Core of My Existence#2(AR Story]Part 25 Page 132

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ok second thread ? 😲 This is something I hadn't even thought of when I started writing this FF.

I hadn't expected it to go beyond a thread, not because I wanted to write a short one, because back then I never thought I would manage to please anyone with my writing.

But now after so many months and 17 parts, I can say I've found out that I can write, not too good, but not too bad either. But even more then that I LOVE writing. Its the best stress-buster and when the story is about my favourite characters Armaan and Riddhima, I couldn't have found anything better.

I need to thank ALL of you readers , because I have reached where I have because of you guys. 😃

I have a few people to thank today, because of whom I started to write and the others because of whom I continue to.

Its a long list, but I can't NOT mention all those who are so important to me.

I have to THANK and credit one person who has always been by my side to help me, correct me and suggest the perfect ideas and story for 'COME' and that person is my special friend Phatty.

I love you so much Phatty to be so encouraging and so helpful, I really wouldn't have managed it without you at all. 🤗

Thanks Siddhi, Kashu( you have been someone whose response I wait for everytime I post and its you whose made it so easy for me with all the ideas ) and because of whom I started writing. They encouraged me so much to do so or else I wouldn't have started too write at all. Kavi di whose suggestions advice and kind words are what I wait for.

Maitree my sweetheart, who has always been there, to comment,encourage and be so nice to me and my thoughts, one of my readers and someone whose writing I am a fan of. 🤗

Then Saru who has always been there, to help in every way she can. The title is credit to her. So many of you commented about about how it was the most apt title, so its all thanks to Sary.

She didn't even know my story when she suggested it to me, and it turned out perfect for my story.

I need to thank the new friends I have made here on this section when I began writing.

Shru , Aanya, Rachna and Simi who became my friend because of 'COME' and I am glad I got to know her.😳 You guys have always been so encouraging regarding the story. I CAN'T not have your comment on any part.

Special thanks to the two spammers of my thread,Shru and Aanya, who push a lazy bum like me to write 😆.

It feels really nice to be a part of a section that has such brilliant writers. I just hope my story keeps entertaining you guys.

This story is really close to my heart and I haven't still thought how I plan to take it ahead. I just know its got my favourite characters AR, and I shall plan to give them a story they always deserved, from my point of view.

Phew Sorry for this long lecture, but I am like that 😆 I can't stop once I start.

LINK to thread 1 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1652398/core-of-my-existence-ar-story-nextthreadlink150

To all those who need PM's please do add me to your buddy list. And those who haven't yet got pms after doing so PLEASE LET ME KNOW.

Edited by Ankita.M - 13 years ago

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@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

Boo you Shru! You can't beat me 🤣 😎

I'll edit this later, have to go right now! But yay today was fun! And thank you for that mention over there! I'm so glad I met you and came across COME 😳

xoxo

Aanya

*EDITED*

ANKITAAA 🤗

Weee COME is now on it's second thread, rejoicee!!! 😆 Congratulations <3 Achha wala likhti hoon, wait a sec :D

CONGRATULATIONS!!! 🥳

I'm so so so happy for you <3 <3 I bet when you told me to spam your FF you didn't think we'd make it to COME #2 the same day. You underestimate the powers of a spammer

And now Shru will glare at me if I don't give her credit so - Thank You, Shru, because you helped a lot too :D <3

Haan, so I'll start my comment from the very beginning 😆

The banner. OMG I love it! I love love love love love the white effect and you haven't lightened it too much and the texture, the soft gauzy glow thingy, I'm so fida over it! Sachii! Did you make it?? :O You are fantastically talented then! It's asdflkj GORGEOUS :|

And don't put that little shocked face after second thread! Hona hi tha! Have you seen the way you write? Like, SERIOUSLY? It's fabulous <3 <3

COME is one of my favorite FFs. No jokes. And I'm not just flattering you, it is one of my favorites! <3 You've brought Armaan-Riddhima back for us! You've given the AR story we all wanted to see but never got to! We wanted to see THIS. Armaan supporting Riddhima, their fights, their nok-jhoks, their lives after the horrific shootout, everything. We didn't want to see what they showed us in season 2 in DMG! To anyone else reading this - This is my personal opinion, I'm not trying to start an AR vs SR war or anything 😆

