RACE, THE CHASE BEGINS(RP FIC)Updated 21.08.12 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
so mahu jee finally u got time to up ur ff
the up is good
prithvi while keeping removing his all thinking decided to just concerntrate on his case he is worried as how bunty'skethch got stolen from his office he cant tell this neither to his senior nor to his fellow officers as this can bitter their relation and can create a rift btw them so he started to check his cabin along with others also with the detection took but he didnt get anything
here kaya who took leave for the first time is feeling really fresh and relax she is thinking about how r mom will react when she will get to know that her new acp is not and oldy but a handsome bachelor
next day thety all set out to track the person who is having bunty's mobile
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Dear

amazing UD

Story is getting interesting.😃

Cont.soon

❤️Ayushi
Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sahi yaar...its becoming interesting day by day !! keep it up !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Prithvi is very professional and dedicated and leaving his personal problems aside concentrates on the case!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
It is indeed very worrying indeed that the information was leaked from his office!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Prithvi and Yudi's conversion was funny and indeed they seem to be very good friends!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Prithvi ne yeh accha kiya ke secretly apne team members ke baare mein information nikaal raha hai else everyone would lose their trust on each other!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Your casting of Yudi as the computer expert was great!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
Kaya is resting at home much to the surprise of her mom who is taking care of her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Kaya knows her mom is thinking the ACP is someone old and she doesn't clear this misconception as that would lead to her mom looking at him as a prospective groom for her daughter!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
DCP Pathak Prithvi ko wakai bahut acchi tarah se jante hai and he knew there was more to the case than what Prithvi had said at the meeting!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Kaya had arrived at the office early as she just cannot be kept away from work and was probably missing her Raj as well!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Prithvi is concerned about Kaya and the rest of them are enjoying seeing him and Kaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Aditi teased Kaya and said that Prithvi would always keep her safe!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Prem had traced the phone with that IMEI number as it had been activated with a new SIM and they followed the signals to a house!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Prithvi's dialogue when he entered was too good!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 👏 👏 👏 👏
Aalekh's comment about seeing the mobile in the bushes was funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
The case is getting very tricky and more and more complicated now!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
Who is that woman whose body they found??😕 😕 😕 😕

Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Update was worth waiting for.👏👏

The case is getting more and more interesting now..
Who is that woman???
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part...
Happy that u updated...
Waiting for more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update was very interesting...
This case is getting very tricky and complicated. Who is this women?
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Gud update n it's great that u updated. 😊

Raj wanted to solve d case firstly in total proffessional way & abt Kaya's matter he wil solve it later. 😃

Prithvi was serious about d info which was leaked from his office but he wanted to make it clear that who was that spy n gud dat he contected Yudi.

Kaya was getting bored at home but she didn't want to give any wrong hints to her mom that's y she was behaving normally n didn't cal ne1 @ office.😛

Prithvi presented d report but his senior read his facial expressions very well dat he is hiding sumthng but Prithvi has already decided nt 2 say nethng until he has solid proof.

Kaya is at office a lot before d time, ab kya kare she was missing her Raj and see Aditi took d oppurtunity to tease her when she saw Prithvi's extra care for her .😳

Finally they have one more clue when Prem traced that phone wid IMEI no see which info they get frm dat man.😕

Who's dead body was that? I hope that man n woman were telling truth othrws they know d consequences. 😒

update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Kaya, Huda, Alekh, Prem bhi woha aa jaate hai.Kaya bhi aapni muh dusri taraf kar leti hai.lash bohut buri halat main hai,lash sharna shuru ho gaaya hai, kaafi badboo bhi aa raha tha. ladki ka chehra dekhne layak nahin hai.poori tarah se bigad chuka hai.sab aapne naak main aapne aapne handkerchief bandh lete hai.

Huda- lo, issi ki kami hi, ek aur lash, jab bhi hum kuch lead follow karte hai, anth main humhe dead end hi nazar aata hai.

