SURROGATE RELATIONS Thread 3, part 27 updated 16/9

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#751

Hey darling,

Wonderful update...

I will come back n hopefully post a comment on it..

Uni has started n juss really busy rite now

Love

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Rachana

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ishrath parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#752

pls pls plsss update soon yaar awsome he confess his feeling phew i got relief

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allibr

@allibr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#753

awesome update

loved it

cant wait for the next part

continue soon

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nafisa_kazi

@nafisa_kazi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#754

bindu...
superb update...
awww...don't want geet to leave maan...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#755

It was an amazing update...

Geet's life has been very painful...i cant even imagine how she went through all this and yet moved ahead and managed to take care of her mother...are you saying she was gangraped ... by her "uncle" and his friend? Thanks for not going into the gory details and just outlining Geet's story - it gets very painful and hard to digest otherwise...I would like to kill people like Brij if I had a chance ...

Loved Maan's way of consoling her - its very painful to know that the person you love has been scarred too deep - and loved how she has totally won over the hearts of everyone in the family...

Maan's proposal was a shocker and I quite liked their convo on this - but I guess she is still not ready - Maan has to put in super effort to convince her...

😃

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Zeenat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#756

Amazing Update! She had a horrible past.. :l

Thanks for the PM & Update Soon :)

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
It was an amazing update...

Geet's life has been very painful...i cant even imagine how she went through all this and yet moved ahead and managed to take care of her mother...are you saying she was gangraped ... by her "uncle" and his friend? Thanks for not going into the gory details and just outlining Geet's story - it gets very painful and hard to digest otherwise...I would like to kill people like Brij if I had a chance ...

Loved Maan's way of consoling her - its very painful to know that the person you love has been scarred too deep - and loved how she has totally won over the hearts of everyone in the family...

Maan's proposal was a shocker and I quite liked their convo on this - but I guess she is still not ready - Maan has to put in super effort to convince her...

😃

thank u for accepting...actually i don't have it in me to describe violence...u will have another part of geet's past after a while where she soothes her bleeding soul by talking about her life in HP with maan.
oh! be ready for another shocker in the next update😉...which i may post tonight or 2morrow morn as i finish typing😡...how i wish someone wud do that bit for me😭

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: bangalores
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was checking out...but then one of the friends wanted to spare geet of the torture in this story at least...so i wasn't sure how this wud be accepted...
greater influence of JD RObb's 'In death' series where the heroine Eve Dallas was repeatedly raped as a child by her father... in spite of the trauma...she became a police officer who stands for the dead...

can u plz plz hug ur frnd on my behalf😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

the story wud have been painful..and her acceptance of maan wud have been a doubtful in that case😕😕 even tho u prefess she hasnt accepted him yet😆😆😆

by the way when are u updaeting the OS😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

and no rudra-sam thingy happening?

i ws soo hoping for them😭

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: bangalores
[how i wish someone wud do that bit for me😭

😳😳😳

why dont u tell me whats gonna happen next...i might do it😛😛😛😛😛

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
can u plz plz hug ur frnd on my behalf😳

the story wud have been painful..and her acceptance of maan wud have been a doubtful in that case😕😕 even tho u prefess she hasnt accepted him yet😆😆😆

by the way when are u updaeting the OS😉

and no rudra-sam thingy happening?

i ws soo hoping for them😭

no i said i was just doubtful of the acceptance but i haven't changed it...coz this was the concept that i had for the FF...surrogacy and all the rest was thought out after that...
imagine the concept he marries her in spite of knowing that she is afraid of marital intimacy... he is willing to wait until a time comes when she will trust him enough to accept him as her lover...and for geet to be really afraid of love making she has to go thru' that horrible past...sorry but i haven't changed that Geet was raped😳

i hope u will get to read what happens next 2 day itself...but it will be an incomplete part...to continue in another short one...

the OS i started with the immediate cause of seeing Maneet missing their chance at love in that hotel incident...i'm kind of stuck with what to write on next part😳