Which is why your FF is loved by so many AR-ians! Seriously man, your updates ALWAYS remind me of DMG! You've managed to show the essence of AR! Everything, from Armaan's personality, to Riddhima's insecurities, to the family problems in Riddhima's family, EVERYTHING is written so so so beautifully that one can't help but get hooked to the story, really :)

And your writing style! It's improved lots since the first update and now I'm jealous of it :$ 😆

The way you word each emotion, every feeling, every action, is so magical <3 It's written so well, that no matter how long the update is, it's always over too soon, and I'm forced to say - Itna chhota part? 🤣

And the characters. I bow down to you, man! The way you've retained the characters of DMG yet, made your own story out of them is genius! You've brought back the Armaan we all love. The naughty, annoying, sweet, romantic, sensitive doctor that we all fell in love with along with Riddhima! I love COME waala Armaan! The way he cares for his basket, the way she's his first, or rather ONLY priority, the way he never, ever compromises on taking care of her, no matter how they fight, EVERYTHING, made me fall in love with Armaan Malik all over again <3 <3 <3

And Riddhima too! I'm stoked by the way you've portrayed her! Yes we all might hate on her sometimes, but then that's only because we all love Dr. Armaan Malik too much for our own good 😆 I love how you've brought out the shift in Riddhima's personality. Her insecurities, her helplessness, her constant fear of being left alone, all of it, all of it was shown beautifully <3 And even though she got annoying sometimes, the way she hurt Armaan, but in the end, we love Riddhima too. I love how you changed her from the insecure, diffident person to a person who is now hopeful and strong :)

I think the USP of your FF is the way you handle issues, though. AR may be fighting, but the reason is always logical. We as readers are never left unsatisfied, really :) All the problems are handled perfectly. They're logical, they don't last too long nor do they get over too fast, it's so perfect, real and NORMAL <3 You're a very sensible and mature writer, I wish I was more like you 😆 The way you write is so fabulous! Each emotion is dealt with, SO well! All your updates churn up all kinds of emotions in me, not to mention make me miss DMG :D The way Armaan said, "I want my Basket back."...it's all so magical! The love that you describe, the hardships that they face and overcome, everything makes me fall 28349347 times more in love with this amazing, amazing, amazing FF of yours <3 Truly one of the best FFs on DMG I've ever read :) Really, I can't stop gushing about your writing! You go so much into detail and all your emotions, issues, etc are described with so much depth that we're all left wanting for more :) <3 <3

And...yes yes, I'm almost done, gimme a moment 😆

So, thank you for giving us all the story we deserved to see with AR and an even bigger thank you for writing and handling the subject so well! I don't think anyone could ever make it this AMAZING without making it filmy or something 😆 🤗

There. I'm done now! *Phew*

That is one of my longest comments, EVER :D I swear it is! It's just the font that's making it look short 🤣

So continue soon and keep writing <3 I'll edit my other comment at night, my resources are spent 😆

🤗

xoxo

Aanya

Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 13 years ago

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Okay, I see Aanya's first, but technically I was, because I did post my 'r' first, but the stupid IF system thought I was SPAMMING, and didn't let me POST! Screw you IF! So Aanya, technically I was first okay. Hmph. 🤢

Congratulations

I don't know what to say, which I haven't already said before.. But there's a reason why I absolutely adore 'Core Of My Existence' and that is, it retains AR's characters, as they were both so brutally butchered in DMG-2! And second, it continues the story from a place where we all hate - and of course, it continues the story the way it should have been!

Honestly, it should have been this which should have been DMG's story-line.. What they got out of showing what they did except for crappy new characters, loss of viewers and dropping TRPs, and eventually the wrap-up, is out of my league!

But, like I was saying, your story makes me forget all of it.. No kidding!

So, for your, no actually my, extra-special Congratulatory note, I'm going to list down a few things which have me ADDICTED to your story.

I ain't going to call it a Fan Fiction, because its nothing like DMG-2 ever was! It just has Armaan-Riddhima as two characters, so I'm going to term it as a 'spin-off'.. And a very good one at that! Its not easy to manage one, but you've handled it like a pro! And you say you've never written before? Well, you've handled this story so effortlessly, its hardly believable!

