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jiyaa_m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

just love their letter awww armaan yup no work is small

cant wait RM amnasamna

update soon

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Arushi Saxena

@..Ashi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

absolutely loving the updates

m so glad u took up the financing issue...:)

update soonish Anku

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Res!

*Edited*

Aww Anki! I <3 this part!!

The best thing about COME is that it is much more realistic than other FFs(including mine!)

Well except for the fact that Armaans don't really exist in this century!! *Sigh*

The letters were adorable, so P.S I love you kinda feel which itself makes it so much romantic! The way both of them knew what the person in front was doing or his expressions or whatever just shows the perfect bond they share. And Armaan's wifey and Riddhima's Patidev made it LOL!! A bit of comic sense in romance- that's the genre of movies and books I love and for that KUDOS!! Dil khush kar dita!! (You're Punjabi right??LOL)

The money issue came up and I'm glad it did. It would be fairytale if they lasted without earning especially in the States! Armaan working at the Gas Station and not telling Riddhima was so cute! I think I'm just gonna wait forever for my Prince Charming because I don't think he's coming and even if he does I doubt he'll be anywhere near Armaan and mujhe Armaan ke alava koi nahi chalega!!*Whines*

Riddhima still did guess that something was amiss. She does love him a lot too, doesn't she?? The way she gelled with everyone and specially the lady(Armaan's spy LMAO) I think she'll recover faster than expected. Feingers crossed I hope so too!!

Muskaan and Armaan's bond is so darn cute man! The ever-dramatic psychology of Muskaan's blackmailing to Armaan wanting to get it all right with RM is something I Awwed with!!

And Rahul here?*Shocked*

I hope RM come together soon and Riddhima just begins to fly off her wheelchair into Armaan's arm. I guess that'll have to wait!!

Update soon!! I wanna know what happens to both the couples and yeah something evil with Shashank.<< My sadistic side comes out quite often!!

Bisous,

Neha

Edited by SurrealFantasy - 13 years ago

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khushi

@khush1432

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

O man!!!! Awesome part!!!!

Sahi kehete hai... sabra ka phal meeta hota hai!!!!

It is indeed a best one... Loved AR phone conversation... they know each other very very well!!! while reading each other letters... love thier emotions and facial expression tooo...

waiting for next!!!!

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annihilation

@annihilation

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Beautiful part Anku.🤗🤗🤗

I have told you already many a times, and I will say it again Anku, you're a very good writer, seriously.I see you grow & improve SO much with each part.And it goes without saying, how much I love you & your writing.The pace of your story is just about right, not too fast, not too slow.It does make sure that it gets the reader invovled, and keeps a hold on them so as to make them stick to the story.Its good to know that you are now handling the financial aspect, it adds to the realistic feel of the story (Its hard to find guys like Armaan who is so adjusting & doesnt have any ego issues).The letters AR wrote to each other & the phone convo was cute :) The kind of relation they share is something amazing! The whole of Armaan-Muski part was sweet, they way they are trying to support each other during testing times is touching :) Overall, LOVED the part.Looking forward to the next one, precap sounds interesting :)

P.S - Armaan-Anji spat? Erm, I guess they'll end up having fight over Riddhima-family issue.🤔

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Rabia Amla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Reserved..
Editedd..ankuu; youu havee beautifully written thiss update'#thee FF iss jussst amazinnng. youu aree takinn it in aa perfect pace. firssst daayy of AR apaart. arwwwhh ii jusstt AR's letter'ssz waaass simplyy cuttee. theeyy now each othaa propeerly. every little thinnn. how theey will make theirr face or gloat etc/ nooww thaatt you havee includedd abouut jobs, itss likee realityy. arwwwhh ii lovvee armaan-muskii boonnndd. theeyy are alwaysss sweeet <3
armaan iss jusst amazinnng; makeess riddhima feel comfortablee. anndd happpyy. he iss succhh aa supermaann <3 glaaadd riddhima iss findnngg all thiiss alrigghhtt; shee iss not findingg anythinn uncomfortablee. (treatmentss so far)everyonnee iss shooo shwweet to her.
ii loowwee armaan; doinn loadss of thingss for riddhima. dosentt waant anythinn to lack in her life. alwayss waant her to staayy happy. he iss aann ANGEL..!
arwwwhhh ii lovveedd AR phonee convoo'#hehehe AR bickerinnngg. onee thinnn we neededd of AR. Rahull hass finallyy reachedd AR homee. hopinn for thee besst =Dwaanntt raooll-musskii back togethaa happillyy =)
Previewww- hmm thee Armaan-Anjalii onee lookss likee aa argumenntt between botthh bouuh riddhima & her treatmentss.
updaatte soonn. waannaa reaaad <3

Edited by -RabiaKSGKaJen- - 13 years ago

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Julie

@JULIEL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

loved the update ankita and looking forward to the next!!

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

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Posted: 13 years ago

#398

omg di that was sooo awesome!!! beautiful...the letters...how can they be so much in love that they know every lil' thing about each other!!!!

how some words of one changes completely the other one's mood, bringing a smile to their face!!!! OMKAJEN 😍..I mean Armaan-Riddhima r just incredible yaar!!!!!!!!!

hmm so another problem, nice twist...interesting!!! but humara superman hai nah...😉...aww he's soo caring not wanting to stress Riddhima but when was he not caring!!! he's sooo sweet yar...but nothing's hidden , Riddhima sensed something was wrong but gave him space, for Armaan himself tells her when he's ready...

so finally Rahul's here...

hmm interesting precap...

Cont soon

Love the update to the core!!!

Take care

Muahhh

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simisim48

@simisim48

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Posted: 13 years ago

#399

hey :D Loved the part and it was not at all boring okay?:D even after AR being apart there was so much of them <3 and abosolutely loved it especially the letter, i was waiting for it :D and its good that you have brought up the financial issue :)Oh and just a question, you have written 1 week and it has just a days update so are you going to cotinue it in the next part ?

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: simikajen4291
hey :D Loved the part and it was not at all boring okay?:D even after AR being apart there was so much of them <3 and abosolutely loved it especially the letter, i was waiting for it :D and its good that you have brought up the financial issue :)Oh and just a question, you have written 1 week and it has just a days update so are you going to cotinue it in the next part ?

Yeah a little of this in the next part :) and then I'll show the other 2 weeks in the next update itself :)