Alekh- relax Huda, ( Pritvi chupchap khada hai) Pritvi, waise tumhe kya lagta hai yeh murder hamare kaam se related hai??? Jungle hai, kisi ki bhi lash ho sakti hai, crime karne ka yeh bohut hi exact place hai.hamare case ke saath iss aurat ka koi connection shayad nahin hai.to kya hum investigate kare yaa phir local police ko inform kare???

Pritvi- no Alekh, mujhe lagta hai yeh murder humhe hi investigate karna chayiye, mobile humhe yehi mila hai.

Prem- waise ACP Sir, mobile yeh ladki ka naa ho kar kisi aur ka bhi to ho sakta hai, aisa conclusion draw karna??? Hum iss ladki ke murder ko le kar ulajh jaaye aur kuch aur gadbaad ho jaaye…

Pritvi- lekin agar yeh mobile issi ladki ka hai to??? Mera sixth sense keh raha hai, humhe yeh investigation karna chayiye, agar kuch naa mile to okay.

Alekh- shayad tum thik keh rahe ho Pritvi.waise kya tumhe lagta hai yeh ladki Leena hai??

Pritvi- aise kuch bhi bolna muskil hai, chalo check karte hai, waise uss aadmi ko le kar aao, aur yeh lash dikho.

Prem jaa kar uss aadmi ko le kar aata hai, jiske direction se Pritvi aur uske team yaha par paucha tha.Woh aadmi Prem ke saath aata hai, but kisi ke kuch puchne se pehle lash ki buri halat dekh kar woh aadmi faint ho jaata hai.

Huda- lee, yeh to dekhte hi ludak gaaya, heyy bhagban.

Pritvi- yayy Prem, isse ghar ke aao, aur iska statement le lena,aur iske baare main aas paas ke logo se pata lagana.

Tab tak Aditi aur Kaya bhi khud ko recover kar liya tha, aur phir dono dead body check karne lagte hai.Pritvi ko pehle laga woh Kaya se bole samhal kar, yaa phir mat karo, lekin aapne aap ko samhal leta hai.Kaya mature insaan hai, woh aapni bhala bura khud samajh sakti hai, aur yeh extra care sirf gossip ko hawa deta hai, waise yeh sirf gossip to nahin hai, he loves her. "Ohh Pritvi, stop stop, aapni dil aur dimag ko kabu main karo, concentrate on your work Pritvi."

Kaya- ACP Sir, iss ladki ki dress ko dekh kar lag raha hai, yeh kisi party main gaayi thi, body par koi identification marks nahin hai.death shayad, gala ghotne se hui hai,gale main daag bhi hai.chehra buri tarah se kharab kiya gaya hai, soo iska pehchan, muskil hai.& yes, ladki ne aapne aap ko bachne ki kaafi kohsish ki hai. Kuch nakun ki nishan hai.

Huda- shayad iss pattar se chehra bigada gaya hai.dekho khun bhi laga hai.

Alekh- aas paas kuch khaas nahin mila, waise ek chiz samajh main nahin aa raha hai murder yaha hua hai yaa kahin aur??

Pritvi- hmm, bohut chalaki se saboot mitaya gaaya hai, saath hi pehchan.

Aditi- Pritvi purse main kuch khaas nahin hai, kuch cash hai, ek comb, purfume, lipstick, aur handkerchief chod kar kuch nahin hai.

Pritvi- lash ko Forensic main bhejo, aur jaldi se iska postmotem karne ke liye bolo.

Alekh- Forenshic… Dr Akriti… haiii main mar jawa.

In Forenshic,

Pritvi, Kaya aur Alekh aaya hai.Huda local police station main inform karne gaya hai.Aditi Akram ki aadmi ne jo ring ka description diya tha, uska sketch collect karne gaayi hai.Prem bhi abhi tak aaya nahin.isliye yeh teeno hi aaye hai.

Akriti- Sir, uss ladki ke umar 24-25 saal hai,aur usko mare hue kareeb 72 ghante ho chuke hai.death gala ghotne ki wajah se hui hai.body main koi identification marks nahin mila.

