My Last Desire..!!AR SS... pt 8(4/3) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Nice part.every one expect arman knows dat ridhima lover him..I kind of expected u to go to flashback..it was good..better update soon and this is just a suggestion-just giv up slight peek into armans current situation..dont reveal d entire story..just say how he is..or his situation..only if u want..u c im very impatient..im getting frustrated wid out knowing wat happened to him...like a snapshot of his current state..dont say how and why he is like dat...just lil sneakpeek into his life...if possible do this or else ..waiting eagerly for ure next update and thanks for d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey
nice part
loved the armaan and his basket
continue soon...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
part 4



flashback continued...
Riddhima:Armaan Sanjana nahi dikhai de rahi haiii kaha haiii wo??
Armaan:Basket abhi hum humari baat kar rahe haiii isme
Sanjana kaha se bich me aa gayi??? with irritating tone..
Riddhima:Armaan me bas aise hi puch rahi thi ... kyunki abhi
is waqt tume mere nahi Sanjana ke sath hona chahiye???
Armaan:Basket muje na lagta haiii ki mene Sanjana ko na apni
GF bana kar bahut badi galti ki haiii... with serious
face...
Riddhima was socked n confussed too..
Riddhima:Armaan tum ye kya bol rahe ho??????
Armaan:to or kya bolu Basket jab se mene tume ye bataya haii
ki me Sanjana ko pasnd karne laga hu ... aur jabse mene
Sanjana ko propose kiya haii tabse tum mujse dur jana
chahti ho kyu?????
Armaan held her hand in his hand...
Armaan:mujse koi galti ho gayi haiii kya??? meri kisi baat
se hurt hui ho kya????
he moved so close to Riddhima
Armaan:bolo na Basket kya baat haii??? tum kyu muje avoid
kar rahi ho?? mujse dur bhagti ho?? muje tumse dur kar
rahi ho???
Riddhima was looking in his eyes... n she feld bed for
hurting Armaan...she could see hw much she important for
him in his life... n saw his eyes almost wet...
Riddhima couldnt see him like this...
Riddhima held his hand tightly...
Riddhima:Armaan aisi koi baat nahi haii...muje laga ki tum aur
Sanjana jitna time spend karogi utna accha hoga taki tum
or Sanjana ek dusro ko acche samaj paao ge...
Armaan tumhe aage ki life uske sath beetani haii...
is liye me tumse dur rehti hu taki har waqt tum mere siva
Sanjana ke sath raho taki tum muje chhod ke uske
bareme socho...
Armaan:Basket tume ye sab kya soch rahi ho????
tum meri best frnd ho Sanjana se bhi pehle Basket...
kya humari dosti itni kamzor haii ki kisi ke aane ke
humari dosti me koi fark padega...????
Riddhima:nahi Armaana aisa nahi haiii..
Armaan:to fir kaisa haiii Basket tumhara mujse dur dur rehna
,muje khud se dur karna.. iska matlab kya haiii??????
kya tume nahi pata ki tumhari aisi harkato se muje kitna
fark padta haiii...??? kya kabhi socha haii ki jab tum
mere aas paas nahi hoti ya mujse nahi milti to meri halat
kya hoti haii?? me kaisa feel karta hu??? me akela feel
karta hu Basket bahut akela... sirf tum hi to meri
ho sirf tum...aur tum ho ki mujse aise...
she immidetly said
Riddhima:m sorry Armaan... she had tears in her eyes...
Armaan looked at her n saw her in tears...
he quickly wiped her tears ...
Armaan:Basket tum ro kyu rahi ho??? m sry agar mene tume
hurt kiya to m sry...
Riddhima:nahi Armaan m sry... meri galti thi mene hi...
Armaan put fingure on her lips..
Armaan:shhh...
pehle hi meri wajase bahut royi ho ab aur nahiii...
sab meri galti haiii...mene tume itna lamba choda bhaashan
de diya... m really sry...
ab to smile karooo plzzz
Riddhima smiled...
Armaan:dats like my Basket n clicked
nose...
Riddhima:Armaan muje na bahut bhukh lagi haiii ...
Armaan:Basket chalo tum canteen me.. tumne pehle kyu nahi
kaha ki tume bhukh lagi haiii...
then went to canteen n njoyed coffee together...

flash back end...

Riddhima:kitne khush the na Armaan ek waqt tha jab tum mere
bagair nahi reh sakte the aur ab aaj jab me yaha hu to
tum nahiii
n crieddd her heart out...
par pata nahi mera dil kyu nahi maan raha ki tum aisa
kar sakte ho... tum kaha ho Armaan???????????
plzzz bhagwanji ek bar Armaan se milaado plzzz
me use dekhna chahti hu bas ye dekhna chahti hu ki wo
apne pyar ke sath khush hai ya nahi ...

n slept half sitting on bed n having Armaan's pic near
her heart...

