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Rupa Roy

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Posted: 14 years ago

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luv the 2nd part, superb...
awesome OS, luvd it...
waiting to know whats their in Riddhima's past...
do update & pm me also...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Woww superb! Loved it! Cont soon please

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tulsi agarwal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

amazing update

wanna read more

continue soon

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

GUYS iam overwhelmed by the response you guys giv me in the last os thankx a ton for your such a gr8 responce.Thankx alot...

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PART 3 (last part):)
AR VERSION

Riddhima enter in the house around 4 pm.When she enters she found house very calm.She thought may be arman and alia sleeping so she prepare lucnh for her and arman .When she enters she alia sleeping sleeping peacefully on the bed,pillow are placed around her .But the thing which make her worry is the absence of the arman.She finds arman is washroom.living room,kicthen but arman was no where in sight.Riddhima when go to deriost she saw arman sitting in the chair with s a calm look,enjoying the cool breze of evening as it is almostly 5 pm.And more over whether is quite good.Riddhima smiles seeing arman like this,she goes nears him but her smile fades away when she saw her diary in arman hands that too unlock.Arman feels the presence of her and turns around and saw riddhima standing behind her with no expresion on her face.But arman knows why she is like this bcz he knows she had seen her diary.Arman whisper "riddhima".In reply riddhima says "so you read my diary"Arman was gonna say something but riddhima cut him" what are you going to say huh???in loud voice her but calm herself and say in low voice" your lunch is ready lets go and eat".But arman caught her wrist and made her look at him.Riddhima try to get out of his hold and says arman now you know every thing you had read my diary.Plz i dont wnaa talk about it.But arman made her look at him and whisper "i dont read your diary.I dont need any diary to know my wife more my love past or the reason behind her quitness.If i wana know this from your diary i would hav done this a way ago.But i want you too tell me.I wana know the reason from you not from this diary.I wana you too open with me like i open up with you.Plz riddhima today tell me why you so quite??why you are possesive about our realationship why???why you not smile like other doo??why you dont talk to your parents too much why????.Riddhima says arman'"alia will get up lets go downstairs".Arman held her more tightly by her waist and say "alia will not get up she sleeps about an hour ago,iam not hungry too much ,riddhima plz stop making excuse plz tell me plz tell me".Riddhima take a sigh and says in a low voice" arman i wana tell you this but i cant.I dont wana make my parents low infront of you and more over i wana move on from my past but i think by not letting this burden down i cant move on...
Arman sits on chair and make riddhima sit in his lap.
Riddhima put her head on arman shoulder and says ",my parents had love mariage.They both belong to 2 different cast.No one except their marriege but they fight and finaly every one except their marriage for the sake of me.My mom was pragnant with me ,so they except.But their love dont exist for long.My mother wana a boy but i ,a girl born.But my papa was happy.My mom dont care for me she never directly tell but my father guesed that.He try to make her understand but she left me alone when i was of 3 mounths, can you guys imagine she left me when i was of 3 mounths.I need my mother but she was not there for me.My father takes care of me with the help of my grand mother.After 2 to 3 weeks she came back but every thing changed she always fight with my father,my grand mother. With my fathers fathers family too.She too even say no too feeding me.My father has a very bad temper so he hits my mom many time.These things happen till many years.Slowly slwowly it become worst.I was a kid i dont understand these things.My father not leave my mom for the sake of me. But he too was a man till when he gonna face this.So he stops comming to home.I was my papa princes what ever i ask he give as iam the only child of his.But when he dont comes to home and i ask him he says he had some work.I was kid so i accept.MY mom sometimes behave well sometimes not but i get use to it and care less as i know i hav my papa.He admisioned me in best school of the city.He fullfill my every need. I was not too a good student when ever my result came and I with a sad face tell him papa i got 15 position in my class he will check my report card and say you improved from last time you got more marks from last time,dont cry this year do hard work more and get good marks:))))) on the other hand my mom will say bad words to me when my father left:(((.I never tell this to papa bcz i know papa will fight with her.But one thing always irritate me why papa not came in nights and slwoly slowly in days too and wh my mother not care of me like others mother care for their children.I know my mom fights with him but he can come for me but but When i was in class ninth i come to know why he dont came home in night,my grandmother tell me about my parents,why my mother sont care much about me ,and one more thing which broke me that he has done 2 marriage and had a son too.My world seems to end.That whole day i cry i too much cry that i got fever.When my papa knows that he came and take care of me whole night.At the sametime my mom was enjoying her friends marriage:(.When my father tell her about me she simply tell him that iam his daughter.Papa for 3 days he dont sleep.I was a bit matured so i found that in this thing what my papa fault if my mom has behaved well he dont hav left me.I never ask him about his marriege.I accept this truth but one thing was sure i chnaged myself i become like a stone i fights with every second person but when i came in 10 class i thought why fights with other.So i became i quite girl.After matric i dont hav intrest in medical but i know if i became i doc my father will be more happy so i take a risk and enter in medical field but in this decision mom too interfear she wana me to become a computer enginear, papa leav my future decsion on me but mom.He supprots me and finaly i passes the entry test papa send me to abroad to study.IN middle of my MBBS i came to know that my step mom died and her son living in my house.I felt very bad.I Dont like sharing my father with anyone but... I dont hate my mom or angry with her ,but i found her responsible foe all this.If she would hav not fight with my papa may be they dont seprate may be i nevver be like this may be we too hav a happy family may be...but bcz of my mom every thing finshed.I cant spend good time with my parents not even with my papa i missed that time used to cry whole night but there was no one to councle me no one...I never shows my emotion to anyone...so every one finds me hapyy...happy huh??? .My parents never come on any function not even in a singal funtion my parents was with me.Teacher used to ask why my parents not come in parents meeting and i used to make excuse.Me and papa used to go to short trips but my mom never come.Once she come she destroy the whole trip.. ...I missed my parents time...their love...I can never get that time which parents give to their kids .Now iam grown up but it was too late...I never get what a kid want from their parents bcz of my mom...And the thing which irritates me the sympathy of others when ever any one came to home she use to tell me again and again thaat my father done 2 married etc etc.The time has passed but the feeling of that loonless not go...
Thta why iam possesive i dont wana be like my mom.I wana good life atleast now...I dont wana my daughter too face that.I never wana discuss t to anyboddy bcz i afraid that if i tell this to any one they will make fun of me...but i think i was wrong i should hav tell you this before..I know my papa was too at fault but not more than my mom...Now i wana my this life perfect...no one understand what life i hav lead...it still hurts...
When riddhima turns towards arman.SHE saw him crying.Riddhima removes his tears and say dont cry i dont tell thid to you to make you cry plz dont cryyy...Arman hugged riddhima tightly...Riddhima cryed whole heartedly...