Pritvi- doc, iss ladki ka chehra poori tarah se kharab ho chukka hai, humhe aage badhne ke liye iss ladki ka identification chayiye, kuch to lead dijiye, taki hum aage badh sake.

Akriti- Sir, maine iss ladki ka blood test kiya hai, mujhe iss ke body main drugs mile, yeh ladki marne se pehle drugs li thi, cocaine li thi isne.

Kaya- doc, maine jab iski body check ki thi, tab mujhe iske body main kaafi kharoch ki nishan dekhi thi, marne se pehle yeh ladki kaafi struggle ki thi.

Akriti- yes, ki thi, mujhe iss ladki ki nail main skin ka ek tukda mila hai, shayad khuni ka hai.

Pritvi- waise doc, physical asult???

Akriti- hua hai Sir.marne ke pehle ladki ke saath rape kiya gaya hai.

Pritvi- anything else doc???

Akriti- no Sir, waise ladki ke paas kuch khaas to nahin tha, par uski dress aur purse aap chahe to le jaa sakte hai, maine sab kuch test kar liya hai.

Pritvi- waise Doc, kya aap iss ladki ka chehra phir se bana sakte hai???

Akriti- no Sir, kisi heavy chiz se marne ki wajah se chehra poora bigad gaya hai, phir se banana impossible hai, waise Sir, ladki ki pith par ek tatoo bana hua hai,love likha hua. shayad isse aapko kuch help mile.

Pritvi- thanks doc.

Akriti- Sir, aapke kehne par maine emergency main yeh post motem kiya hai, report ready hote hi, aapke table main hoga.

Pritvi- no problem doc.thik hai, hum chalte hai.

Pritvi aur Kaya jab Akriti se lash ke baare main discuss karne main busy the, tab Alekh sirf ek hi kaam kar raha tha, woh hai Akriti ko dekhna.usse lag raha tha, aas paas sirf yehi gaana baj raha tha "yeh kaali kaali aankhe, yeh gore gore gaal, yeh thikhi thikhi nazre, yeh hirni jaisi chal, dekha hai tujhe janam, hua hai bura haal."phir achanak Alekh ko khayal hua arre yeh to uski dil ki awaz hai, waise yeh Forenshic doctor ko dekh kar uske dil se aise hi awaz aa raha hai, lekin aisa to pehle kabhi nahin hua." Arre arre yeh kya kar raha hai tu alekh?? Khud ko control kar.aur kaam ki taraf dhyan de, lekin haa, ab se sirf viewer ban ke dekhne se kaam nahin chalega, aage badhna parega,kuch sochna parega.hmmm"

Pritvi- Kaya, Alekh ek kaam karo, missing person ki record check karo, aur dekho 48 ghante main 24-25 saal ki kitni ladki ke ghayab hone ki report likhaya gaya hai, sab ke family ko bulao, lash ko dikho, lash ke saath jo saman mila hai, usse dikho, shayad humhe ladki ki identity mil jaaye.

Pritvi aapni cabin main beth kar kuch soch raha hai, Pritvi Narcotics Bureau main phone laga kar drugs ke baare main puchta hai, woh log unke ek informer ke baare main batate hai.uske paas jaankari hamesha hota hai, Pritvi aaj formal dress main hi tha, Office se bahar aata hai. Dekhta hai parking se Aditi aa rahi hai.

Aditi- arre Pritvi tum kahin bahar jaa rahe ho???

Pritvi- yes Aditi, jis ladki ki dead body mili hai, uske blood main drugs mila hai, ussi drugs ke baare main pata lagane jaa raha hoon.waise tumhe ring ki design mili???

Aditi- yeh Pritvi, mil gaaya, kaafi unique design hai.waise main chalu tumhare saath???

Pritvi- no Aditi, main handle kar lunga, tum ek kaam karo, saare Jewellers ke paas jao, aur iss design ke baare main pata lagao.

Aditi- right Pritvi.lekin idhar se kaha jaa rahe ho? Tumhare car to maine parking main dekha.

Pritvi- nahin main car le kar ahin jaa raha hoon, main bike par jaa raha hoon.

