Armaan ko itni taklif??
aur me kya kya soch rahi thi ki Armaan muje bhul gaya.
aur wo to yaha aise dard me jee raha tha... use to meri
itni aadat thi ki koi kaam mujse puche bine nahi karta tha
aur me hi use chhod ke chaki gayi... par tab to me Armaan
ki khushi chahti thi Sanjana ke sath... par Sanjana wo kaha
haiii??? Armaan ko yaha is haalat me chhod ke??? aur
saare frndss unhone aisa kaise hone diya... Armaan ko
mental assynlum bhej diya... aur un logo ne muje kuch
kyu nahi bataya????...
n her eyes were wet...
nw its evening...
Armaan wake up n saw Riddhima was beside him...
he smiled seeing her...
Riddhima:uth gaye chalo ab fresh ho jaao...
Armaan:Basket fresh hone ke baad hum ghar jayenge na.???
Riddhima:ha jayenge...
Armaan:thik haii me jaldi se fresh ho ke aata hu par tum kahi
jaana mat ... said in childish voice...
Riddhima:me yahi hu Armaan...
Armaan went to washroom n after sumtimes back ...
Riddhima had packed his things...
RIddhima:chale...??
Armaan:ha Basket muje yaha nahi rehna...
both went from hospital...


on other side...
At AA's house...
Anjali:Riddhima aati hi hogi... jaldi se uske liye khana bana deti
hu...
just then her phone rang...
Anjali:hello Mrs. Joshi speaking...
Nikki:Anjali ... Nikki was crying...
Anjali:kya hua Nikki tum ro kyu rahi ho????
Nikki:Anjali wo bhai???
Anjali:kya hua Armaan ko thik to haii na kahi use firse
dohra to nahi pada na??
Nikki:nahi Anjali wo mene abhi city hospital me phone
kiya tha unhone bola ki bhai ko sanjeevni me admit kiya
haiii...
Anjali:kya par.. but she was cutted...
Nikki:mene sanjeevni me bhi phone kiya tha unhone bola ki
bhai ko to waha se koi le gaya haiii...
Anjali:kya??? par kaun????
Nikki:pata nahi Anjali muje samaj me nahi aa raha haii
ki me kya karu??? me sanjivnee ja rahi hu...
Anjali:nahi Nikki tu waha mat jaa .. waha Riddhima hogi use
shakk ho jayega...
Nikki:abhi Armaan bhai ko dhundhna jyada jarurri haii...
Anjali:thik haii tum jaao aur muje baad me phone kar dena...
me sab ko ghar bula leti hu...
Anjali called the gang...
every1 were sitting in hall at AA's...
Atul:Armaan ko kon le ja sakta haiii??? aur kaha...
every1 was damn worried...
Sameer:Riddhima bhi to wahi haii kahi Riddhima to Ammy ko nahi
le gayi na... kyunki wese bhi kal wo Ammy ke bareme
puch rahi thi u knw dat guys... said with style...
Muskaan:abbey Chup kar Sameer ek to hum yaha Ammy ko le kar
pareshan haii aur tum ho ki apni bakwas kar rahe ho...
Abhimanyu:chill frnds Nikki ka wait karte haii wo hospital gayi
haii...
after 3 hours... its night...
Nikki came to AA's home...
Anjali:Anjali Armaan ka kuch pata chala????
Nikki:nahi Anjali me pehle city hospoital gayi thi
waha mene inquiry ki but unhone bola ki doctors ki
chutti ki wajase Armaan ko waaha se sanjeevni le gaye
the.. fir me sanjeevni bhi gayi mene waha pucha to pata
chala ki wo waha tha par aaj shaam ko hi use le gaya
haii koi...
Atul:par kaun Nikki??? humare siva kisi ko bhi Armaan
se milne ki ya use le jane ki permission nahi haiii...
Nikki:pata nahi par unho ne kaha ki uska case kisi new
doctor ko diya gaya haiii.. me us doctor se bhi milne
gayi thi par wo apni duty khatam kar ke jaa chuki thi...
mene sab jagah dhundha use... par wo nahi mila...
n cried...
muskaan :plzzz Nikki ro mat Ammy hume jaldi hi ,mil jayega
Atul was in thoughts...
Anjali:kya hua Atul tum kya soch rahe ho???
Atul:Armaan ki new doctor Riddhima to nahi?? agr wo haiii
to use Armaan ke baare me sab pata chal gaya hoga..
aur sayad wo use waha se le gayi ho???
Anjali:Atul aisa kaise ho sakta haiii... me abhi Riddhima
ko phone karti hu...
AR or ARSH
ARmaan Riddhima left the hospital in the evening n after 2 hours
Armaan & Riddhima reached to shergill mension...
they entered n Armaan started to see around house...
Riddhima saw him...
Riddhima:Armaan kya dekh rahe ho...????
Armaan:Basket pata haiii me na yaha pehle rehta tha...
Riddhima had tears in her eyes... hearing this...
Riddhima:hmm aur ab hum yahi rahenge hamesha ke liye...
Armaan:sach Basket hum hamesha ke liye yahi rahenge???
hum kabhi hospital nahi rahenge na????
Riddhima:ha Armaan hum kabhi nahi rahenge waha...
Armaan:par tum muje sab ki tarah fir se yaha se hospital to
nahi bhej dogi na??? me waha nahi jaunga muje waha
bahut marte haii chashmish muje bahut pain hota haiii...
aur aur muje paagal bhi bulate haiii...
Riddhima cried even more...
n hugged Armaan n Armaan also hugged her...
Riddhima:nahi aisa ab nahi hoga mein hoo na yaha tumhare paas
aur aaj ke baad na koi tume mareega aur na tume koi
bhi paagal bulayega...