NExt day...
sun rays fall on Riddhima's face n her sleep disturbed...
she slowly opened her eyes... she looked at Armaan's pic
n carresed it then put it on side tablen went to washroom
she was ready n took her file n came to hall
Riddhima saw everybody was waiting 4 her...
Anjali:Riddhima tu uth gayi chal jaldi aa naasta karle..
Riddhima silently went to dinning table n did beark fast..
AA looked at Riddhima again n again...
finally mayank asked
Atul:Riddhima tum kahi ja rahi ho kya???
Riddhima:ha jiju wo meri practice khatam hone ke baad muje
apni duty join karni thi...
Anjali:kya par kabse???
Riddhima:aaj se...
Atul:kon se hospital me ??
Riddhima:sanjivanee me...
they reliefed... they were hiding sumthing...
Riddhima:accha di me chalti hu... muje der ho rahi haiii
Anjali:ha thik haii bbye n hugged her..
Atul:best of luck
Riddhima:thnku jiju bbye
Atul:bbye...

after Riddhima went
Anjali:accha hua Riddhima sanjivani me doctor haii warna...

they did breakfast n Atul went to office n Anjali went
to her room...she was cleaning her room...

after 1 hour Riddhima reached to sanjivanee...
when she entered she felt sumthing strange..
Riddhima(in mind): muje itna ajeeb kyu feel ho raha haii??
jaise koi apni chij muje uski taraf khich rahi ho???
every1 welcumed her... then she went to Dr,shashan's
office...she entered
Riddhima:hello sir...
Shashank:hello Dr.Riddhima wel cum to sanjivanee london ki best
doctor ab humari sanjivanee me dats gr888...
Riddhima:ji sir me is hospital ko apna best dena chahti hu..
Shashank:aur me janta hu ye tum karke raho gi...
both smiiled.
Shashank:so Dr.Riddhima Gupta me ye apko ek file deta hu
is case ko aap ko handle karna haiii...
Riddhima took file from shasank
Riddhima:ji sir..
Shashank:so dr.Riddhima best of luck for the first case in
sanjivanee... n i hope 4 the best..
Riddhima:thnk u sir...n i also hope the same...

shashank's cell rang he picked it up...
Shashank:wattt fir se???... ok wait me abhi aata hu...
shashank was damn worried after call he took his lab coat
Riddhima:sir kya hua aap itne pareshan kyu haii???
Shashank:Riddhima chalo mere sath ek nayaa pateint aaya haii
they started to walk hurrily...
they were walk n talk...
use fir se dohra pada haiii uske dimagi haalat bilkul
thik nahi haiii... 5 saal se yahi haal haii aaj tak
koi doctor nahi jaan paya ki wo aisa kyu kar raha haii??
uski aisi haalat kyu haii aur uski haalat sudhar kyu
nahi rahi haii?? wo apna dimagi santulan means mentall
balance kho chuka haiii..
they entered in lift...
Riddhima:kya???
her heart was racinggg
Shashank:haa paagal haii wo pata nahi kab kya kar bethta haii
kisi ko bhi marne lagta haiii... usko kaabu karna bahut
muskil haiii
they started to walk toward the ward of the patient..
they reached there n Riddhima saw 4 guard were helding a
man a strong man n 2 were hitting him with sticks...
n man was yelling in painnn...
Man:cchodo mujeee...
Riddhima heard the voice n saw his clear face he is non
other then our ARMAAN ... ARMAAN MALLIKKK...
(guys plzz dont kill me 4 dis its story)
Riddhima was socked to death...she couldnt believe in her
eyes she actually saw Armaan.. but his condition...
Armaan:chhod do muje
Armaan was trying to be free from guards...
he was trying tro push but their grip was tighten...
n he was being hitted by big sticks...
so many questions were in Riddhima's mind...
Riddhima froze at the same place she didnt move an inch..
Armaan was being hited in front of her...
n shashank made injection to make him calm...
Riddhima couldnt saw his condition.. so she ran towards
Armaan ...
Riddhima:Armaannn...
every1 stopped...
Armaan saw Riddhima... she made him free from gaurds...
Riddhima:choodo ise chhod do... she pushed them...
she hugged him tightlyyy


ab kya hoga ???????????????????????????????????

hope u like it... if u like it do comment
m waiting 4 ur comment...

Love😉
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

poor ammy...luvd yur update...continue soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
hwww actually i was thinkingf the same too

updsate soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Awsm.
Superb part.
Finaly he is here.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
hey
nice part
atlast he entered
waiting for next
thanks for the pm
continue soon...
bye
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
hey read dis ff 2day
its awesome
luvd it
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
nd add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Oh my god..expected but tragic...very nice update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Wow .wonderful update Radhika.
This ff is beautiful...
Thanks for the pm..
Plz update the next part soon.

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