My Last Desire..!!AR SS... pt 8(4/3)

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jiyaa_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice starting

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Thnks to all frnds who commented n who liked my work...

will updt tmw...

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Niharika

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey looks interesting add me to ur pm list :)

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 2

at night Riddhima reached to the mumbai...At airport Atul came to
recieve her... Atul saw her coming...Riddhima also saw him n damn
happy seeing him after a long time almost 5 years...she was also
happy that nw she was at mumbai her home town.. her native land..
her life was here in mumbaii... also her family frndzzz,school,
college n her first love... her happiness has no boundries...
she went to Atul n on other side Atul had mixed feelings..
he was happy that she was back but also scared that wat if she ask
about Armaan n wat if she found Armaan...????????
it was all questions marks in his mind but seeing her happiness
he calmed ..
Riddhima:hiii jiju kaise ho???
Atul:hiii me bas thik hu aur tum???
by the way congratulations nw u r nt Riddhima but Dr.Riddhima
nw they started to walk towards his car...
Riddhima:thank you jiju n m Fit n fine apke samne khadi hu..
Atul:hmmm so ab kya plan haii??
Riddhima:bas wahi hospotal join karungi... but use pehle me apne saare
frndzz ke sath njoy karna chahti hu 5 saal sabse dur rahi hu...
bahut miss karti thi me waha tum sabko...
Atul:humne bhi tumko bahut misss kiya.. wese chalo chalte haii sab
ghar par hi haiii
Riddhima:hmmm chalo chalte haii me bahut exited sabko milne ke liye...
they seated in car n Atul started to drive...
Riddhima(in mind) aur khas karke Armaan se but me itni exited kyu hu??
me janti hu ki me use aaj bhi nahi bhuli aur na use pyar karna
chhod saki balki mera pyar waqt ke sath sath aur badhta gaya aur
aur majbut ho gaya...aur kya hoga jab me Armaan se milungi kya me
use kisi aur ke sath dekh paungi ??? nahi kabhi nahi... to fir me
kyu itni exited hu stop it Riddhima ab wo tera nahi raha...
Atul saw her lost in thoughts...
Atul (in mind) :kahi ye Armaan ke bareme to nahi soch rahi????
ha sayad... only god knws aage kya hoga...

