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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

@chapter 9

i thought maan would know about her background and family (by his resources) before asking her for pretending to be his GF

that's a good point but he somehow is trusting her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Realy like this mistery of geet and the new twis, great parts, thank u,keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well, I must say..the sense of mystery is increasing day by day ... nine chapters are over and we almost dont know anything about the characters except for brief behavioral traits...you are shaping this up beautifully - and as with all yout stories - this one has a different flavor and I always hanker for more after finishing reading the update😃

Looking forward to the reaction to Geet in Maan's house and her reaction to everything and everybody there...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Well, I must say..the sense of mystery is increasing day by day ... nine chapters are over and we almost dont know anything about the characters except for brief behavioral traits...you are shaping this up beautifully - and as with all yout stories - this one has a different flavor and I always hanker for more after finishing reading the update😃


Looking forward to the reaction to Geet in Maan's house and her reaction to everything and everybody there...😃

true,,,,right now i am setting the context...story is yet to start...so wait for surprises...roller coaster rides...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update
but u know u had Spoiled ME by giving one update daily and too in morning
I always read your update with my morning tea and enjoy both
but as you are busy so i am missing my that moment but i have no worries
bcz I am sure as soon as you will be free you will sure come to your routine
:)

and as far a story line is concern so as usual its Awesome
Edited by Arsheela - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice loving update waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
oho!so ds s d favour..!
gr8 thot yaar..she s not at all affected by him...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette


Maybe...but even then I don't see how you could have justified being drunk and tipsy.

Being independent and strong does not come from getting drunk every time you want to enjoy your drinks. I am from army background. I have seen women enjoying their drinks, sharing beer mugs with their husbands, even smoking. But they always hold themselves with dignity. They walk into a party with their head held high and straight and at the end of the night walk back straight and erect too. They like drinking, they drink...but with complete responsibility and maturity. Now that is what an independent strong woman is all about.

Drinking for "fun" and to prove you are a "modern" woman is not worth admiring if you can't hold your liquor.

All I see her is getting drunk, and then loosing her senses. Anyways, its not even professional behavior to get tipsy in business parties and put yourself up for display. She doesn't even know whats happening to her. On whose arm is she walking out or who has carried her to the car seat.

It maybe a rebellious streak in her, something in her past that caused her to act this. But that just means she is weak inside and broken due to her past. And if that is the case, then I would sympathize with her, hope that true love can make her better...but not admire her.



I am a bit late to comment, but would like to say Jazz how appropriate I found your comment specially the part I highlighted in red...This is not just about GEET but for all women - Its fine to drink but sometimes not being able to hold your drink might lead to dire consequences - the person might not know how "available" she is portraying herself to others and might land in the eyes or hands of not-so-good people - which again not only spoils her reputation professionally but might land her up in trouble personally.. there are many such cases of ten reported in Delhi...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenball

I think I am now getting under pressure to do a little bit of change in her...I don't want to do that...
I think people are taking very seriously about her sleeping..is it so un-common? Is it so unacceptable..? come on...I think all of you are not seeing the reality which is happening around...and its not only in celebreties...this is very common now in working women also in India...you can see such stories when u open the news paper/ page 3 sec...
Are women in west prostitute as they make a choice openly to sleep with some one...I think we are just making too much out of it...I know she is Geet...and in the end I will make u all happy...but i think we are giving too much weigtage to it...


Well, you are the writer and should always stick to your version of the story...I know sometimes its difficult to balance the character of the person and yet stay connected with reality

This happens quite often not only among celebrities but also in the business world - its just that its difficult for us to accept that since we have not been brought up in an atmosphere where we deal with this on a normal basis as it is for Geet - she has her choices, and I definitely wont tag her with any extreme adjective - but pls, if she is a shrewd businesswoman, then she must maintain her dignity along with any other traits she may have - coz the whole business world is not led by young people who support this and to achieve respect through work only is not possible ...

I would say the way she loses her sense in drinks and her habit of regular intimacy with random business partners anywhere is quite a shocker...whatever her past might be...

And believe me, I would have said the same even if it had been Maan in Geet's place..the rule applies to both equally😊
Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great going and few question were popping up but will wait i think it will be ansewered eventually .

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