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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Read the part I'll comment later rofl

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

*EDITED*

Shit I'm so late, it's criminal :P Sorry anku, padhai is eating my time away

Anyway, coming to the update, it was so so so fabulous!! <3 <3 :D

Oh my God, Anku aise kaise likhti ho? The love that you show between AR is so stunning! The way they're both at peace with each other, they're truly two puzzle pieces that fit perfectly together <3 😳

Aww their chhotu sa, tiny sa make out session was LOVEE <3 It's so beautiful the way you portrayed their intimacy! And it's adorable how cute they are because they both want to have sex but can't because of Riddhima's condition. Which reminds me, will you write a sex-scene after she comes back, cured?? I wanna see how you write that 🤣

And then their little talk about whether Riddhima's actually up to it was SO freaking perfect :| I love the understanding between them *Sigh* <3 <3 And then she fell asleep with her head on his shoulder. AWWW :D Kitne cute hai you dono 😆

And their aloo paratha moment...Haayyee <3 <3 I don't even have words when you write like this! Not fair man! >_< 😆

And everything is so DMG-ish it makes my dil khush :D :D Why, oh WHY weren't you a part of the CVs?? Then we wouldn't have had to see the sucky Season 2!! 🤣

I also love Riddhima in this FF! She's so much like the DMG waali Riddhima but so different at the same time! She's the Riddhima that we lost in S2! The spunky yet vulnerable Riddhima :)

The bit with Ryan was uber cute <3 <3 I love how you added that chhotu sa story about Ryan's life <3 :)

Weee that letters waala part was friggin' amazing!! THEY ARE SO ADORABLE 😳

I seriously LOVE Muski! She's awesome! I love how she makes everyone smile eventhough she's sad :) And Rahul is such an idiot! Ek toh kameena chhod ke jaata hai aur phir I miss you waala text? Kutta :P

RM are my favorite couple after AR so I'm looking forward to see them make up :) <3

*Pouts* It breaks my heart seeing them so sad :| Muskaan is so cute! Chak de Phatte 😆

Their breakdown was *at a loss for words* :|

I love Armaan man! And I hate you for making him so perfect because he's raised my standards for men to infinitely high levels -__-

All in all, a GORGEOUS update <3 <3

And that was my last long comment :( Ab se chhotu comments :|

Update soon Anku 🤗

ILY :*

xoxo

Aanya

Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

I posted thinking all of u were in a hurry to read 😒

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annihilation

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

BEAUTIFUL Installement Anku!🤗

Enjoyed reading the part so much, after so much tension bhare moments, it was nice to read a light hearted, halka phulka, sweet, innocent, adorable, dill khush kar dene wala part.

^^ I hope all that made sense 🤔😆

I didnt find Riddhima's behaviour contrast to the previous part, atleast not till now.May be that will come a bit later na?But yes, cute part with loads of "Aww" moments :) My favourite moment will be "Aloo Ka Parathaa" 😳 (Stop making us feel hungry okay 😆)

Looking forward to the next PART, not INSTALLEMENT.Okay ji

Edited by herms_angel - 14 years ago