Riddhima was standing on derost and wacthing sun set he one hand is on her belly in which her son or may be her daughter growing.Riddhima rmebered the 4 years before incident.When she for the 1 time expres her feeling to someone and now her life change.She is happy that she got arman.From that day she never cry or rember her past.Now she is 5 mounths pragnat with a 5 year old daughter alia and loving husband.She and arman are now even more close.After her past knowing arman became more caring. Now she even talk to her papa sometimes...Life could never be more good than this...papa sometimes...Life could never be more good than this...But her mother and her step bro relation needs time may be alot time...

Guys i wana say plz guys live your time with your parents.We guys are lucky to have our parents together...Some children are not soo lucky...They have parents but cant get their love together...Guys it felt bad realy bad.I saw it by my sight or you can say that face that tooo:)
(GUYS AFTER SUCH A EMOTIONAL PART NOT HAV TO COURAGE TO WRITE MORE SO GUESS WHAT RIDDHIMA SECOND CHILD A GIRL OR A BOY HEHEHHEHE*WINK*)

if any one like my work and wana read my work and wana pm add my pm account to your buddy list or ask for the pm in your comments
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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

GUYS iam overwhelmed by the response you guys giv me in the last os thankx a ton for your such a gr8 responce.Thankx alot...

Iwana thankx these people who pressed like button and comment thankx a ton...

arsh4life, KSG-ROOP, roshni_A, arooshee, akshad, zigzagway_sadi, sweetdesire, backy, fri42911, m4manju, KaSh-Maneet-Fan, anumeha_rajat,

PART 3 (last part):)

ARSH VERSION

Shilpa enter in the house around 4 pm.When she enters she found house very calm.She thought may be arman and alia sleeping so she prepares lunch for arman and for her.Then enters quitely in their bedroom.When she enters she alia sleeping peacefully on the bed,pillow are placed around her.But the thing which make her worry is the absence of the arman.She finds arman is washroom.living room,kicthen but arman was no where in sight.Shilpa when go to deriost she saw arman sitting in the chair with s a calm look,enjoying the cool breze of evening as ot is almostly 5 pm.And more over whether is quite good.Shilpa smiles seeing arman like this,she goes nears him but her smile fades awya when she saw her diary in arman hands that too unlock.Arman feels the presence of her and turns around and saw Shilpa standing behind her with no expresion on her face.But arman knows why she is like this bcz he knows she had seen her diary.Arman whisper "Shilpa".In reply Shilpa says "so you read my diary"Arman was gonna say something but Shilpa cut him "what are you going to say huh???"in loud voice her but calm herself and say in low voice" your lunch is ready lets go and eat".But arman caught her wrist and made her look at him.Shilpa try to get out of his hold and says arman" now you know every thing you had read my diary.Plz i dont wnaa talk about it".But arman made her look at him and whisper "i dont read your diary.I dont need any diary to know my wife more my love past,the reason behind her quitness.If i wana know this from your diary i would hav done this a way ago.But i want you too tell me.I wana know the reason from you not from this diary.I wana you too open with me like i open up with you.Plz Shilpa today tell me why you so quite??why you are possesive about our realationship why???why you not smile like other doo??why you dont talk to your parents too much why????.Shilpa says arman "alia will get up lets go downstairs"Arman held her more tightly by her waist and say "alia will not get up she sleeps about an hour ago,iam not hungry too much ,Shilpa plz stop making excuse plz tell me plz tell me.Shilpa take a sigh and says in a low voice" arman i wana tell you this but i cant.I dont wana make my parents low infront of you and more over i wana move on from my past but i think my not letting this burden down i cant move on"
Arman sits on chair and make Shilpa sit in his lap.