Second, I'll come to the characters, mainly AR and Muskaan, and of course our very favorite Sasur-Shanky.

Armaan - He makes my heart go 'Mmm..!'

He's just... perfect. No words are enough to describe him.. He's basically that ideal guy, that perfect Prince Charming everyone wishes for.. But in COME especially, he's stolen my heart for real.. How, I mean, how in the world can anyone love anyone so much, as much as he loves Riddhima? Sometimes I feel its impossible for such love to exist, so if I never find a guy Ankita, its absolutely your fault.. Armaan in this story has completely raised the bar, and now I'll look for Armaan-traits in every guy I come across. Thank you very much for that.

Riddhima - For a change, I don't hate her in this story.. I've always hated her.. In stories which are adaptations of DMG I mean.. But in your story, I've actually come close to like her! Weird!

Anyway, she's as expected, scared, low in confidence, low in belief, low in everything basically, so I understand her plight.. Its natural to feel this way after everything she's going through!

But yea, I like her in this story, and for that, its you who's responsible, because you made it possible!

Shashank - I hate this guy! Which father gives up on his daughter this way?! And then he actually questions why Riddhima loves Armaan more than him? What a wimp!

He's an ass.

Muskaan - A true friend, the best companion anyone can find! She's exactly like she was in DMG! Bubbly, full of life, jovial.. And I'm glad she's staying with AR, and now since Riddhima's left, with Armaan.. At least he won't be alone anymore! And also, I've noticed, AR's moods have improved way much since Muski's arrival! And I love her for that! She's added zing to their lives, and moreover, she's added zing to your story too!

I really feel for her though, and I hope Rahul comes around soon. The dimwit.

From Riddhima's insecurities, to her call to Shashank, to their wedding, everything has touched my heart in this story.. Every update gets me close to tears - happy or sad, and that speaks for itself..

I adore this story, not because of AR either, but because of the way you've played with their minds and fears! Its so realistic, everyone I'm sure can relate to it.. And plus, you've explained every feeling, every emotion, every thought so nicely and in such intrinsic detail, it just makes your story so real, I feel like I'm actually sitting there with them, and also I can empathize with them.. How you did this Ankita, its out of my thought-process!

So this was my way of telling you just what you've given us by writing COME, and of course, you've given us AR, and now, I don't even miss DMG anymore.. I just read your updates, and I feel like I'm watching it, so no complaints there!

I <3 COME

I <3 AR

I <3 you for writing this

Thank you for giving us 'Core Of My Existence'!

Hugs,

Shrutika x

Edited by Castle-Beckett - 13 years ago

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AVKKG

@AVKKG

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Congrats Anku!! 🤗
Your 2nd Thread!!!
And just so richly deserved.
YOUR FF IS ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING ONES and I hope you have many many more threads to this story!!!

LOVE YOU!!

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simran gupta

@AR_FAN

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

hey darl

congrats for the new thread

i have ur ff entirely today

its 2 2 gud
plz add me in ur pm list

Armaan character is something that i always want to be like in dmg it is like that only but cv were nt able to describe it like you had describe it

i can totally imagine Armaan taking care of Riddhima n also bearing all the accusations on him by mr. shanky

i always want to read n always imagine what wud b the story after the accident scene bt as usual cv se tou kuch nahi hota sivaye pakane ke alava but you have surely make my wish true

thank uuu...😛

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett
Res

Okay, I see Aanya's first, but technically I was, because I did post my 'r' first, but the stupid IF system thought I was SPAMMING, and didn't let me POST! Screw you IF! So Aanya, technically I was first okay. Hmph. 🤢

Sorry Shru, what can I do? IF loves me 🤣

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cuteshilpa

@cuteshilpa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

hey congratx on new thread bs ab cont sooon

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caprigurl

@caprigurl

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

This is Awesome ! Now you are in the league of writers who have Sequel Threads :D

Great going, unique story, wonderful treatment of the subject! COME is always a treat to read.
Congos Anku🥳

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#10

Congratulations Ankita...!! :D :D
Today is surely a day where everyone's getting to open new threads...
First Shrutika..
Then Sushmita
And now you!
Congratulations!!
You deserve it! :D
Love
Rhea

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