RACE, THE CHASE BEGINS(RP FIC)Updated 21.08.12

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@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

the up is really interesting

so they got a dead body of a girl prithvi and his expert team is trying to find out who the girl is but as the face of the girl is totally smashed out they were not able to find out but prithvi he always find out a way when he came to know about the reasson behind the death of this girl he started finding out the drug dealers and after raiding he came to know about a person but that waass not enough for them to proceed so he and alsong with kaya goes to the watchshop to get any information about that girl and they were succeeded in their plan

they got the pic of that girl and also the boy who cam ewith her that day in that shop

but now that boy is also smashed by a truck

god knows what will happen now

plz cont soon and pm me

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Honestly whenever they follow any lead, they literally get a dead end!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

Prithvi thinks they should investigate this murder!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It was funny when that man fainted just on seeing the dead body!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Prithvi really cares for Kaya and wants to tell her to take care but stops himself in time!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Accha huya ke usne khud ko rok liya, waise bhi Kaya koi pehli baar yeh sab thode hi kar rahi hai!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳

She is a trained officer and very good at her job!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

The face has been ruined so that they cannot identify her!!!!!!

Aalekh toh forensic ke naam se hi khush ho gaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh is again lost in his dreamland looking at Akriti when Prithvi, Kaya and Akriti were discussing the case!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

The song is very nice and suits her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way you described the raid and of course Prithvi in it!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The watch of the dead girl proved to be a great clue indeed!!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

From the footage they found out how they both looked!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

But how did the people behind this find out that the CBI has found out about the boy??🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Now they killed the boy also who was the only lead Prithvi's team had got!!!!!

The case is getting more interesting day by day!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

The people behind this are very sharp but I hope Prithvi and his team are able to get to them soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Hi Madhu

Update was gud.👏👏

Case is getting interesting day by day.😊

Chalo muder mein koi lead to mila but uss ladke ko bhi maar diya gaya.The people behind this seem to b quite sharp but I hope Prithi and his team r able to defeat them.

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Preetika/Elena

@Windsof.Heaven

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Wow!!! awesome UD👏

story is getting intresting update by update

aww Prithvi kitni care karta hai Kaya ki isiliye use kehna chahta

tha ki sambhal kar kaam kare bt keh nhi pata 😳😳

update soon

Ayushi

Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Update was very interesting.

Prithvi and his team are trying their best to find the culprit. But all their leads turn out to be dead ends and so they need to start all over again. But they are dertermined to solve the case

continue soon

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snigdha suman pradhan

@sumanpradhan777

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

👏hi,i am a silent reader.but ur fic is so appreciable that i can't help but commenting.please update dear,i am dying to read more.👏

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Hi Madhu 😊

Sorry for the delayed and undetailed comments 😳😳

both the updates previous and the current ones are very good the case is in progress i hope Prithvi's and Kaya's relationship will also be on track soon😊😉😊

Continue Soon😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Great update Madhu
Ye sab link dhoondhne gaye the jahan body mile to sab ne socha ki ab to aage kuch milne se raha par body k saath mile saboot ne us ladke ko fasa hi diya jis ne ye sab plan banaya tha.
Huda k alawa Alekh ko bhi laga ki vo dead end pe aa gaye hain jahan se koi rasta nahi hai. Oh god ye Alekh bhi na is ko Akriti itne jyada pasand hai ki ye us k dreamland me hi kho gaya vo bhi tab jab saamne Prithvi khada tha.
Kaya k liye Prithvi apni concern chupana chahta hai par din par din ye mushkil hi hota jayega us k liye.
Ek wrist watch ne kaafi kuch hint de diya in sab ko. Show room me jaane se CCTV camera ki footage se ye bhi pata chal gaya ki vo dono the kaun. Par sawal ye uthata hai ki ye baat us ladke ko kaise pata chali ki CBI waale us k baare me jaan gaye hain aur us ko dhoondh rahe hain?
Ab dekho ek hi clue tha us k pass vo bhi chala gaya i mean us ladke ko bhi maar diya in logon ne. Kahin na kahin bahut bada locha hai is poore matter me.
Update soon dear.