then they reached to mayur...
Anjali opened the door n saw her sister after a long time...
Riddhima also saw her elder sister nope her mother...
they saw each other n hugged n tears started to come
out of their eyes... Riddhima broke the hug
Riddhima:di kaisi haii aap???
Anjali:me thik hu tu bata tu kaisi haii???? aur tu to doctor ban gayi na
teri practise kaisi thi?? aur...
but Atul cut her...
Atul:Anjali Riddhima ko yaha bahar hi khade rakhna haii kya???
pehle ise andar le jaao pani pilao bitheo fir apne sare sawal
shuru kar dena thik haiii...
Anjali realised that they were still at door...
Anjali:are Riddhima andar chal na sab yahi haii teri hi wait kar rahe the
then they entered...
Riddhima saw Rahul Muskaan Nikki Abhimanyu Sameer... n every 1 also saw her...
all were smilinggg...
Sameer came to her n hugged..
Sameer:Riddhima kaisi ho tum????
Riddhima:me bilkul thik hu Sameer bhaiya aap kaise haii??
Sameer:me bhi bilkul thik hu... but u knw wat Riddhima mene tume bahut
miss kiya...
Rahul:ha jab bhi usko raat ko bhukh Lagti thi...
n laughed
Nikki and Abhimanyu hugged her n Abhimanyu also
at last Nikki came to hug her
Riddhima saw some fear in her eyes...
then she looked at every1 n found sumthing fishy...
Riddhima:aap sab muje aise kyu dekh rahe ho..???
i knw me 5 saal baaad aayi hu... aur aap logo ne muje
bahut miss kiya but mene to sabko itna miss kiya ki kya batau??
itne saal akeli sabse dur jo rahi ...
n bacame sad... n rememberd about Armaan n started to look here n
there.. Sameer saw that ...
Sameer:are Riddhima kya dekh rahi ho?? hum sab yahi haii
Riddhima:Sameer bhaiya wo Armaan..???????
every 1 looked at each other
Sameer:oh Ammy wo to...
but Anjali cut Sameer
Anjali:are Riddhima tu abhi abhi aayi haii ye le paani pee le
then give her water ...
Atul:ha Riddhima tum rest karo na itni lambi journy karke aayi ho ..
Nikki:ha Riddhima tum rest karo hum chalte haii.. kyu Abhi??
Abhimanyu:ha Riddhima hum chalte haii...
they were about to go..
Riddhima:Armaan kaha haiii wo dikhayi nahi de raha haiii????????
Everyone stopped at the spot…. N also perplexed…
Muskaan:Riddhima wo to..
Riddhima:ha wo Armaan kaha haiii jab se aayi hu kahi nahi dekh raha haiii
jiju ne to bola tha ki sab ghar par haiii
Atul:ha Riddhima wo Armaan ... are Anjali Armaan kaha gaya..???
Anjali:Anjali looked at Atul confusingly...
Anjali :Atul wo Armaan to .. Armaan to ... ha wo Rahul ke sath tha..
Riddhima:Rahul to yaha haiii... to Rahul) Rahul Armaan kaha haii??
Rahul:mere sath???? ha yaad aaya wo mere sath tha par kaha gaya???
Riddhima :kya tumhare sath tha aur tumhe hi nahi pata???
Abhimanyu:wo actually kya haii na Riddhima wo humare sath tha par pata nahi
wo fir kuch lene chala gaya aur usne bola ki baad me ayega
Sameer:kya Armaan tumhare sath tha??? par Abhimanyu Rahul tum logo ne
mujse itni badi baat chhupayi??? muje aap logo se ye umeed nahi
thi shame on you guys...
Muskaan hit himmm
Muskaan:chup kar khotte tum plz apna muhhh bandha rakho thik haiii
Riddhima:ye Sameer bhaiya kya bol rahe the itni badi baat chupayi n
Armaan kyu Abhimanyu ke sath nahi ho sakta ??? m so confussed...
Rahul: Riddhima wo kya haii na is dodo ka na dimag kharab ho gaya haiii
is liye aisi ulti sidhi baat kar raha haiii... ye khud bhi
confussed haii aur tume bhi kar raha haiii
Anjali :ha Riddhima tu yaha aa aur beth na are ha me to tuje puchna hi
bhul gayi ki ab to tu doctor ban gayi haiii to tera aage kya khayal
haii??
Riddhima:Di sabse pehle muje Armaan se milna haiii
Anjali lost his temper
Anjali:kya jab se aayi haiii Armaan Armaan Armaan laga ke rakha haiii..
tuje bola na ki wo yaha nahi haiii to fir kyu tu bar bar uske
bareme puchti haii??? kya Armaan hi tere liye important haii
hum nahi haii?? kya Armaan hi tere litye sab kuch haiii?????
hum kuch nahi haii???
Riddhima:par di..
Anjali:bas Riddhima n went to her room..
Riddhima looked at Atul
Atul:me dekhta hu Riddhima tum bas yaha betho n went from there
Riddhima:par mene to Armaan ke bareme hi pucha tha...
Muskaan kya tum janti ho di itna gussa kyu ho gayi??
Armaan ki aisi kya baat haiii??
Muskaan:ab wo Riddhima ... Anjali actuallly Riddhima wo muje der ho rahi
haiii me chalti hu n went frm there...
Rahul:ab wo me bhi muskaan ke sath chalta hu chal Sameer n they went frm
there
Abhimanyu:ab Riddhima me soch raha tha ki me aur Nikki bhi chalte haiii
Riddhima:par...
Nikki:bbye Riddhima n went from there...
Riddhima was socked seeing their behaviour
Riddhima:ye sab aise kyu behave kar rahe haii jaise Armaan ko na jante ho
???? aur koi kyu muje nahi bata raha haii pehle bola ki wo bahar
haii di achanak se gussa ho gayi.. aur ye sab aise chale gaye..
aur Armaan kaha haiii??? use pata haii ki me aane wali hu???
kahi wo mujse naraz to nahi haiii na ki me use yu chodke chali
gayi?? nahi Armaan kabhi apni basket se naraj nahi hi sakta
par ye di me dekhke aati hu went