Aditi- okay Pritvi, all the best.

Pritvi bike le kar nikal jaata hai, ek chota chai ki dukan ke samne aakar woh bike side main park karta hai, aur chaiwale ke paas jaa kar kehta hai (slowly) "ACP Pritviraj CBI", kaha milega woh???

Chaiwale chai banate banate,(slowly) "samne jo Chinese Resturant hai, woh par ek chuhe khana lene aayega."

Pritvi- "hmm". Yeh keh kar chaiwale se chai le kar samne bench par beth jaata hai.phir phone nikal kar local police ko team ready rakhne ke liye bol deta hai.kuch der baad Pritvi notice karta hai thodi duri par police ka ek van khada hua hai.

Achanak Pritvi ko woh chaiwala ishara karta hai, Pritvi dekhta hai, samne ki resturant se ek aadmi bag main khane ka packet rakh raha hai.phir woh aadmi paise de kar chalne lagta hai.Pritvi bhi uske peeche lag jaata hai.thoda distance maintain karke woh follow kar raha hai, phir dekhta hai, woh aadmi ek chote se ghar main ghus jaata hai.tabhi police ki jeep bhi woha aa jaati hai, Pritvi police ko bolta hai, ghar ko gher le.phir Pritvi aur ek police Officer aapna gun nikal lete hai, aur darwaje ke paas aata hai, phir Pritvi darwaje par knock karta hai.aas paas bhi kuch policewale khade the, coz un logo ko idea nahin tha, ghar ke andar kitne log the.darwaja khulte hi jisne darwaja khola tha, pritvi uske sar par aapne gun se marta hai, aur andar ghus jaata hai, baaki 4 log khana khane bethe the, woh bhi itne saare police dekh kar harbada jaate hai, aur surrender kar dete hai, woh log socha bhi nahin tha, aise police ka raid hoga.

Pritvi ek gunde ko khich kar uske sar par aapna gun lagata hai."jhooth bola to yahi par goli maar dunga.party par cocaine kaun supply karta hai????"

Woh gunda dar ke maare bolna shuru kar dete hai, "saab uska naam Gagan hai, chehra kabhi nahin dekha, woh hum se contact karta hai tarah tarah ke number se aur chota mota kaam karwata hai,bas humhe aur kuch nahin pata, party main drug supply karne ka wohi badsaah hai"

Pritvi aapne experience se bata sakta hai kaun sach bol raha hai kaun jhooth.Pritvi samajh jaata hai, yeh sach bol raha tha, Pritvi police ko instruction deta hai, sab ko custody main le, aur ghar ko seal kare.

Next Day,

Pritvi ki cabin main sabhi bethe hue hai.

Alekh- Pritvi teen logo ne missing complain ki thi, 48 ghante main, 24- 25 saal ke ladki ghayab hone ki, par kisine uss body ko identify nahin kiya.

Huda- waise uss drug dealer ko pakadne ka ek solid plan to banana parega, lekin usse kya humhe iss ladki ke baare main kuch pata chalega???

Prem- muskil hai, woh drug dealer inkaar bhi kar sakta hai, ki main iss ladki ko janta nahin.aur woh aadmi jisse woh mobile mila tha, maine acchi tarah se pata kiya, woh innocent hai.

Pritvi- mujhe lag hi raha tha usse kuch pata nahin, par kya kare shak karna hamara kaam hai,lekin sab se badi baat yeh drug dealer abhi tak hamare haath aaya hi nahin.so yeh sab soch kar koi fyada nahin, isse accha hum ladki ke baare main pata lagaye.

Aditi- par kaise Pritvi????

Pritvi- ek kaam karo, uska saman leke aao, shayad usse kuch pata chale.

Aditi ek packet leke aati hai, jisme mari hui ladki ki saari belongings hai.phir se sab kuch check karne ke baad,

Kaya- ACP Sir, dress, shoe aur purse se kuch pata nahin chal raha, koi jewellery to mili hi nahin thi.

