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ssh57

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

superb update Ankita. the length made up for the delay. the first half had me literally sobbing. kudos for the wonderful use of words to bring forth that feeling. keep up the good work!

love,

Shardha

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neelima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

awesome part. Waiting for the next part

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anumeha khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

RESERVE...

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ok sorry for the late comment...got busy..

simply amazing n awsum part...

loved it...

i was sooo scared for armi...but thnx god he is fine...but yes hurt..

n ridz...gosh...she is feeling sooo terrible...

n having the inkling feeling that armi is trying to hide something from her...

cant see them in pain yaar...feeling soo bad for them...

she is feeling pain...means on the ground to be fie soon..

waiitng for it eagerly...

n the precap is awsum,...

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

Edited by anumeha_rajat - 13 years ago

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meina

@maryamdiggi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

am just inlove with ur ff ,and this last update was nerve raking I mean armaan's accident .
And now ridhima new the therapy will intensify by the day I hope she pull through.

Edited by maryamdiggi - 13 years ago

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khushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

sooo touchy part!!!!!

Core of Existence is MAGIC...

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#636

Ankuuu 😭

You made me cry with your update... i was crying throughout ..😭

I was overwhelmed by ridz words just like armaan was...i am overwhelemd by their love...😭

Ridz was so right when she said ,even he is a human and he has to think about him being happy too and not always try make other's happy,solve their problems or making an effort to make others trust him ,love him and accept him...he has got humiliated beyond the limits already, not any more.. he needs his deserved break. 😊

I don't know why but this rahul is irritating me big time.. i just want him out of muski's life but thats not my main concern...😡

Loved the Armaan - Muski scene like always..😃

@Ridz i just love her character in this fic (others being Twos & Atssi)...😃

@PRECAP- i am eagerly waiting for the latter portion of it.. hope riddhima is doing good..😊

Love,

Vaish 😃

Edited by vaishiksg - 13 years ago

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z.e.p.h.y.r

@z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

Hey Ankita.. I'm so sorry I've been so irregular here.. I just caught up with your story.. and wow! The way you have written about Armaan and Riddhima's separation is so realistic and practical. but at the same time i can feel the pain that both of them are facing.. Also, it was very clever to put in Armaan's hard work to make meets end and improve their financial condition. It really tugged at my heart :(

And even through the tough times, its amazing to see how they make each other feel better and always think about the other before themselves. I loved the part where Riddhima confronted him about how he always thinks about her first and never about himself. The depth of their love is evident from that conversation. Never selfish, never demanding, always understanding.. that is why she didn't even force him to tell her where he was all night. It takes true love to trust someone so blindly!

And poor Armaan bears it all without letting her know his problems coz he doesn't want to trouble her with it. I feel sad! :(

But I hope things improve for them soon.. And I'm sure they will.. Good times always follow the hard ones.. and vice versa!

Also.. special mention to Muskaan. She's been such a wonderful friend to Armaan and Riddhima.. She cares for them like her own. Love the bond she shares with Armaan.. And Rahul needs to seriously redeem himself. He better do something to earn Muskaan's trust back.. I'm sure he's realizing his mistake. That's one of the reasons he decided to come see them I'm sure.. But something really big will be needed on his part to win over Muskaan this time.. I'm sure she's gonna give him a hard time! But I think somehow Armaan and Riddhima will end up playing cupid! :)

I can't wait for the next update! I wonder what happened to Riddhima? I hope it's just a stumble, not a big fall!

And.. I'm sure you know this.. But just a subtle reminder from my side.. You're a wonderful writer.. and your story is one of my favorites on the forum! :)

Love

Rachna!

Edited by ...zephyr___ - 13 years ago