Core of My Existence#2(AR Story]Part 25 Page 132 - Page 62

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Ok..I'm finally getting down to comment on your ff after oh...decades..it seems like..!! I love how in the previous parts..you've managed to build their relationship to such a level, that now..they can tell so easily if one is happy or not..or whether or not one is hiding something from the other..!! And it's really amazing you brought Muskaan between them.. it's like they are her only family now..she only relies on them..trusts them..and cares for only them in the whole world..!! As though after the gruelling experience she went through of being alone..they are the only ones who have held through..and kept themselves strong enough..sort of like people to look up to..😊..and I believe that once you have that..then you are always on the road to recovery from whatever you've been through..!! 😃

So what did I really really love in this chapter..?? I think passing Riddhima's concern.. it's Muskaan's concern for Armaan..😳 That friendship that both of them have..a bond that is so strong..which I think Muskaan developed because was so broken with the other relation that broke..that she trusted..and so as a result..hanging on to her friendship with others as a solace..and deepening it by like tonnes..!! If Riddhima never existed..I wouldn't have minded Armaan and Muskaan getting together..😆 I hope you get what I mean..coz I feel like I'm just jabbering on non-stop without understanding a word..!! 😕

And as for Rahul...well..despite all he did..he really is one brave person..(obviously the act of leaving Muskaan in the first place wasn't proof of his bravery..actually vice versa!! but heyy..who doesn't have their weak moments? Especially when it comes to someone we love??) I mean..by coming back..admitting he was wrong..and trying his best to make things better..!! You do have to salute him for that..!! He's also the one to take charge..and understand Armaan because Muskaan is just so relieved (and probably furious) that she's unaware of how to act..what to say..so by him taking charge of the situation..and people letting him do that..also shows how gradually he's being allowed to come back into their lives.. Plus despite hearing harsh words and cutting remarks from Muski..he deserves no less..he's still that support for her..when Armaan's whereabouts are unknown..and when she agrees to that support..but thanks him for it at the end..shows she was grateful for having him around..however..still will find it hard to get over what he did..so hats off to you for portraying these difficult inner emotional turbulence between these two perfectly!! 😃👏

And well..bless Armaan..regardless of his health..trying to patch up between his two friends..but it's sort of expected from him..and between the two couples..AR and RM..I think RM stole the highlight of the chapter..because AR were very predictable..not that they shouldn't be..they were the usual sweet..loving..nhok-jhok couple..and it's a pleasure to read about them in every chapter..(obviously I'll be VERY angry if you cut them out of any chapter..!! It's Armaan mann..!!)however..RM were the extra new surprise package that added the spice..the extra emotions and drama that was needed to keep a reader glued..!! So once again...AWESOME work..!! 👏😃

And I think with that..ends my huge lecture sort of, analysis filled comment that you've probably gotten bored while reading..!! But hey..you can't expect me to write a one or two liner comment for such a brilliant piece of work..!! 😃 Now please please please do continue soon..!! 😊

Love,

Sanaa

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Edit:

Ankita ji this was beyond what I had expected

You know what, I was very skeptical if the love and the equation is going to remain the same, have the same intensity and whether they could feel each others emotions in the same manner after being separated in time and space- I mean she is doing her best to get better medically and it takes up a lot from her. He is trying hard to manage finances, patch up his two friends and live alone without making Riddhima feel the pinch he feels. And upar se the accident :O That little tension between them :|

But it all resolved wonderfully-thanks to how you have penned down their conversations in such a real and touching manner. Aww man i was literally in tears when Riddhims stopped eating and was crying cos of not hearing from Armaan( thank Lord he is fine :O ) and when she gave that little talk to Armaan it was heart touching man <3 And Armaan too felt the amount of love behind her words of scolding and the rest.

Its truly said that love makes the world go round :)

Amazing update and the precap :O Ahh she is in pain :'( but Armaan is here? Like really ? nice !