Pritvi- lekin yeh watch kaafi new dikh raha hai, costly hai, isse pata chal sakta hai.iss watch bananewali company ke paas chalte hai.

Alekh- andhere main teer chala rahe ho Pritvi.

Pritvi- kya pata, nishane par lag jaaye.

Pritvi aur Kaya uss watch bananewali company ke Office main aata hai, woh log watch ke peeche likha number se unki jis showroom se yeh watch sell hua hai uska address dete hai.

Pritvi aur Kaya uss showroom main aate hai.

Salesman- yes Sir, main aapki kya madad kar sakta hoon?

Pritvi- C.B.I, mujhe iss watch ke baare main information chayiye.

Salesman- yes Sir, hum dekhte hai.

Woh salesman computer main record dekh kar batata hai ki 10 din pehle yeh watch becha gaya hai.

Pritvi- payment cash se hua yaa credit card se??

Salesman- cash se.

Kaya- aap log aur koi details rakhte ho???

Salesman- hum name, address, phone no. rakhte hai.

Kaya- great, no. do( kaya aapni mobile se woh no. dial karta hai, phir phone rakh ke) number galat hai, shayad naam aur address bhi false ho. Aap logo ne verify nahin kiya??

Salesman- mam, woh to sirf hamara customer hai,payment karke chale gaye, bas baat khatam.

Achanak Pritvi ka nazar camera par padhta hai.

Pritvi- yeh camera kaam karta hai naa???

Salesman- yes Sir.

Pritvi- good, humhe uss din ka footage dikhaye.

Pritvi Kaya CCTV ki footage dekh raha hai, thodi der dekhne ke baad woh salesman footage main ek ladka ladki ke taraf dikha kar kehte hai, "yehi dono the". Pritvi dekhta hai ladki ke back par waise hi tatoo hai jaisa Akriti ne bataya tha.Footage dekh kar lag raha tha dono kaafi close the.ladke ne ladki ko watch gift kar raha tha.Footage main ek jagah jaha camera main ladki ka chehra poori tarah se aaya hai, Pritvi uska ek print out leta hai, Footage main kisi bhi jagah saath wale ladke ka chehra saaf nahin dikh raha tha, phir bhi jo sabse saaf tha uska bhi print out le lete hai.

Kaya- hum kaafi aage badh gaye ACP Sir, ladki ka ek chehra bhi mil gaya, saath hi aage badhne ka ek lead.

Pritvi- yes Kaya, lagta hai kismat bhi hamare saath hai, ab iss pic ko hum hamare computer main edit karke iss ladke ka chehra bhi bana lenge.

Delhi ke traffic signal main bohut saari gaari ke beech ek laal rang ki Maruti khadi thi, ek ladka driving seat par betha tha, baar baar ghari main waqt dekh raha tha. Achanak uske cell main ring hua.woh ladka phone uthata hai."saale ek kaam bhi thik se nahin hota tum logo se, kaha tha naa sab kuch le lena, ghari wohi chod aaya saala tune, ab CBI ko tera chehra mil chuka hai. Chal jaldi se nikal le".

Woh ladka pasine se latpat tha, signal green hote hi, woh car start deta hai, woh kaafi tez drive kar raha tha.bohut hi tensed tha woh,achanak U turn leke woh aur ek rasta pakad leta hai.kaafi der chalne ke baad sadak kaafi sunsaan ho jaata hai, saher se bahar jaane ka yeh ek short cut hai.achanak uske gaari ruk jaata hai, ladka neeche utar kar dekhta hai uske gaari ka tyre puncture ho gaya hai, aur raaste par bohut saari pin gira hua hai, woh ladka kuch samajhne se pehle peeche se ek truck aa kar usse dhakka deta hai, aur bina rukhe kaafi tezi se nikal jaata hai.ladka khun se latpat aapna sar uthane ki kohsish karta hai, par uske samne andhera cha jaata hai.

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Updated.
waiting For ur comments
waise thanks a lot for ur comments
comments padh ke sach main update karne ke iccha jaag uthata hai.
love u all.
batana story kaise lag raha hai.

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