Shifting Sands Chapter 20 posted/pg 146

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#501

loved the update...

i was worried wat he is gonna ask her but to pose as his gf...

well not bad...

wondering the reactions from his family...

how long he can keep this pretense

pl cont soon

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#502

part 9
nice part...
this fake GF baat will change to real one...
cont soon dear...

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#503

Oh ho maan ki fake gf geet who knows kab ye fakeness reality ban jaye do update soon

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Well, you are the writer and should always stick to your version of the story...I know sometimes its difficult to balance the character of the person and yet stay connected with reality

This happens quite often not only among celebrities but also in the business world - its just that its difficult for us to accept that since we have not been brought up in an atmosphere where we deal with this on a normal basis as it is for Geet - she has her choices, and I definitely wont tag her with any extreme adjective - but pls, if she is a shrewd businesswoman, then she must maintain her dignity along with any other traits she may have - coz the whole business world is not led by young people who support this and to achieve respect through work only is not possible ...

I would say the way she loses her sense in drinks and her habit of regular intimacy with random business partners anywhere is quite a shocker...whatever her past might be...

And believe me, I would have said the same even if it had been Maan in Geet's place..the rule applies to both equally😊

Liked your comments...liked the way all of you r thinking about it...normally my FFs are like this...it will tease you to think...comment...and I love all this discussion...Geet is still an enigma...we see her as seen by Maan...and Maan of course doesnot like her...as I said he will detest falling in love with her...so i am right on the target...😃but Geet is Geet with a different flavor in this FF...

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#505

Maan is digging canal for himself...

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#506

awesoem updates dear
loved all of the parts
cont wait to read more
update soon

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#507

Geet meeting D-ma and Maan's mom?! Interesting. Can't wait for the next update!

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Srabon_Dhara

@Srabon_Dhara

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#508

waiting for the next update

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#509

great update...

now the fun begins 😆

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: goldenball

Liked your comments...liked the way all of you r thinking about it...normally my FFs are like this...it will tease you to think...comment...and I love all this discussion...Geet is still an enigma...we see her as seen by Maan...and Maan of course doesnot like her...as I said he will detest falling in love with her...so i am right on the target...😃but Geet is Geet with a different flavor in this FF...

Adding my two bits to it. First of all I agree with mystique_girl, and I believe it was the same line of thought that I was trying to convey few pages back after the last update.

The question is not whether she sleeps with other men or drinks. The question is she is doing it with conviction of mind or weakness of character.

So far the evidence is towards weakness of character.

I like grey characters, I love villains and vamps...but I can never empathize with a weak character.

But all said and done...I have faith in you Rakhi...and I will keep my patience, coz not reading the fic is not an option at all.