then broke the hug...
Riddhima:tum jaao jaldi se hath muh dho ke aao me tumhare
liye khana banati hu aur gaajar ka halwa bhi...
saying with teary smile...
Armaan :gaajarrr ka halwa?????????? wow Basket
u r the best Dr.Basket ... me jaldi se jaa ke hath muh
dho leta hu... so much excited n went from there to his room
Riddhima:ab tume koi dard nahi hoga Armaan me dard ko tumhare
paas bhi nahi aane dungi.. jitna sehna tha tune seh kiya
ab aur nahiii n placed her purse n files on table n went
to kitchen to make dinner for Armaan...

after sumtimes Armaan came...
Armaan:Baskettt bhukh lagi haiii
Riddhima :Armaan chillao mat u r nr bed boy ok ...
aur chup chap table par beitho abhi laati hu...
Armaan quitly went to table n sat on chair...
he was quite for sumtimes.. then he took spoon n hit it
with dish... again n again n started to make noice...
Riddhima :Armaan kya kar rahe ho shor kyu kar rahe ho???
Armaan:tumne to bola chup betho to me chup hu na...
aur muje bhukh lagi haiii...
Riddhima:laa rahi hu baba... tumna bilkul chhote bacche ki tarah
behave kar rahe ho... n then she realised wat she said...
n look at Armaan who was smiling at her...
Riddhima took food to the table... n sat on chair... then serve
him gajar ka halwa...
then they enjoyed the food...
Riddhima :wow Basket kitna yummy food tha... waha hospital
me to boring sa food tha...
Riddhima :chalo ab medicine ka timeee...
Armaan:no Basket me nahi kha ne wala...
n went to his room...
Riddhima followed himmm... n saw he was sitting on the
bed...
Riddhima:plzz Armaan kha lo na...
Armaan saw her face...
Armaan:thik haii...
Riddhima:good
Riddhima gavge him medicine... n water...
Armaan:Basket chalo chalte haooo na ...
Riddhima :kaha??
Armaan:bahar ghunme chopati????
Riddhima:nahi Armaan abhi tumhari tabiyat thik nahi haii na..
Armaan :to ghar me hi game khelte haiii...
Riddhima :nahi Armaan raat ho gayi haii abhi nahi ...
Armaan :thik haiii n went to his cupboard...
Riddhima :Armaan kaha ja rahe ho??? aur cupboard me kya kar
rahe ho?????
n just then her cell was ringing n saw Anjali Flashing...
she cut the call n swithched off the cell...

At AA
Anjali again dialed the phone number.. but it was
switched off...
Anjali:mobile switch off kar diya usne...
Atul:kya?? m sure nw Armaan ko Riddhima hi leke gayi
haiii...
Muskaan:par kaha mayuank Riddhima to abhi ghar bhhi nahi
aayi... wo kaha gaye honge...
Atul:sayad Armaan ke ghar?? ha wo wahi hoge...
Abhimanyu :chalo abhi chal kar dekhte haiii...
they went to Armaan's house...

