Kaliren (Maaneet ff) updated on pg69/ 3may

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

fantastic start . kaliren is on geet's head . will wait to more to unfold .

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

now that was a FF to look forward too. Please if hook us to this ensure once in a week update kardo

Waise maan ko tho manager banadiya aapne

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: -memorable-
its wonderful
was confused earlier about who is related to who
love meera-pinky's bantering 😆
maan-geet confrontation was awesome
maan gaping at geetin ceremony 😳
why is geet so passive by the way keen to know
cont soon

Thanks dear...

the picture will be more clear with the next update😳

well wht cud Maan do, he was already phisling😆

glad u enjoyed it😳

Originally posted by: shinonome
good one... you write very well...

thanks dear😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
amazing update

Thanks Reva😃

Originally posted by: ninand
This is such an interesting start ! Wow.. I am intrigued by Geet and why she does not believe in dreams.. or maybe shes just too practical?.. oh cant wait to know more.. and Maan is already kind of under her spell.. Lovely.

DO COntinue soon ..

Hey Nina... so glad to see u here😃

Well the mystery tht is Geet Handa will be unleashed eventually😳

thanks a bunch sweetheart😛

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Sonia..me will read it soon..having a bad headache because of sun..i read ripped apart...superb..

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: shah10
amazing update

thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
wowww loved it
the way geet thought maan to be the manager
n the way she took all the wedding preparations on her shoulders
n the ned was awesome when the kaliren fell on her head

Thanks Hinal😳

glad u enjoyed the start😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: leverne
Sonia..me will read it soon..having a bad headache because of sun..i read ripped apart...superb..

Aww... no probs Reni🤗

i already replied on ur comments thr in RA... take care... wud wait to read ur take😳

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: -bansi-
Beautiful update di..!!
ohh meera n yash ki shadi..moi thought geet n maan ki shaadi......😆

Oh ho... Maaneet ki shaadi... right in the start😆 RA main part 47 pe shaadi ki baat chali hai... itna leeway thodi doongi😆😆😆

y does geet not believe in rituals n she said that she does not dream cz they r not meant for her..aisa kyun bola usne.....we will have to wait to that..*sigh*

sabar ka phal meeta hota hai baby... wait kar😳
ooppss...geet thought maan is the manager of the caterer...🤣..n both ended up arguing..

Catering manager is better na... serial main toh bawarchi bana hua hai abhi🤣

hahh..in the wedding maan was searching for her..itna utawla..abhi to ek hi mulakat hui hain maan babuwa...😆...n finally he set his eyes on her n was bowled off with her lavishing beauty...she carried off the sari really well..!! aur phir chali gayi woh.....aur munda usse dhundhta hi reh gaya...bechara...

smitten... thts all i wud want to say here😉😳

koi gal nai...aab to mulakat honi hi hain...

haan yeh toh shuruwat hai😃

ohh the kaliren falling on geet...shocked at first she was n then she realized she does not believe in such stuff any more...
moi is curious to know kya huwa usske saath.....

jaane ke liye padte rahi ye... Kaliren🤣
loved the first update di...
cont soon..!! 😳

thanks sweetheart😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ammu5
fabuls update. jst loooved it. poor a catering manager?? kaliren falling on geet. wow.

Thanks Ammu...

glad u enjoyed😃

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1
fantastic start . kaliren is on geet's head . will wait to more to unfold .

thanks dear😳

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euphoric

@euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007
awesome update

thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: heermeher
now that was a FF to look forward too. Please if hook us to this ensure once in a week update kardo

Waise maan ko tho manager banadiya aapne

Thank kus Rakhi😳

i try... i do try... u knw tht😕😆 and i do intend to hook u to this😆 atleast wud want to😉😳