MG:FF:The 'Captured' Life~~Thread 1~~

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Awesome part dear...

Geet is a mystery...she is confusing me...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Nilam-
wonderful update...very interesting ...
very difficult to understand her...too much mystery is surrounding her...hope it will revealed soon...
please continue soon...

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thnx for ur lovely comment dear ... :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran
Geet is somewhat calm now...what was written in those papers..Geet is fighting with some pain hidden in her...what is that...interesting update
thanx for pm Namratha

thnx a lot for ur comment 😃
I hope I live upto ur expctns

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: t_areeb
whats bothering her?
maan has to find some way to find it

geet does not seem to be the one sahring her life with anyone

u r right geet is defo not gonna open her mouth so easily!!!

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

i wonder about Geet's past
cont soon
sorry it will take me a while to comment since school has started and i'm busy due that
most probably i will read updates on Friday nights, and the weekends
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii
i wonder about Geet's past
cont soon

sorry it will take me a while to comment since school has started and i'm busy
due that

most probably i will read updates on Friday nights, and the weekends

thanks for the pm

it's absolutely fyn dear..
Nd thnx for ur lovely comment 😃

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jyothi111

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice update dear...very nice...continue soon...

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preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

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loved the update...

geet seems to b the mystery...

waiting to know more abt her thro maan...

pl cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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10 years ago on this day 9/11 many people(above 3000) lost their lives😭

May all those souls Rest In Peace. Many people who lost their loved ones , their families , their parents moved on in their life without losing hope , i salute all of them.

PART 4

Geet went inside , Maan too went inside to get his camera , he took his camera and bag with him and while walking out of the room he noticed the flowing papers again

he took his camera and clicked a picture , evev he didn't know why he clicked it, but still he clicked the picture , not knowing the reason

he locked the room and went to geet "Geet , will u go with me , i'm new to this place so i need some one"
He was the one who refused her , but something , someone pulled him there to ask her to accompany him , He just asked her without any second thoughts,

something made him to ask her , something that was above his dislike towards her behaviour.
"only if it's possible"
"No ...,no problem, i'll come" answered Geet
They both sat in his jeep , and Geet directed him , The way ,Even maan didn't knew where they were goin'
They reached a beautiful small building , Maan looked at geet questioning her
"This is an orphanage , i know you may have visited many but since you have come here to explore this place ,i thought you would like to see the place which

resembles hope , even though they all have lost the most important part of their lives , still you can see them smiling ,with their other friends and

enjoying the life with a lot of hope . This is one of the best places of this place..saying these Geet went inside
Maan stood there smiling , "So beautiful words"
"chale", geet said standing near the gate
Maan smiled and went inside , He met the children , Geet was familiar with them , In fact he got to know a fact that she goes there every alternative day and

spends time with them , telling stories ,and helping with them with their school work.
He wondered about her totally different behaviour towards children , but he snapped out of all his thoughts, and talked to the

children, he enjoyed every word they uttered, he talked to them , he enjoyed the glow in their faces while talking about their aspirations and

dreams, Even though maan has previously visited many orphanages geet was right it's one of the most beautiful places of this place...
They both walked along the ground and the open space around the orphanage , While walkin Maan's shirt got dirty due to the grease on one of the walls..It

reminded him of geet's sudden outburst, He got scared and remained silent .Geet saw it , "Ther's is a tap there eyou can clean it "
Maan nodded like an obedient small child and went with her

There were two taps one a small one and other a huge one like a large pipe , Geet Opened the huge pipe and Maan got completely wet
Geet..: OOps..!!
Maan: no problem it's alright..!! it happens sometimes..!!
saying these he saw Geet who was standing there with a mishevious smile on her face ,
"WAT..!!!
was this inentional..??????"
Geet raised her eyes ,ans smiled mischeviously which indicated a 'yes, ofcourse'. ...she smiled naughtily.
Maan closed his eyes and smiled on himself .
she smiled and went away...
Maan loved this childish bahaviour of hers , it was the first time he saw the naughtiness in her , it was something, so different...!!

Everyday he got to see a new aspect of her , she was becoming more difficult to understand ... but still this time he enjoyed her mischeif
After some time they both went to a busy place which was very crowded

Geet got bit confused
Geet :What are we doing here ? it not even peaceful , it's a crowdy street..!!
Maan: look at it carefully Geet, it's not kust crowd i,t's resembles the activeness of the society , the liveliness of the people , it's not dull instead it is full of life...he said

this with a smile face looking at the crowd.
Geet looked at him , The glow of her face suddenly disapeared and she left the place silently and sat inside the jeep without uttering a word , Maan couldn't understand anything , he went near

her "what happened?? tum aise chup-chaap kyu aa gyi??
geet didn't reply
Maan understood that she wanted to go back , but he didn't knew why , the sudden change in her confused him.
He started the jeep and just then he heard Geet's voice

"But sometimes this crowd becomes so suffocating , and even in the crowd we start feeling lonely and

irritated , and that's why may be loneliness seems more peaceful and calm

her eyes were filled with lot of pain and many answered questions
Maan just listened to her , there were no words to say , Now he knew tht there was something that is pricking her very badly ,definetely something..!
He started to drive and there was silence all over , neither of them uttered a single word in the whole journey , it was so slient , only thing they could feel is the cool

breeze blowing all over...

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Part 5- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1770841/mg-ff-the-captured-life-thread-1?pn=25

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago