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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

read part 8 on ur blog...

i never knew the red inside part of bitter gourd is sweet...i will try it for sure

and why u had to stop there???

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

The comments that i am going to post...i have written them on my computer while reading and just copy pasting them now... since i havent read it after part 4... read all today...finally...so while reading comment for each part assume that i havent read the next part... because i actually dint when i wrote the comment for that part...ok dear,,,?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Part 5

Geet's picture is very nice.. almost undistinguishable that its edited from its first look.. but khushie's pic is not clear..

Ooh the party.. is actually the birthday of little angel..

Why khushie remains so darisehmi all the time..

Scared of spotlight..why..?

Maan planned a really beautiful surprise for Geet.. any normal girl would have loved it..but Geet to...

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Part 6

How cruel Geet is to ruin a gift like this..

Poor Maan selected that after so many efforts..

Emm.. Maan had heared some gossips about her..what..?

OMG.. Geet is emptying glass after glass..

Even bartender knew that they share some chemistry..I just can't understand..Why Geet is like this..

Coz she is stopping herself and fighting with her feelings for Maan..

What she did infront of Arnav

And oow.. Maan carried her infront of all..

Loved the end...😉

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Part 7

Nice part

Omg Khushi feels possessive for Geet like a lover would feel for his/her love..eeks..I don't like this..

SuhasiniDevi is so comfortable with Maaneet's togetherness

Both girls stunned to see Maaneet pics allover the outhouse walls..and hear that no one is allowed here except Geet

How old their lovestory is..and what happened that they aren't together anymore..

I like that even in full drunken state he dint cross limits and his friends thinking they are up to something..

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

Part 8

Yaar there is too much drama in this ff

Is Suhasini is married to Richard now, and Richard is living with them in Khurana Mansion? And Abigail is daughter of Richard and Suhasini Devi

Maaneet are childhood lovers..?

And believe me I never knew that Karela's seed aren't bitter.. I still suspect..is it so really..? or you are taking writers liberty..?

I think Geet had faced something after her father's death, when they settled in India.. btw they aren't in India.. where are they living Yet..? And when she returned.. she has a transformation in her s**ual behavior.

So Maan knew that she is a .. But doesn't want to accept it

OMG, what Maan's upto.. by undressing his dress..