AT Armaan's house
Armaan took a paper sheet n pencil...
n started to draw...
Riddhima:tum kya kar rahe ho Armaan??
Armaan :kuch nahi Basket ..
just then heard door bell...
she went out n open the door...
n socked to see gang n gang was socked to see Riddhima...


All:Riddhima.???????
Riddhima went from there... gang followed her...
she was looking really very angry...
Anjali :Riddhima tum yaha kya kar rahi ho????
but Riddhima didnt say anything...
Atul :Riddhima wo hum tume batane hi wale the ki...
Riddhima :ki Armaan ki dimagi haalat thik nahi haiii?????
every1 socked...
Abhimanyu :Riddhima hum tumko batane hi wale the????
Riddhima :kab Abhimanyu kab...?????
Nikki :Riddhima bhai ki haalat thik nahi thi is liye...
Riddhima :aap log kon ho jo ye decide kar diya ki Armaan ki
haalat thik nahi haiii????
Muskaan :Riddhima wo doctors ne kaha tha ki Armaan paagal...
Riddhima :wo paagal nahi haiii Muskaannn she shouted at Muskaan ...
kyu kiya aap logo ne aisa ??? muje ek baar bhi nahi
bataya ?? kyu?? kya aap log nahi jante the ki me Armaan
se kitna pyar karti thi aur aaj bhi karti hu??? to fir kyu
nahi bataya???????
Anjali :kyunki hum nahi chahte the ki Armaan ke baareme sun
kar tu toot jaye...
haa Riddhima hum nahi chahte the ki tuje kabhi bhi Armaan
ki haalat ke bareme pata chale... kyunki hum jante the
ki tu Armaan ki haalat ke bareme sunegi ya fir Armaan
ko dekhegi to tu toot jayegiii nahi seh payegi uska dard...
hum Armaan ko to kho hi chuke the hum tumko nahi khona
chahte the Riddhima is liye tume nahi bataya...
n tears were n Anjali Muskaan n Nikki's eyes...
Riddhima :aap itni swarthi kaise ho sakte ho di ki aap ne mere
Bareme socha Armaan ke bareme ek baar bhi nahi kyu??
aap ko meri fikar thi Armaan ki nahi???
Atul :nahi Riddhima aisa nahi haii hume Armaan ki bhi
fikar haii b ut Riddhima cut himm...
Riddhima :fikar haii jiju?? aap logo ko??? agar aisi hi baat haii
to Armaan ki aisi haalat kaise hui jiju??? me nahi thi par
par aap log to the yaha... aap ko fikar haii na uski is
liye aap logo ne uski ye haalat hone ke baad hospital
bhej diya... akela dard me tadapne ke liye ...
aur aap logo ko uski fikar haiii...
every1 was crying nw...
us jagah aap logo ne use bhej diya jaha use janwaro ki
tarah mara jata tha... jaha use paagal paagal kehke
bulaya jata tha... aap logo ke ek baar bhi rooh nahi
kaapi aisa karte huye?? ek baar bhi??? aap logo ko ek
baar bhi uspe rahem nahi aaya???? ya fir aap log uska
boj hi nahi uthana chahte the...
Atul:nahi Riddhima hum mante haii ki hum ne khud Armaan
ko hospital me bhej diya tha par hum bhi kya karte uski
haalat itni kharab ho gayi thi ki usko hospital me admit
karne ke alawa aur koi option nahi tha humare paas..
use dekhke hume bhi dard hota haiii Riddhima...
Riddhima :agar aap logo ko dard hota tha to aisa kya hua tha ki
Armaan ki ye haalat hui???
Armaan ARMAAN MALLIKKK... jis ki smile pe log
paagal ho jate the wo khud aaj paagal haiii aur log
use dekhke haste haiii...
jis ki har adaa pe duniya fida thi wo aaj aise kyu
behave kar raha haii jaise wo koi 8 saal ka baccha ho???
aur uske chehre ki smile jo
hamesha uski lips pe khelti thi .. aaj wo gayab ho gayi
haiii... kyu kho gaya sab??? kya hua tha 5 saal me
mere jane ke baad ki Armaan Armaan hi nahi raha????
Nikki:tum janna chahti hona ki 5 saal me kya hua???
me kehti hu tume...

