Kaliren (Maaneet ff) updated on pg69/ 3may

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

So long n so less Maaneet

With Geet getting so much pain frm Darji

Thsi is nt done

Wanna kwn past as what changed Darji

Pinky is fab esply the vamp line whch she said to Draji

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#482

dont even think abt discontinuing this FF 😡😡😡.. will read and comment once again!!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#483

loved it.. waiting to know what changed Daarji...

Maan is already thinking abt her... hope he falls for her soon!!

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: euphoric

Heya G🤗
thanks for the honest feedback😳 i understand ur concern and appreciate ur POV😛

Yup i agree for an undate coming after 4 mnths with zero maaneet, its kinda not something that everyone expected or wanted. I was prepared for it. Ashu infact had to kick me to get me to add tht one Maaneet convo So here is my justification😳

The update was so long due but then again, in last updet i had established Maan's family dynamics and this time it was Geet's turn. It was not regarding Daarji but his behaviour towards Geet and how has it influenced her. In the upcoming updates it would be of help to undertsand Geet's concerns and reactions to situations and how she's going to act upon things. So it was settling it once and for all so that i dont have to look back at it in the story.

I did try to get Maaneet here. But the thing was if i would have got tht then it would have be misfit somewhere or the other.

As far as Pinky is concerned. Pinky is definitely not a kid. There are subtle angles to her personality. She notices when Geet rubs her temple. She knows when Geet is tired. She is aware that Daarji had spoiled Geet's day. So though she acts like a kid that is to keep the atmosphere around the house and around Geet light. She understands all. She's straight-forward and speaks her mind however foolish her thoughts would be. there is a certain degree of immaturity to her character. She's isnt exposed much to the outside world.

I totally agree it did take time for me to shell out an updet. I was so out of touch and it felt alien. I had to reread a few things. So my folly

Thanks a bunch for writing your mind, G... I really appreciate it😃

Love ya❤️

Feedback i gave u wasnt from readers POV... it was from a book editor's pov...

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#485

Finally!!! u updated..I had thought u had abandoned this ff..hmmm

Enjoyed the update.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
😡😡😡

3 months and one day ke baad update and no maaneet😡

what the efffWAAA😡

I AGREE

I HAVE FORGOTTEN THE STORY

DONT EVEN REMEMBER WHEN HE SAW HER IN TEARS

WILL HAVE TO READ IT ALL OVER AGAIN

WHY IS HER DAARJI SO RUDE TO HER

HE USED TO LOVE HER SO MUCH

ALL HER FAMILY WANTS TO RETALIATE BUT SHE DOESNT LET THEM

DO UPDATE SOON AND NOT AFTER 3 MONTHS

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#487

Lovely Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#488

oh Soniya, thanks for being alive😊 thanks for the update 😊

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#489

Ah after a long time!
It was superb

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#490

MAAN bhaiya???????????????????????????🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Ok, I have recovered the shock.

But Maan jaise doodh wala bhaiyaa humare yahan hota to?😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Now about the update, so the groundwork has been done. I am sure the dynamics between the members of the two families had to be established to move the story forward.😊

Since no Maaneet (the one minute phone convo does not count), next update better be within a week😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Maan is already in love?😕 that was phashttt😆