Core of My Existence#2(AR Story]Part 25 Page 132 - Page 51

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hats off 👏 ...wat a writing girl...that makes us wait to read more nd more of ur ff...awsum...too too too gud
Thx for the pm
Hv a lovely vacation nd wish u a happy nd safe diwali 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear
lovly update
loved riddhima and that kid convo
and arman and riddhima convo on phone too
but my most fav part was when riddhima try to talk to the kid
gr8 update
precap was a surprise
well gr8 part
continuee soon
thankx for pm
maria
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part..
thnx 4 da PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved... Going to read it... Since am soo excited.. Am off... *Runs*😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey love the part
plx armaan ka accident mat karwao plxxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishiksg

Ankuuu i will kill you.. tune mere armaan ka accident karwa dia... 😲 already dmg mai itne sare accidents karwa diye the bechare k..😭


@anjali.. argh ask her to get lost.. she and her dad both of them are same.. insensitive jerks😡

@Rahul and muskaan.. .. i really fell bad for them.. but then rahul is a certified Jerk😡

@armaan awww my baby i love him like any thing... 😳 poor baby is working so hard.. he is a real charmer 😳mujhe lag raha tha..ki he is going to get into an accident..😭 and BAMM .. u actually did that😡😭

@riddhima.. she is a sweetheart in this fic just like in TWOS n ATSSI ❤️
Loved her interaction with the 14yr old boy😊

@armaan & muski loved their parts too.. i love how both of them take care of each other.. and muski said it right.. they are her actual family...

Waiting for the next part eagerly...😃. and all curses to anjali shanky panky gupta😡

Love,
Vaishnavi😃


What mera Armaan ROFL, he is my Armaan too na :\ anyways, don't worry it hurts me to hurt Armaan too 😉 it isn't going to be too dramatic :\ just a twist.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

wow amazing part! steven bit was cute! nd poor rahul/muski!

yikes anji armaan fight!

oh noo what happened to armaan?
will this force ridz to stand and run?

cont soon!


Of course not 😆 my ff isn't like that. I believe in writing things which are possible in reality. Anything takes its own time to recover, and I will show only what is logical.

Don't worry about Armaan, he'll be fine 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: caprigurl

Res

( aj last exam, pakka comment after that but OMGGG is that an accident? :O )

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Oh damn first things first? he got hit? He got hit?*hypeventilates* Nooo please na Anki, not this, at least not a day before Diwali, i dont want to be morose over this suspense :| Just being honest.

But Wow the friction between Rahul Muskaan- you can feel it, judge both of them and their reasons for being so awkward and tense, though I am so confused what Rahul wants to do- Help her HOW? by reminding her about him and her love through his actions which spell LOVE? :| Lets see how you take it further but it was so damn endearing to see her worried about his food and all after a tiring day :)

Armaan Riddhima- They are connected on a different level than usual arent they? Jo bhi karein, Armaan's job hunt, his night work, his tensions- all of it is such a pain :P BUT Riddhima is still on top of his mind , and the driving force behind him taking such a toll on himself. Pure selfless love here, and practical too man, How else would he pay the bills and all ? :/
But please dont make him get hurt *ouch*
Riddhima - I LORRRVE the positivity she has built around herself, like way to go girl ! She is following her Patidev's instructions to the hilt and letting the process heal her, strengthen her, make her feel involved in the road to recovery- I'd like to read more about the medical part of it though- how they make people take small steps to move their affected limbs or something- Its a lot in the mind but some form of physiotherapy goes in too na? Just a though LOL aiyvayin :)

she KNOWS :O man She knows something's wrong- I hope its nothing too big though!
Or if it- make him end up at the same hospital with some cuts or something tiny ok?😆 Kidding!

Take care Anku, keep healthy and Have an Amazing Diwali :)



LMFAOO first things first I love how you hyperventilate over every bit 😆 it makes me feel happy.

Coming to all your questions yes I agree, that Riddhima's medical treatment should be shown, and will be, but only in the narrative. Because if I go into details, it'll take too long for me to get the story where I need to take it now, and it'll get dragged. I had to show her mental growth, because she had been affected more mentally through the incident than physically. So I concentrated on that first.

Secondly @ the bold part - Never NEVER will I do something so unrealistic 😆 This accident is just a way to show, that life, circumstances and everyone else and Armaan as well cannot take advantage of himself. He is exhausted and reached breaking point, even though things look up for him, he is exhausted, and so I needed to show a break through for him, something that symbolizes that break point, other than him crying, because that is a sign of weakness and our Armaan isn't weak. Plus there is a little more got to do with the accident, nothing serious though.

Armaan bilkul changa hoga, BELIEVE the crazy Armaan fanatic in me 🤣

And lastly about Rahul. I am just taking his own character ahead. He has always been a confused soul. He is here basically to silence his conscience which tells him he has wronged her, but he is yet not confident about what he should do, because he believes he can't keep her happy, because he hasn't been able to so far. He is thickheaded I know, but his time here will change all that, and that's where things shall sort out :) wanted everything to be logical. Because Muskaan's gone through too much to forget everything so soon ! She shouldn't even 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Ankita nice update loved riddhima's convo with that boy hope nothing happens to Armaan waiting for the next update do continue soon take care and thanks for the pm.
Happy Diwali to u too 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Hannah.

REAAAD IT :D

ohkay, I like the new attitude Riddhima has adopted


ANKU, ARMAAN BETTER BE SAFE AND HEALTHY!!! :( Pshh he can't be dead, or in a coma or handicapped (I will allow a broken hand or leg BUT NOTHING MORE THAN THAT)- God I'm over thinking this HE WILL BE OKAY *repeatedly chants* HE WILL BE OKAY, HE WILL BE OKAY, HE WILL BE OKAY Pshh I want Armaan to be okay or you will have to face my wrath, on his behalf :P

I think in terms of character growth, this has to be my fave part in the FF... I as a reader can see Armaans ache, his fatigue with trying to juggle taking care of his wife-keeping her happy, being financially stable, having to deal with Rahul and Muskaan's relationship problems, putting up a facade with Riddhima to show that he's doing alright. I mean the poor guy doesnt have a minute to sit and think for himself or for the matter take a breather for two minutes to even rest... perhaps this accident on the pretence it may seem, will give him some time to rest. It's not ideal, but forgoodnessake he has so much on his plate that he needs to just rest.

Im sorry I spoke so much of Armaan, it's just that this part is Armaan centric for me <3

Anyway, I eagerly await the next part :D

goodnight Xo
p.s I totally abandoned my ress box ahaha xD


Hiii Hannah 😃 it is always a pleasure to see your comments <3 make me immensely happy to get your two cents !

And you're right, bang on. I just wanted to show Armaan's breaking point, the feeling of 'IT'S ENOUGH through the accident. Not for him to take a break, but for himself and all the others to realize that he can't be taken advantage of :) Not that anyone is troubling him, but a lot has been going on and like you said he needs a break !

All is going to be well really soon, and a much happier track starts a part or two later ! Hope you stick by and keep giving your opinion as you always have <3

ILY <3 and thanks a ton😃

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