Shilpa put her head on arman shoulder and says ",my parents had love mariage.They both belong to 2 different cast.No one except their marriege but they fight and finaly every one except their marriage for the sake of me.My mom was pragnant with me ,so they except.But their love dont exist for long.My mother wana a boy but i ,a girl born.But my papa was happy.My mom dont care for me she never directly tell but my father guesed that.He try to make her understand but she left me alone when i was of 3 mounths, can you guys imagine she left me when i was of 3 mounths.I need my mother but she was not there for me.My father takes care of me with the help of my grand mother.After 2 to 3 weeks she came back but every thing changed she always fight with my father,my grand mother. With my fathers fathers family too.She too even say no too feeding me.My father has a very bad temper so he hits my mom many time.These things happen till many years.Slowly slwowly it become worst.I was a kid i dont understand these things.My father not leave my mom for the sake of me. But he too was a man till when he gonna face this.So he stops comming to home.I was my papa princes what ever i ask he give as iam the only child of his.But when he dont comes to home and i ask him he says he had some work.I was kid so i accept.MY mom sometimes behave well sometimes not but i get use to it and care less as i know i hav my papa.He admisioned me in best school of the city.He fullfill my every need. I was not too a good student when ever my result came and I with a sad face tell him papa i got 15 position in my class he will check my report card and say you improved from last time you got more marks from last time,dont cry this year do hard work more and get good marks:))))) on the other hand my mom will say bad words to me when my father left:(((.I never tell this to papa bcz i know papa will fight with her.But one thing always irritate me why papa not came in nights and slwoly slowly in days too and wh my mother not care of me like others mother care for their children.I know my mom fights with him but he can come for me but but When i was in class ninth i come to know why he dont came home in night,my grandmother tell me about my parents,why my mother sont care much about me ,and one more thing which broke me that he has done 2 marriage and had a son too.My world seems to end.That whole day i cry i too much cry that i got fever.When my papa knows that he came and take care of me whole night.At the sametime my mom was enjoying her friends marriage:(.When my father tell her about me she simply tell him that iam his daughter.Papa for 3 days he dont sleep.I was a bit matured so i found that in this thing what my papa fault if my mom has behaved well he dont hav left me.I never ask him about his marriege.I accept this truth but one thing was sure i chnaged myself i become like a stone i fights with every second person but when i came in 10 class i thought why fights with other.So i became i quite girl.After matric i dont hav intrest in medical but i know if i became i doc my father will be more happy so i take a risk and enter in medical field but in this decision mom too interfear she wana me to become a computer enginear, papa leav my future decsion on me but mom.He supprots me and finaly i passes the entry test papa send me to abroad to study.IN middle of my MBBS i came to know that my step mom died and her son living in my house.I felt very bad.I Dont like sharing my father with anyone but... I dont hate my mom or angry with her ,but i found her responsible foe all this.If she would hav not fight with my papa may be they dont seprate may be i nevver be like this may be we too hav a happy family may be...but bcz of my mom every thing finshed.I cant spend good time with my parents not even with my papa i missed that time used to cry whole night but there was no one to councle me no one...I never shows my emotion to anyone...so every one finds me hapyy...happy huh??? .My parents never come on any function not even in a singal funtion my parents was with me.Teacher used to ask why my parents not come in parents meeting and i used to make excuse.Me and papa used to go to short trips but my mom never come.Once she come she destroy the whole trip.. ...I missed my parents time...their love...I can never get that time which parents give to their kids .Now iam grown up but it was too late...I never get what a kid want from their parents bcz of my mom...And the thing which irritates me the sympathy of others when ever any one came to home she use to tell me again and again thaat my father done 2 married etc etc.The time has passed but the feeling of that loonless not go...
Thta why iam possesive i dont wana be like my mom.I wana good life atleast now...I dont wana my daughter too face that.I never wana discuss t to anyboddy bcz i afraid that if i tell this to any one they will make fun of me...but i think i was wrong i should hav tell you this before..I know my papa was too at fault but not more than my mom...Now i wana my this life perfect...no one understand what life i hav lead...it still hurts...