on other side...
Anjali was moving here n there in anger
Atul:Anjali tum Riddhima pe gussa kyu huyi????
Anjali:to aur kya karu Atul??? use sab sach sach bata du???
jabse aayi haiii Armaan ke bareme puch rahi haiii...
me janti hu ki wo Armaan se kitna pyar karti haiii wo is
duniya me sab se jyada pyar karti haii... agar use Armaan ke
bareme pata chal gaya to wo jiteji mar hi jayegi...
aur hum Armaan ko pehle hi kho chuke haiii me Riddhima ko nahi
khona chahti hu Atul n started to sry...
Atul:par Anjali ye sacchai aj nahi to kal uske samne aahi jayegi ki
Armaan ab wesa nahi raha hum sab ne juth bola haii use...
tab kya bitegi Riddhima par kabhi socha haiii???
Anjali:me kuch nahi janti Atul hum Armaan ki haalat ki wajase kya
kam ro rahe haiii jo Riddhima ko uske bareme bata kar uski zindgi
bhi chheen le use nahi Atul me use kabhi pata nahi lagne dungi ki
Armaan kaha haiii???kisi bhi kimat par nahi
Atul:par tumne use aaj jis tarah se behave kiya use Riddhima ko jarur
sak hua hoga... ki kuch gadbad haiii.. kya tum Riddhima ko nahi
janti ki wo Armaan ke bareme kaisi haii????
Anjali:isi liye to chahti hu ki use aur me use Armaan ke bareme pata chale
aur wo toot jaye me use toot te hua nahi dekh sakti
Atul...
then Atul wiped her tears...
Atul:par Anjali
Anjali:nahi hum Riddhima ko nahi batayenge aur nahi hum me se koi ab
Armaan ke paas jayega...
Atul:Anjali hum Armaan ka is waqt sath nahi chhod sakte humne pehle hi
itni badi galti kardi haii ki na Armaan hume kabhi maaf karega na
na kabhi Riddhima ...
Anjali:Atul wo humari majburi thi...
Atul:hum ab to majbur nahi haiii...
hume sab Riddhima ko bata na hi hoga hum aur Riddhima se juth nahi
bolenge aur nahi Armaan ke sath naa insafi karenge ...
Riddhima ka haq haiii Armaan ke bareme jan ne ka
Anjali:nahi Atul hum use kuch nahi bata sakte wo nahi seh payegi...
Atul:par Anjali
Anjali:nahi me sArmaan ke bareme Riddhima ko kuch nahi bataungi...
n then they turned n saw Riddhima was standing at the door
they were hell socked Riddhima was also confussed n socked...
(i knw u r also confussed lolzz)

precap
kya Riddhima kabhi Armaan ke bareme jan payegi??? kya hua haiii
Armaan ko??? kya Riddhima kabhi Armaan ko mil payegi??? kya Riddhima
ka pehla adhura pyar kabhi pura hoga?????

IF u like it do comment n plzzz forgive me if u bored
waiting for ur comment...
should i continue this??? tell me frndzzz...

Love'
Radhi...

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jiyaa_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

what happed to armaan ridz should noe it

updaqte soon

nice part

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helen_of_troy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

hey

nice part

wt happened to armaan

i think ridz should know about armaan

continue soon...

thanx for the pm

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roshni_A

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

there is so much suspence .i hope Ridzy ko pata laga hoga ki sab usse kuch chupa rahe hai... i want her to konw about armaan and i also want to know what happened to him? why everyone is hiding this? and why they are blaming themselves...pls continue soon...

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sisgeo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey nice concept do continue soon try to show wat happened to arman soon..il love to read it more..but il prefer if u dont keep us in dark so much..plz just say wat happened to arman soon..cant wait to read more..ure story going at a fast pace and i like it dat way..dont make as if ridhima havent heard wat anjali said...hi hi impatient i kno..cant stand suspense wen it comes to arman.. And plz update soon if possible tomoro