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supernasahu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Nice update.👏 👏 👏

Liked it. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Continue soon.

Thnx 4 d pm.

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

nice part...but why is geet so rude?

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jyothi111

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Owesome dear...it was very nice...i enjoyed it ...

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unknown.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

nice update

geet is very strange :\

cont sooon

harneet <3

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
nice part...but why is geet so rude?

u'll get to know in the coming updates😛

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Hey guys thnx a lot for your comments , they mean a lot to me 😃😃, nd so many comments regarding geet's behaviour😛 , i hope i come up with some valid reason...😆

and here's the third part , hope u'll like it😃

PART 3

That night maan woke up at the middle of the night to drink water , and while drinking water he peeped out of his window and saw geet writing something sitting in the balcony of her room

with a smile on her face. He wondered what was she doing in the balcony during the night
the light was falling on her , it was highlighting her beautiful smile on her lips , she seemed so peaceful , calm and poised...
He kept watching her , but turned his face away coming out frm all the thoughts her smile created.
He avoided himself from thinking about her , 'coz he somewhat hated her rude behaviour ...he completely forgot about her and went back to sleep.

The next morning he got ready to visit the schools or probably the only school of that place , he was all set to the capture all the developments that were slowly

taking place in the village ...he carried all the essential things with him . and he went to maya aunty's desk to inform her but he couldn't find her and while leaving he saw some writings over there written on a green

sheet , they were the same coloured sheets on which geet was writing on yesterday night , he understood that they were geet's writings , he remembered her watching those sheets.
And jst then he saw geet coming towards her . He remeberd all the incidents that happened and her weird behaviour..
he had a question mark on his face
"Why are you so shocked??"
look Maan, maya aunty told me that you are new to this town , she gave me the responsibility to help you in exploring this town and i can't deny her. so i can

help you until you get used to the routes

"No no it's completely alright i am used to travel alone, i'll have no problem and thanx for your concern "
he looked at her with a look that silently spoke words "concern my foot"!!
Maan smiled at her ver uncomfartably.
She went away from the room and in th meanwhile maan accidentally pushed the glass on the table ,and all the water from the glass was spilled on the sheets
Maan just went blank , he looked at those sheets, the way the rude geet had a smile on her face while writing something on these sheets, he knew that they were special to her and now she would kill him , he

didn't know what to do , he tried to wipe the water , but then realised his stupidity , he put his hand on his head , not knowing what next.

He colsed his eyes not knowing what to tell her , as they seemed very special to her
He called geet with a slight fear in his tone ... with a total blank mind , Geet came in very reluctantly , Maan innocently pointed towards the sheets , that became wet and maybe were spoilt ,but thankfully they were only few sheets that were spoilt , Geet saw at those sheets silently
"i'm so sry , i didn't do that intentionally ,sorry for spoiling you writings...
it's ok,,she interrupted him "it's ok"...she looked at him , there was no anger in her eyes ,she took those sheets in her hands and went outside and threw them in the nearby pond , and she saw those papers completely were being completely spoiled , all the papers , even those that were not even spoiled a bit ...
she saw them flowing in the water .
He kept looking at her he was yet again shocked with her behaviour , first he saw the pleasure in her eyes while writing them , so much peaceful eyes while writing it and now she herself threw them in the water , He kept looking at those papers in disbeleif
and then he went and stood behind her "why did you spoil even those papers that were clean "
she looked at those and said " There's no use of the other papers if half of them are ruined"
Maan was unknowingly feeling guilty , "i'm very sorry" he whispered
"it's not your mistake don't be sorry" She smiled at him , "they had to be spoiled and the were spoiled "
she looked into his eyes and smiled , he caught the pain in her eyes while smiling the very moment , but the pan in her eyes just lasted for 5 seconds and vanished in the air after that
she went away and

And He kept looking at the papers, that were flowing in the water ,all the words were being wiped from the paper...

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Part 4- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1770841/mg-ff-the-captured-life-thread-1?pn=19

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Edited by World-of-Dreams - 14 years ago

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ritzy09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

oh wow...i am sure Geet has immense oain in her heart and has probably lost hope...her words were so melanochic

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

a very interesting update...

seems like geet was writing her story...like through poem or letter or something...

no matter how much he denies...he is intrigued by her...

who is she?? y is she like this?? she was happy writing those...but they got destroyed n there was not a tinge of disappointment,..?? rather he saw pain...which she hid...

btw...when r we going to get geet's pov??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: ritzy09
oh wow...i am sure Geet has immense oain in her heart and has probably lost hope...her words were so melanochic

Thnx a lot for ur lovely comment dear😃

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
a very interesting update...

seems like geet was writing her story...like through poem or letter or something...

no matter how much he denies...he is intrigued by her...

who is she?? y is she like this?? she was happy writing those...but they got destroyed n there was not a tinge of disappointment,..?? rather he saw pain...which she hid...

btw...when r we going to get geet's pov??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thanx a lot for ur comment 😃...nd regarding geet's POV u'll get to know more abt geet only when maan gets to know abt her , Geet's life will be explored through Maan's eyes and his thoughts. as i said before ' Her Journey Through His Camera Lens' 😊

Edited by worldofdreams - 14 years ago