When Shilpa turns towards arman.SHE saw him crying.Shilpa removes his tears and say dont cry i dont tell thid to you to make you cry plz dont cryyy...Arman hugged Shilpa tightly...Shilpa cryed whole heartedly...

Shilpa was standing on derost and wacthing sun set he one hand is on her belly in which her son or may be her daughter growing.Shilpa remebered the 4 years before incident.When she for the 1 time expres her feeling to someone and now her life change.She is happy that she got arman.From that day she never cry or remember her past.Now she is 5 mounths pragnent with a 5 year old daughter alia and loving husband.She and arman are now even more close.After her past knowing arman became more caring. Now she even talk to her papa sometimes...Life could never be more good than this...But her mother and her step bro relation needs time may be alot time...
Guys i wana say plz guys live your time with your parents.We guys are lucky to have our parents together...Some children are not soo lucky...They have parents but cant get their love together...
Okay guys this was the last part of my OS. i hope you guys like it...Plz guys give your lovely comment plz...its a hearteist request...
(GUYS AFTER SUCH A EMOTIONAL PART NOT HAV TO COURAGE MORE SO GUESS WHAT SHILPA SECOND CHILD A GIRL OR A BOY HEHEHHEHE*WINK*)
if any one like my work and wana read my work and wana pm add my pm account to your buddy list or ask for the pm in your comments
maria:)<<<<<

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Update...

Really really superb and emotional..

Shilpa has to suffer so much pain in her childhood...

ufff..hate her mom..just because shilpa was girl she hated her ow child...

I m happy that she shared her past with armaan and now her present and future will be bright with her family..

Loved the os...

For the pm...

Will be waiting for next one...

Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 14 years ago

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Rupa Roy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

awesome part, luvd it...
Armaan is really sweet & luv Shilpa alot, he didn't read the diary without her permission...
Poor shilpa has suffer alot because of her parents, she never got luv in her life...
thank god Armaan is here with her, who luv her alot & will be with her every time...
luv the way Armaan console Shilpa & now they are happily living...
do write more & keep smiling:-)...

Edited by KSG-ROOP - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Hey:)

omg what a sad and emotional OS, while reading it my eyes got moist and poor Riddhima has gone through sooo much. feeling really sorry for her, how can her own mother don't like her???😡 but her father was sooo nice. The good thing is that now she will get lots of love from Armaan and their cute daughter.

Really sorry for not editing my comment for soo long

tnx for the pm

take care

Edited by miss93 - 14 years ago