Core of My Existence#2(AR Story]Part 25 Page 132 - Page 69

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

Aanya.. HOW MUCH DO YOU STUDY! ? :|

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

I have a major 6 hour exam [in my IIT prep classes] coming up in the first week of December :|

And then block tests in school in Jan-ish :P

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

OH GOD :| that is so much :\ but I hope you do well <3 and I HOPE you get free jaldiii

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

RES - please remind me..!! :S

Edited

Ok..I'm finally getting down to comment on your ff after oh...decades..it seems like..!! I love how in the previous parts..you've managed to build their relationship to such a level, that now..they can tell so easily if one is happy or not..or whether or not one is hiding something from the other..!! And it's really amazing you brought Muskaan between them.. it's like they are her only family now..she only relies on them..trusts them..and cares for only them in the whole world..!! As though after the gruelling experience she went through of being alone..they are the only ones who have held through..and kept themselves strong enough..sort of like people to look up to..😊..and I believe that once you have that..then you are always on the road to recovery from whatever you've been through..!! 😃

So what did I really really love in this chapter..?? I think passing Riddhima's concern.. it's Muskaan's concern for Armaan..😳 That friendship that both of them have..a bond that is so strong..which I think Muskaan developed because was so broken with the other relation that broke..that she trusted..and so as a result..hanging on to her friendship with others as a solace..and deepening it by like tonnes..!! If Riddhima never existed..I wouldn't have minded Armaan and Muskaan getting together..😆 I hope you get what I mean..coz I feel like I'm just jabbering on non-stop without understanding a word..!! 😕

And as for Rahul...well..despite all he did..he really is one brave person..(obviously the act of leaving Muskaan in the first place wasn't proof of his bravery..actually vice versa!! but heyy..who doesn't have their weak moments? Especially when it comes to someone we love??) I mean..by coming back..admitting he was wrong..and trying his best to make things better..!! You do have to salute him for that..!! He's also the one to take charge..and understand Armaan because Muskaan is just so relieved (and probably furious) that she's unaware of how to act..what to say..so by him taking charge of the situation..and people letting him do that..also shows how gradually he's being allowed to come back into their lives.. Plus despite hearing harsh words and cutting remarks from Muski..he deserves no less..he's still that support for her..when Armaan's whereabouts are unknown..and when she agrees to that support..but thanks him for it at the end..shows she was grateful for having him around..however..still will find it hard to get over what he did..so hats off to you for portraying these difficult inner emotional turbulence between these two perfectly!! 😃👏

And well..bless Armaan..regardless of his health..trying to patch up between his two friends..but it's sort of expected from him..and between the two couples..AR and RM..I think RM stole the highlight of the chapter..because AR were very predictable..not that they shouldn't be..they were the usual sweet..loving..nhok-jhok couple..and it's a pleasure to read about them in every chapter..(obviously I'll be VERY angry if you cut them out of any chapter..!! It's Armaan mann..!!)however..RM were the extra new surprise package that added the spice..the extra emotions and drama that was needed to keep a reader glued..!! So once again...AWESOME work..!! 👏😃

And I think with that..ends my huge lecture sort of, analysis filled comment that you've probably gotten bored while reading..!! But hey..you can't expect me to write a one or two liner comment for such a brilliant piece of work..!! 😃 Now please please please do continue soon..!! 😊

Love,

Sanaa

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Yep 😳

Haha I don't think I'm going to be free till I graduate 🤣 That's why my updates are so damn slow...time hi nahi hai! 🤔

Speaking of updates...WHERE IS YOURS? 🤣

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Sanaaa 🤗

I love you so much for being so clear with the comments, that it gets easier for me to understand my work better <3

I agree with your analysis about Rahul and Muskaan. Even though Rahul has wronged Muskaan , he is strong enough to come back to her and correct his mistakes. But the pain he has given her for so long, along with the all that she has gone through, is too much to get him forgiveness right away. He needs to change himself and cover up for all he cost her before she forgives and accepts him.

Armaan and Riddhima have always been a pillar for Muskaan and especially Armaan, (read: DMG ) So obviously Muskaan shares a strong bond with him. They both are companions to reach other for every problem they go through and shall continue to be.

Yeah with AR I don't have a suspense to create, because now things can only get better from here, but I am sure the next few updates will be more intense :) so I hope you enjoy it :)

And ILY for writing such a detailed comment :)

Mhari Safed Shaitaan. Kaisi hai thaari zindagi??

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Thanks so much Sami for liking it and commenting :) ily <3 Shall try updating soon

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

Mhari Safed Shaitaan. Kaisi hai thaari zindagi??

^^That is "My White Devil!!😆 How's your life??" in Haryanvi. Or Rajasthani. Or my own Dadisa inspired language!!🤔😎🤣

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Yeah..Rahul has adifficult task ahead of him..Good luck with that..!!😆

Bold - And that's exactly why I love your fanfiction..!! It's completley like DMG..first season..the second was just bogus..!! even worse..sorry I'm still not over how they butchered DMG and Riddhima's charcter..!!

And yep..next few updates I'm sure will be trying for both AR and RM!! Which means update soon coz i want them to get over and done with everything so that Armaan can finally rub it in Shanky's face that it was his love that made Riddhima better while all Shanky did was sit and sulk..!!..though being Armaan he won't but the feel that he can if he wanted to is AWESOME.. 😃

Now hurry..!! 😆