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Posted: 13 years ago

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Anku i want a reply to my last 2 comments! :P

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Imma not talk to you. :/

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You don't even care??😲

*Kiddish voice* Chaari value gida di medi. :/

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Now I'll go and read! :P

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I have no idea how this comment is gonna turn out because I seriously don't know what crap I'm writing.🤔 Just because you threatened me. Evil.😳

Okay so firstly I, personally, find it funny how Armaan is stuck between the two on-tiff people. I mean that poor guy already has a ton of troubles and uske upar these two have their problems. And now you put him into an acci-leave that. I'll talk(Read: shout) about it later.

I do hope though, that those two resolve their fight ASAP. I mean seeing a bickering duo is alright but Muskaan being quiet and sober and Rahul hurting inside isn't really fun. I love how you describe their feelings from Armaan's point of view. We know what's going on in Muskaan's mind but from Armaan's view. I wish to know it directly from her though. IDK I think that'll make it better I guess?

And my bacha is working at a clinic, a gas station and the couple?? How much more can you torture him Anki??

But then again, Armaan is the perfect guy isn't he? He has this need to be the one who solves the entire world's problems and himself land into trouble!! It's time he takes care of himself, especially that Riddhima's not there, though Muskaan's trying her best!! Oh and for that, I <3 the Muskaan of Come.

Riddhima, on the other hand, is doing a far better job. It's perfect how you described her trying to gauge and then get rid of the child's fears. I mean that shows how the treatment is really affecting her in better way, because kal tak she wasn't even in a mood to think she could get better and Armaan had to pester her and now she is being the Armaan for someone else.

On a side note: I <3 the end part when she says Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Mallik. Never got to hear that on- screen but at least this makes up for that.

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Rahul has to pay big time to make up to Muskaan. When she starts listening to him. LMAO😆

And when are you planning to make Rahul the bubble-head realize that his thinking is as smart as the thinking that the earth is flat and Dr. Shashank is intelligent and has a heart.

Armaan and Riddhima's conversation was so cute. It's so awesome that you have kept the entire Armaan-Riddhima-ness to it. The way they banter and fight is so like them. The way Riddhima is all eating bhaav reminded me of the times she made Armaan do push-ups for forgiveness and the entire jealousy thing of the time Rahul had just entered Sanjeevani. I don't know but whenever I read COME, I'm left comparing it to the old times on DMG, probably because you've kept the part of DMG and its characters alive, instead of killing them like the CV's did. I <3 you for that!!

I would love to see the reaction of Armaan when he knows how Steven really is! 😆

And Anjali rightly earned all the curses and venom in Armaan's heart. Just protecting her dad would never be an excuse to let go off the people who trust that you would stand by them. And Armaan should have said some more harsh words to her. I mean, Riddhima would never say anything to her just because she happens to be her baddi behen. But I <3 how Armaan told her off and then reminded her of all the times Riddhima had stood up for her. Especially when he said, "For your kind information, and to help you revive your memory, your sister is apparently married to me, I am her legally wedded husband, and everything that concerns her, concerns me."

Coming to the most arrgghhh part of update, WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO MY ARMAAN?😲 I swear Anki, tune Armaan ko itna toh waise hi torture kara tune, do jobs, Rahul aur Muskaan, who jailor Shanky, Riddhima bhi nahi hai paas mein, and then "crash and bang" Accident.😡

If ANYTHING happens to him, Mumbai is gonna see the arrival of Neha to haunt you down, I promise!!

Bisous,

Neha

^^The comment is really bad but pleejj phorgive me!

ILYYY so so much 😆 like dude you're just one of those few people who make me see my own story more clearly. And I'll tell you a little secret okay :| Like when you didn't comment here, those times I'd see your comments elsewhere and seeing the kind of depth your comments had I always hoped you'd comment here one day. And I so glad you do 😳

I am so glad everyone feels that its enough now, and that Armaan's been tortured too much now. And that is what the track exactly is.Because there's always been an Armaan to take care of Riddhima, but even though Riddhima's been with Armaan. He has always been too sacrificing which has resulted people in walking over him. The update that's coming up is based on just that. When its like everyone and everything is telling him to take a break and think for himself before the others. I wanted to get to this point, which is why I had to trouble him before 😆 Like he helps all his friends and they all never respect or acknowledge it enough (READ: DMG ) so I had to show this when I make him care for himself and them respect him more.

Yeah I know about Muskaan's pov , but I've already made her say her heart out to Armaan. And as far as her heart out with Rahul goes, that can't be a small talk, it has to be huge, considering the amount of trouble he has given her (READ: what happened in DMG ) so the tracks building up and you'll see glimpses of it in every update :D .

And Shashank's track isn't in the picture for now. COME for now is going to be about Riddhima and Armaan overpowering their troubles, Riddhima curing and them getting back all the happiness they can in their life with all their efforts.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: zARqaa_X
Sorry for the late comment, i have been stacked with coursework and revision for exams! Bleuggh! :/

Anyhoo, this part was just brilliant!

I feel so sorry for Rahul and Muskaan! They are both in so much pain right now, i wish everything will be okay between them! I think that Rahul totally deserved that cold behaviour from Muskan, after all he did he cant really expect her to forgive him so easily and i dont think she still shouldnt yet until he realises exactly what is right for both of them! But i loved how that even though Muskaan is hating him at the moment, she still loves him enough to concern for him and his health! That part was so sweet <3

I love Armaan and Muskaans friendship! He understands her pain perfectly and is doing what he thinks is right to help both of them! Hes not picking sides, hes just neautral in his own way yet none of them are hating him for it, thats the best part :D He knows how to win everyones heart! Aww! <3I love how Riddhima is feeling more comfortable now in the hospital, thats good, she is learning how to be more independent! Both AR are! They are far apart yet so close to each other ni their hearts! Soo cute! I loved how Riddhima helped that young boy, her confidence in herself in not just helping her but others too! She just saved a life, without actually doing anything but just talking to him, speaking the truth.

Awww i loved AR's cute chat on the phone! Soo sweet! The connection between them is just so extraordinary, they can tell when something is wrong with the other and when they are not tellnig the truth! LOL i loved the teasing session :P

Okay, Anjali just totally pissed me off now! :@ I cant believe she said all that! I thought she rang to apologise and fix things, not accuse and ruin things even more! Im so glad Armaan said all that to her, she needs to realise her mistake in clear detail, she needs to realise what her behaviour has done to her relationship with Riddhima throughout their life! Serves her right!

Im so glad Armaan didnt think too much about wehat Anjali said and tohught of his Baskets happiness first and his before anyone elses, thats all that matters :D

OMG :O What did you do to my Armaan?! :'( He better be okay! That last bit just shocked me now! I need to know if hes okay!

Update Super soon x

Thanks so much for this beautiful comment 😃

Rahuls bought it on himself. He was the one who was confused and ended up taking wrong decisions. He does realize what that has done to Muskaan. But even now he thinks he isn't fit enough to take care of her, because he hasn't been able to till now. But he is being a jerk and only his Muskaan's going to be able to get him out of this :D which you have to see :|

As far as Armaan goes.. my intention to show what I have till now is that he has had enough. From a long time he has been suffering too much , always been giving and sacrificing but now its enough. And his nature always costs him a lot. Which is why this track, and the next update signifies this.

Anjali may feel bad for what she has done, but she has a bitter tongue and even though she never means harm, her acidic tongue does all the harm for her.