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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 13 years ago

#981

Anku amazing part . really loved it . It was like its happening infront of me.
every emotion they had gone through was so draining . Their love ,fear ,insecurities ,happiness all was perfectly described. i felt it with my heart .
last paragraph took my breath away ,when i read his sobs. He has faced too rough phase of his life ,he pretended to be strong,unaffected but inside this upheaval him.This turmoil was not easy ,it was as tough as it was for her . His sobs shaken me badly . i wanna him to tell her all he went through in these seven months.
thanks for pm.
love n luck.
ritu

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neelima

@araja1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#982

Amazing update. Loved it and thanks for the pm

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swati

@smileever

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#983

Really short of words how beautifully u ve written the whole part...the feelings the pain ridhima goes thru has been expressed so so well...the love concern the pain a partner feels without actually physically going thru it is extraordinary...amazing awsum update
Continue soon

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: ssh57
Wow Ankita,
so Riddhima has taken the first step after 7 months. you've described it sooo well. their each fear, their hope and the way they try to encourage one another superb. the best was Armaan putting his hand below her feet as she stepped down. Wonderful update.
Love, ssh57

Thanks so much Di for liking the part, since it was the most crucial one and you liking it made it all worth it 😊

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: Aanya.
You're a genius 😳 ILY <3

I reeeaalllyyy wanna comment on this part because its so amazing, but it'll have to be after finals, not now :$

xoxo

I love you 🤗 take your time

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: roshni_A
An updt from u??????// and what an experience it was...my eyes are still blur...its one of the most heart touching and soulful part that i ever read...u have described their emotions so beautifully that it just felt like happening before my eyes...my heart was going for them with each moment. . .i can't say how i feel with each part u write ..its really tough for me to articulate my feelings but after i read this part i felt calm and serene in heart...just like i have got something i craved for many days...

i am truly happy that u started to write this fic...
pls continue soon...

P.S. hope ur exams went well...wish that u get ur desired score...

This FF is my baby, I am not abandoning it for anything at all. I had just gotten busy. And I can't write if its not peaceful around, I can't pay attention then. But I shall surely try updating sooner. Glad you liked the part 😃

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett
I read but ill be able to comment only once I get my laptop back.. Sorry!

For now:

I don't think the chapter was rushed, I think it's about time that we saw this day. Its going exactly at the correct pace, and by pace I mean the story, not the rate at which you're writing it! 😳

I loved how you displayed their emotions in this update. It was emotionally draining, even for a reader like me, so I can only imagine what could happen if someone actually had to go through this. I hope this time, we see Armaan's emotions coming into the clear. Somehow I feel it's the perfect time for him to let out his feelings in front of R. Because up till now in the story, I think he hasn't had an outlet to do so. His insecurities at bringing R to US, making her leave her family, his guilt, his fears, his worries, how he felt in these past 7 months. I have this sketched out so perfectly in my mind, that I can't wait for it to happen in the actual story!

Loved the update Anku 🤗 Abhi ke liye issi se kaam chala le, please? Sorry, this is all I can manage through my phone!

A comment from you always makes me super happy 😃

I totally agree with you. If Riddhima has gone through her issues, so has Armaan, and I am working on his feelings for the next 2 parts. You'll see a lot happening in terms of that itself. Now I hope its able to meet your expectations.

I LOVE YOU🤗

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path
Ankita, am choked right now.. the overflowing emotions and feelings were too much to handle..You've expressed the whole thing so beautifully and articulately .. All so connected and coherent!

From start to end, it didn't loose its grip .. and got me hooked! My brain, right now, is like in no working mode - thanks to the horrible flu and head ache, but it was amazing how your writing still managed to get through it all and made me connect entirely to AR's feelings.

Only if words could express the beauty of this update!

Can't wait to read on ahead.. Please do continue as and when you can :D

xoxo

P.S: Sorry for the short comment.. this cold isn't letting my eyes remain dry

Glad you liked the update, means a lot to me 😊 and I hope your health is much better now 😊