You Transfix Me Quite - MG - IMP NOTE page 123 - Page 24

Ammaaazzing:D:D

congratulations.

A big congratulations Fozi, on yet another FF=D I know this is so so so latee. But after this I hope to stay up to date with your updates ;) and to make it up to youu, I'm going to comment on every chapter soo far<3

Chapter 1
Omg, what a amazing first chapter!=O Eeeks too good! Awwhh I feel soo sorry for poor Geet, haye she always has to go through so much. But yaaay, she escaped! Pheww ;) Can't wait to read on to see what happens, but yaaay I don't have to wait Loool=P But yeshh my betii is back with a band, I'm proud of you beti=D

Chapter 2
If chapter 1 was amaazing, then this was mindblowing, wonder what chapter 3 will be cause I'm running out of adjectives =P Yaay maan & geet meet=D but grr maan's a angry man :| pshtt, he never even thanked geet for saving him :O how rudeee :/ ahh he better say thanks in the next chapter! thankgod that lady told geet to come into the house=D

Chapter 3
AMAAAZINGGG=| Eeeks, so interesting to read=D Haha maan & geets short encounter=P and wahey geet took up the offer, yaay more meetings between maan and geet I hope :) amazing chapter fozii, you're such a good writer, it's unbelievable :| you're soo good at describing you knoow! hayee my true inspiration =P I wonder what Amelia is like hmmm.

Chapter 4
Oooh this chapter was awesomeee! Loved Amelias character :) awhh she's such a sweet child <3 Wonder why she goes all weird when Maan comes hmmm :| andd haha maan finds geet intriguing ;) hayee can't wait for more scenes of theem too =P can't wait to read next chapter=D


Amazing work Fozii, your the best FF writer heree! I just commented on 4 chapters today will do the rest tommorow I promise :) mwah i love youu loooads betii jeee x

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thanks for pm dear..