MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33 - Page 14

Originally posted by: peehu24

ausum n fab. Jaz lovd it..omg romance was like ahem ahem..smokin hawt..m just droolin over with wat u wrote. Thanks for pm. Gosh!

😲u loved my ahm ahm so much ...continue to love it then😃

Originally posted by: prernasinghking

dolma you are a sweet heart dear ❤️ ,you always pm me thanks for that .the os is lovely .the way abhay heels piya omg 😳i wish this heeling is more longer ...😳🤬.i think etka mata should take advice from you.so that we fans can be happy .you are in my one of my favorite friend list .i am again telling you are a sweet heart .

😆u are too much..please not more

Originally posted by: dolma.rose

tanzie tumhe kya chahiye should i continue or end it...me in delimma😕

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

awsum dr... i loved it... n especially dat ahem ahem... it was wonderful yr... abhay n pia r 2 gud togather...

😆😆😆ahem ahem

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Ohh swtheart...that's completely your decision. if your majority readers wants to extend it so you should. it's na OS na so you can write at least 1 or 2 more parts 😳 I want to see Abhiya wedding... im dying to write a wedding sequence which is far to come in my own FF... so would love to read yours... and If i feel too impatient i will start a new OS after i finish my Maithli OS 😆 😆

Do write about the wedding atleast ok? 😊

😭ok..me and my awesomicious hands😆😆aaj kal kuch zyaada hii likh rahii hoon😊but ya i will write about wedding😃

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow
nice story
plz update soon

😊thanks a lot

Originally posted by: missglam

wow awesome . .I loved it. ..It was full of Abhiya..Super gud !
dat was fanatstic, fantabulous, wonderful, mindblowing...

It was like a wonderful dream turned out into reality...actually i loved every abhiya moment, u have written it so beautifully, dat i m totally out words!

Awww. . Abhay proposed pia! Wow
thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

😳really?thanks a lot

Originally posted by: sunflower52

I loved it can't wait for another chapter. I loved the ahem ahem part, I could not help but imagine it 😆.

😊😊...me too can't write another chappy now

Originally posted by: piya_abhay_love

nice update...

thanx for pm

😊thanks a lot