Core of My Existence#2(AR Story]Part 25 Page 132 - Page 49

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SurrealFantasy thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved!
Now I'll go and read! :P
*Edited*

I have no idea how this comment is gonna turn out because I seriously don't know what crap I'm writing.🤔 Just because you threatened me. Evil.😳

Okay so firstly I, personally, find it funny how Armaan is stuck between the two on-tiff people. I mean that poor guy already has a ton of troubles and uske upar these two have their problems. And now you put him into an acci-leave that. I'll talk(Read: shout) about it later.

I do hope though, that those two resolve their fight ASAP. I mean seeing a bickering duo is alright but Muskaan being quiet and sober and Rahul hurting inside isn't really fun. I love how you describe their feelings from Armaan's point of view. We know what's going on in Muskaan's mind but from Armaan's view. I wish to know it directly from her though. IDK I think that'll make it better I guess?

And my bacha is working at a clinic, a gas station and the couple?? How much more can you torture him Anki??

But then again, Armaan is the perfect guy isn't he? He has this need to be the one who solves the entire world's problems and himself land into trouble!! It's time he takes care of himself, especially that Riddhima's not there, though Muskaan's trying her best!! Oh and for that, I <3 the Muskaan of Come.

Riddhima, on the other hand, is doing a far better job. It's perfect how you described her trying to gauge and then get rid of the child's fears. I mean that shows how the treatment is really affecting her in better way, because kal tak she wasn't even in a mood to think she could get better and Armaan had to pester her and now she is being the Armaan for someone else.

On a side note: I <3 the end part when she says Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Mallik. Never got to hear that on- screen but at least this makes up for that.

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Rahul has to pay big time to make up to Muskaan. When she starts listening to him. LMAO😆

And when are you planning to make Rahul the bubble-head realize that his thinking is as smart as the thinking that the earth is flat and Dr. Shashank is intelligent and has a heart.

Armaan and Riddhima's conversation was so cute. It's so awesome that you have kept the entire Armaan-Riddhima-ness to it. The way they banter and fight is so like them. The way Riddhima is all eating bhaav reminded me of the times she made Armaan do push-ups for forgiveness and the entire jealousy thing of the time Rahul had just entered Sanjeevani. I don't know but whenever I read COME, I'm left comparing it to the old times on DMG, probably because you've kept the part of DMG and its characters alive, instead of killing them like the CV's did. I <3 you for that!!

I would love to see the reaction of Armaan when he knows how Steven really is! 😆

And Anjali rightly earned all the curses and venom in Armaan's heart. Just protecting her dad would never be an excuse to let go off the people who trust that you would stand by them. And Armaan should have said some more harsh words to her. I mean, Riddhima would never say anything to her just because she happens to be her baddi behen. But I <3 how Armaan told her off and then reminded her of all the times Riddhima had stood up for her. Especially when he said, "For your kind information, and to help you revive your memory, your sister is apparently married to me, I am her legally wedded husband, and everything that concerns her, concerns me."

Coming to the most arrgghhh part of update, WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO MY ARMAAN?😲 I swear Anki, tune Armaan ko itna toh waise hi torture kara tune, do jobs, Rahul aur Muskaan, who jailor Shanky, Riddhima bhi nahi hai paas mein, and then "crash and bang" Accident.😡

If ANYTHING happens to him, Mumbai is gonna see the arrival of Neha to haunt you down, I promise!!

Bisous,

Neha

^^The comment is really bad but pleejj phorgive me!

Edited by SurrealFantasy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...😊

OMKAJEN!!!!😲 Accident????? no way...Armaan in an accident ?????!!!!
Arrggg Anjali why did u call him n argued with him...n he was right u ought to say sorry to Riddhima n when she needed u , u weren't here!!!n again her ego...!!!!!!!

Riddhima n Armaan teasing...nice but afterwards what happen...n the precap...Riddhima sensed something was wrong!!!
Omg on one side RM , then the job...then away from Riddhima!!! Please please don't let anything happen to Armaan...but guess that's a big turning point in the story!!! Brilliantly and beautifully written!!!

Cont soon
Take care

Happy Diwali!!!!
🤗
Pranishta
Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: caprigurl

Anku take care okay. Fight our little nemesis well- ugghhh colds :|

Rest karo, its amazing anyways how you write such a detailed FF with all that juggling of work :)



Its a break from all the stress 😆 love writing !

Anyways hope you're doing good <3 and yeah man cold is my enemy :( the worst one.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Haila, you went off :O


Ankuu! Don't shatter our dreams :'(


I never do that shak mat kar 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES :D//Will read ASAP :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res.

And I won't edit your comment anytime soon, you hurt MY ARMAAN. How dare thou? Hmph. My poor baby is hurt now :( I want to cry. Sigh, what is it about this man which makes me go so gaga and mental :/

Anyhow. Res.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Res.


And I won't edit your comment anytime soon, you hurt MY ARMAAN. How dare thou? Hmph. My poor baby is hurt now :( I want to cry. Sigh, what is it about this man which makes me go so gaga and mental :/

Anyhow. Res.


It hurt me to do that but story ke liye I had to hmph.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part. Hope armaan is fine and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ankuuu i will kill you.. tune mere armaan ka accident karwa dia... 😲 already dmg mai itne sare accidents karwa diye the bechare k..😭

@anjali.. argh ask her to get lost.. she and her dad both of them are same.. insensitive jerks😡

@Rahul and muskaan.. .. i really fell bad for them.. but then rahul is a certified Jerk😡

@armaan awww my baby i love him like any thing... 😳 poor baby is working so hard.. he is a real charmer 😳mujhe lag raha tha..ki he is going to get into an accident..😭 and BAMM .. u actually did that😡😭

@riddhima.. she is a sweetheart in this fic just like in TWOS n ATSSI ❤️
Loved her interaction with the 14yr old boy😊

@armaan & muski loved their parts too.. i love how both of them take care of each other.. and muski said it right.. they are her actual family...

Waiting for the next part eagerly...😃. and all curses to anjali shanky panky gupta😡

Love,
Vaishnavi😃
Edited by vaishiksg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing part! steven bit was cute! nd poor rahul/muski!
yikes anji armaan fight!

oh noo what happened to armaan?
will this force ridz to stand and run?

cont soon!

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