At this time Riddhima heard Armaan's scream
Armaan : Riddhimaaa kaha ho????????
Riddhima :aayi Armaannn... she shoouted back...
n wiped her tears...
Anjali :Riddhima hum...
Riddhima :nahi uske samne bhi mat aana...
n went from there...
she went to room
Armaan : are Riddhimaa kaha thi tum kabse wait kar raha tha..
?? aur door pe kaun tha...???????? asked like a child….
Riddhima :koi nahi Armaan...
Armaan :accha thik haii yaha aao na Basket dekho mene kya
banaya???
Riddhima :dikhao ??
n saw he draw beautiful eyes of a girl...
Armaan :kaisi haii????
Riddhima :wow Armaan beautiful eyes... par kiski haiii...
Armaan :no no nahi bataunga its top secret... jab ye me puri
karlu tab bataungaa.. nahi dikhaunga...
Riddhima :aacha thik haii ab so jaao...
Armaan : Basket muje nahi so na haiii...
Riddhima :Armaan chalo jaldi so jaao baki ki kal karna thik haii...
ARmaan : Basket plzzz...
Riddhima :mene to socha tha ki aaj jaldi so jate haii fir kal
ghumne jayenge.. par tume to... n made face..
n Armaan was excited hearing this...
Armaan :nahi Basket so jate haii na kal fir jan a to haii na..
n layed on the bed... Riddhima coved him with bedsheet...
n closed his eyes n started to move fingers in his hair...
soon he slept... she kissed his forhead n came out of
the room n close the door...n went to halll..

In hall
evey1 was sitting n waitting for her...
Nikki :wo bhai???
Riddhima :so raha haiii... said angrily...
Abhimanyu:Armaan ko ghar le chalo Riddhima aur tum bhi chalo...
Riddhima :nahi hum yahi rahenge... na me ghar aaungi na wo..
kya pata uske ghar wapas aane ke baad aap log use
fir hospital bhej do...???
Anjali :nahi Riddhima ..
Riddhima :plzzz di aap log jaao...
Atul :kya tum janna nahi chahti ki Armaan ki ye haalat
kaise hui???
Riddhima :ha chahti hu par abhi nahi .. aur agar aap logo ne
nahi bataya to me khud pata laga lungi par abhi muje
sirf Armaan ko dekhna haiii...
n went to room n saw Armaan was sleeping peacefully.
she layed on sofa...
n gang went back...

kya Riddhima kabhi Armaan ko thik kar payegi???
kya haii wo sach jis ki wajase Armaan ki ye haalat hui
haii???? kys wo gang ko ksbhi maaf kar payegi????
kya Armaan ki haalat kabhi thik hogi ya wo use kho
degi???

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...


Love
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Resss.

Will Pakka Comment dear...😳
EDITED...

Hey Radhi...Here I am and My Promised Comment...Love the part...Poor Armaan, feeling really bad for him...I can't see him in this condition yaar...But I am so glad that he have his Basket with him...Love the way Riddhima care for Armaan...Want to know the reason of Armaan's condition...try to continue soon...Thanks for the PM...Take care

Lots of Love

GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Resss.


Will Pakka Comment dear...😳



its ok i will wait...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Awsm part.
Luvd the ridz words.
Thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Awsome update yar
poor armaan\
curious to knw what happen 5 year ago
which make armman like this
thanks 4 update
keep updating😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Amazing parts Radhika.
I feel so sad for Armaan.
I'm eager to know what happened to him 5 years earlier..
I'm soo glad that Ridz found him.
Anjy is a selfish sister but she was not completely at fault...
The gang has disappointed me a little but I guess noone could tackle Armaan except his basket.
Ridz brought back Armaan home and now I hope Armaan will soon get mentally stable...
Ur ff is really very unique and all the parts written are simply amazing..
Plz update the next part soonest...

luv
Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey it wz tooo good...

loved it

poor armaan...

hope he gets well soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Why is Armaan behaving like this? OMG! I'm very much confused :|

Awesome Update <3 Continue Sooon.. Love Yahh.. Muahh <3
-Samica
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Comment Edited on Page 11...😊

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